Introduction to Alchemy

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“Wouldn’t we all?“ the Mortalborn asked as Plia stated that she’d be lucky to possess even a fraction of Yvithia’s talents and influence. In spite of his actions on the battlefield in Oscillus and his alliance with the Etzori, he respected and admired the Immortal’s intelligence. Yvithia was likely one of the few beings in Idalos that surpassed him. There had even been a time, when he had been a young man, when he had desired her blessing and wanted to become hers and sought the company of her children, the Eidisi.

“Good”, he remarked as Plia insisted that she wasn’t taking credit. He had to admit, he had been worried for a moment. “And you are not a disaster, Miss Yishnai Velenar. I don’t understand why you insist on constantly belittling yourself. Such an attitude serves no purpose in my opinion”, he told her. As she held his gaze and made that promise, he raised an eyebrow, surprised, before he nodded. He would hold her to her promise, he decided, and make sure that she would not break it. For now, he had to teach a class though. Dealing with Plia’s lack of self-confidence had already taken up entirely too much time.

“Done looks exactly like this, Miss Thrace”, the Mortalborn said and pointed at the contents of the pot, ignoring the mixed blood’s snigger, although he considered it to be slightly inappropriate. He stood between the two girls, hands clasped behind his back and watched as the mixed blood added the silk to the mixture, only to spin around abruptly as the rest of the students started to chat, as if they were already getting quite bored.

“Apparently”, he remarked somewhat sarcastically. “I am unknowingly teaching a group of master alchemists that have already heard what I’m talking about before and have thus decided to talk among themselves rather than watch the experiment. Perhaps I have underestimated you after all and need to make this class more challenging. Can anybody tell me how you would go about creating an item that enables the user to tell when a lie is being told in their presence and which reagents you would use? No? Then pay attention, ladies and gentlemen.”

“Otherwise, I may be forced to assign some extra homework in order to make sure that you understand the topics that are being discussed this class”,
he said – threatening students with homework almost always worked – before he turned around in order to supervise the experiment once more. As Plia removed the silk from the mixture, he quickly procured a bowl. “Put it here, Miss Yishnai Velenar”, he told her before he filled a container with cold water and placed the bowl into it so that the silk would cool down faster. “It should be safe to touch now”, he said after a few moments and touched the silk with a finger in order to make sure that such was indeed the case.

“Miss Yishnai Velenar, I want you to take the cloth now and hold it up. Miss Thrace, do you still have the dagger I gave you? Please take it and try to stab the cloth. The rest of you, watch!” he ordered the class. If everything had gone as it should, the dagger would not be able to pierce the silk that now had a silvery shimmer due to being infused with iron, and the students would hear the sound of metal hitting metal.
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Constantly belittling herself... as if he knew her long enough to make that sort of judgement. Not that he was wrong of course, she did put herself down quite often. She didn't want to admit that he was right though and she was sure that she didn't need to confirm his thoughts; somehow, he understood her with great certainty. Strangely, he seemed to look straight at her, see her for everything she was and yet he wasn't running the other way or looking down his nose at her. Still, she didn't have any real purpose to belittling herself, he did have a point there.

Oddly, the man was making her feel a little better about herself to-trial. His no-nonsense attitude was making her re-evaluate herself, something that was possibly needed. She evidently wasn't quite as useless as she'd first anticipated and she hadn't been allowed to slink off and hide behind her desk as she would have liked to do. To-trial, she was being made to learn in a hands-on way and while she'd made a mistake, she'd learned from it and wouldn't make it again. Plia was making progress and it was all thanks to Doran. Perhaps her parents had made a wise decision when they suggested that she take this course. If Doran was a regular teacher then she might well come out of her shell. She wasn't entirely sure if he was simply helping out with this class or if he would be teaching it full-term; she hoped that it would be the latter.

The mixed blood was careful to note how the mixture looked so that she'd have some idea of the appearance of a completed alchemic mixture for future reference. If she was going to take more classes like these then she didn't want to be utterly clueless again.

She was able to follow instructions, listening to the whispers of her classmates until the professor turned on them, chastising them in a way that made Plia flinch. Obviously, she wasn't the only one cowed as the room became silent, no one willing to have their voice heard now in case they were picked on to try to answer that question. How to detect when a lie was being told in your presence? Was that something that could be done? Plia was fairly sure that she wasn't alone in wondering about that one. She wouldn't have thought it was possible so she certainly couldn't hazard a guess about how it could be done. However, she could see Astrid shifting her weight on her feet, fidgeting a little on the spot and she wondered if the girl knew.

If his words hadn't been enough, the threat of homework certainly ensured that everyone's lips remained glued, even Astrid's, as everyone sat up a little straighter, suddenly all too interested in the desk where not all that much was happening yet. Plia was as eager as anyone to avoid homework, simply because she felt utterly out of her depth but also in this case, she found that she didn't want to disappoint him by doing poorly on anything he assigned. All the same, she found that for once, she couldn't remain quiet; her curiosity was getting the better of her.

"How do you make an item like that? Can it be done or was that a trick question?" she questioned Doran quietly as she stirred the silk, biting her lip as she realised that it was probably a poor time to ask; he wasn't really in a position to chat with her, especially when he'd just told everyone else to be quiet. She made a small gesture as if brushing him off, trying to convey 'never mind' as she turned her attention back to the task at hand. Better to not get distracted.

When the time came to remove the silk, she smiled gratefully at Doran as he offered her a bowl to put it in, placing it with care to prevent any hot liquid splashing off of it. Heat seemed to billow from it, especially when he sat the bowl in cold water, its temperature dropping rapidly as the half-Eídisi watched it in fascination. Still, she was glad that he tested its temperature first so that she didn't have to burn herself in front of everyone; that might well have pushed her into the realm of tears. Plia plucked it up, shaking it out so that it unfolded fully and held it aloft, waiting as Astrid approached with dagger in hand. There was a moment's nervousness as she watched the approaching blade and she flinched when the stab came, jumping a little as there was the distinct clang of metal striking metal. She glanced down.

The silk was whole and undamaged.

"Wow, that's amazing," she gasped out, holding it up so she could have a better look at it, shaking her head in wonder. Her eyes roved the material, seeing the silver shimmer of the metal infused in it. She ran her fingers over where she thought the knife had struck but there didn't seem to be any sign of damage. She shook her head again, eyes turning to Doran with clear awe in her features as the end of class bell tolled through the Academy. There was shuffling at the desks, the students gathering up their belongings. The bell was dismissal enough, a sign that they needed to move on to other classes or to enjoy time off between classes. They had a desire to escape quickly but the half-breed didn't have the same sense of haste.

"It's fantastic. How does it work? How did it... I don't... I don't understand how it all works," Plia murmured, looking between the silk and the professor.

"C'mon, Plia. Stop ogling and get your stuff," Astrid sighed, smacking the girl in the arm as she passed, heading for her own desk.

"But I- we haven't been dismissed yet!"
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“It was not a trick question, Miss Yishnai Velenar”, the Mortalborn replied, pleased with the fact that his class had calmed down again. He didn’t mind her question particularly as it was a good one. “I tend to avoid those. Such an item can definitely be made. It requires great skill and one of the most potent reagents though – the blood of a Blessed. I’d wager that there are but a handful of alchemists that are capable of creating such an item”, he spoke. He was one of those alchemists, but he chose not to brag about his skill to his students as he considered such a thing to be inappropriate. They would learn who he was soon enough anyway. For now, he continued to supervise the experiment.

Miss Yishnai Velenar, he noticed, seemed to have stopped that foolish behaviour, a sign that there really was hope for her. As she held the silk up, and Astrid stabbed it, he stood next to them, arms clasped behind his back, and watched closely. “This”, he remarked once it was over, slightly amused as well as pleased with how awed his students were. “Is only one of the things that an alchemist can do. Tomorrow”, he informed them, just as the bell began to toll. “I will explain the scientific principles behind what you just witnessed.” Having said that, he turned around in order to clean up the table and pack his books, only to notice that Plia and her friend were still there.

“As I said, Miss Yishnai Velenar”, he told her. “I will explain how it works tomorrow. If you cannot wait until then, you may visit me during my office hours this afternoon, between three and five”, he offered. In the beginning he hadn’t been at all sure about the young mixed blood, but he approved of the fact that she had stayed behind rather than trying to leave the classroom as quickly as possible, like her colleagues, as if studying alchemy at the most prestigious university in Idalos was one of the worst things ever. She reminded him a bit of himself, when he had been a student, several centuries earlier, in that moment, although he had never had that unfortunate tendency to put himself down.

“The bell should be a clear enough sign that the class is over”, he remarked in a somewhat cool tone and added, “Don’t forget to take the silk with you, Miss Yishnai Velenar. It belongs to you now. Use it well. It may just save your life one trial. Miss Thrace”, he said and turned to face the other young woman for a moment. “Your friend and you may leave the room now. I’ll see you again tomorrow at the same time.”
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  • Skill:
    • Discipline: Remaining aloof even though many people obviously have the hots for you
    • Leadership: Give people the chance to volunteer before you pick on people
    • Leadership: Controlling a group of young people
    • Linguistics: Discerning someone's heritage based on their name
    • Medicine: Apply cold water to a burn
    • Persuasion: Reaffirm praise so that the recipient believes it
    • Persuasion: The threat of homework convinces students to behave
    • Physics: Cool the contents of a metal bowl by putting the bowl in cold water
    • Rhetoric: Make your argument difficult to refute
    • Socialisation: Making it clear to a group of people that you disapprove of their behaviour
    • Teaching: Make sure that the topic of your lesson is clear
    • Teaching: Demonstrations are a good way of showcasing what a subject can do
    • Writing: Using a blackboard
  • Non-Skill:
    • Plia Yishnai Velanar (NPC): A half-Eídisi, half-Ellune woman who lacks confidence
    • Plia (NPC): Seems to have a crush on you

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What started off as a little modbomb so you could get a class under your belt ended up having some quite interesting results! Not only did Doran handle himself quite well and impress me, he's managed to pick up a definite admirer in Plia Yishnai Velanar! As such, you can expect to see her in future classes now that he's an associate professor and you're free to write her of course - she's a city NPC!

Doran managed to amuse me quite a bit here, particularly when he thought about his own superiority. I laughed when he decided not to show off by saying that he could make a lie detector. It's not like he brags or shows off at any other time or anything, haha! An enjoyable thread and I hope that I managed to keep things at least a little bit interesting! A pleasure to write with you, as always.
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