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1st of Cylus 717

The capital city of the of Rynmere, here is seated the only King in Idalos.
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1st Trial of Cylus, 717th Arc
Andaris Farmlands
“Aren’t you cold?”

The wagon wheels reminded him of the ones they used at the mills along the river, though instead of churning up water between their wooden spokes, it threw snow back into the air from which it came. Like it was trying to return it—‘please no, we don’t want it’—with no chance of success in sight. No, the snow kept falling and the wheels kept turning. It would reach a point when the latter would soon find itself incapable, but this was not that point. So the wheels kept turning, moving ever closer to the destination of the day and of life itself.

Vex forced himself to look away from the ground, pull himself away from his thoughts, to answer the man beside him who was driving the wagon. Truth be told, he looked more a beast than a human, the way has bundled up beneath the furs, with only his hands naked to the night air while they guided the reins. Beside him, Vex wore only a cloak, black with a red lining, over his standard outfit, which stood in sharp contrast to his companion. Yet he was warm, comfortable even, despite the layer of snow collecting on his shoulders and in his hair. “Not in the slightest,” Vex replied with a small grin, more a baring of his teeth than anything else, as he looked over at the man beside him.

Vex could see a light pass behind the man’s almond eyes, a shudder that began behind those round orbs and then spread across his face and body. Shock. Disgust. Fear. Vex was not sure which of these emotions fueled the reaction; he only knew that they were often experienced by men and women who found themselves in his presence. And not just because he was an Aukari, either, though that was certainly a driving force. No, this man was unnerved by the kind of man who sat beside him as they trudged through the snow, with only torch light to guide them through the dark.

A torturer. That was who Vex was and who he had been asked to be tonight.

But, of course, it was all subjective. Torture and art was divisible only by the individual, and this was a particular medium that Vex took real pleasure in. To him, it was music and dance to him; the only difference came in which instruments he wielded to create the show. It was a display that not everyone understood, and that was okay. Choice defines one’s place in the world, and the two men in this horse-drawn wagon had made their choices. That was why one drove and the other sat, waiting for the real work to come.

Before too long, the silhouette of a cottage could been seen ahead, a pair of torches marking its own place in the night. The driver flicked the reins and the horses responded, carrying the wagon straight towards the front of the home. It wasn’t too long until they drew to a halt outside the small building. Outside stood another man standing beneath fur-lined clothing, hand resting on the hilt on a sword at his side, guarding the entrance to the home. He too had made his choice, one could say, though it was debatable whether he realized at the time what that choice meant. Perhaps he regretted his decision. Perhaps he did not question it at all. There were certainly questions to be asked about the whole situation. Why was there a need for a guard outside a farmhouse? Why, too, a torturer?
Vex snatched up the bag sitting between his legs as he climbed out of the wagon, dropping with a thud onto the snow beneath him; metal clanged against each other within the bag at the impact. He nodded to the guard and stepped through the front entrance, leaving the other two men to their choices. The door shut behind him, and with it, the darkness of the night; within, he was blessed with light, and the warmth of a roaring fireplace.

And a woman, tied and gagged to a hard-back, wooden chair.

She watched him with wary eyes as he crossed across the room, dropping his bag on the top of a dining table. A few strands of her curly brown hair had fallen across her brow, and she was not unable to even knock them away. Her dress, green in color, was of a nice cut but had been torn slightly one sleeve and stained across the abdomen area. There were black bags under her eyes, and despite her best efforts, she had an air of exhaustion about her. She had been a captive for a while now, it appeared; Vex respected her resolve, at least, even if it did not appear to be in her best interest in the long run.

Vex looked around the room and its sparse furnishings. Besides the table, their was a kitchen area that he assumed was well-stocked for the Cylus season, a bed that was most likely for the guard outside staying with her, and a door that most likely opened to a small bathroom. It was a cottage of simplicity; no wonder the Faction had chosen it. It was relatively close to Andaris, but not close enough for anyone to hear the screams.

A particular piece of furniture caught his eye: a three-legged stool in the corner of the room. Vex retrieved it and set it opposite the woman. He gave one last glance around the room, before nodding; he had stalled long enough. It was time to do what he had come here to do.

Vex reached behind himself and unsheathed the blade from its harness on the small of his back. Stepping towards the girl, who did not flinch at his approach, he gently cut the gag away from her mouth, tossing the cloth aside. The woman took the opportunity to take a few unfiltered breathes of the air while Vex took a seat on the stool, propping his feet up on the wooden rings between the legs.

“Let’s begin, shall we?”
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"Who are you?"

Vex had expected the stony silence from the bound woman, who stared at him with fierce determination despite her predicament. She had been given ample time to build up this front of resistance during her captivity, and a straightforward question was no where near enough to break this wall down. Walls required tools, and tools he possessed. They were but an arm’s reach away. He knew that. She did too. But, instead, they sat in the silence of an unanswered question. Waiting. Watching.

“Tis not a difficult question, I think,” Vex continued, swinging his legs aimlessly above the floor. “Unless, of course, you’ve hit your head at some point. Wham, right on the noggin’, and suddenly you don’t remember who you are anymore.” Vex cocks his head, staring at the woman from the new angle. “But you don’t look like you’ve suffered any misfortune at all. Oh sure, your pretty little dress has been torn, its gotten a few stains on it there weren’t there before all this. But hey, sound body, sound mind, right?” Vex chuckles, half to himself. “That last part must be nice. I wouldn’t know, myself.”

There was, to use a cliché, a method to Vex’s madness. Here sat a woman who possessed the potential of a hefty ransom for her safe return, should she prove as important as she appeared to be. Therein lies the crux of the matter: a woman whose identity is unknown that could not—perhaps, to better put it, should not—be severely harmed, lest she die and lose all worth whatsoever. And so Vex filled the empty air with not screams, but a monologue in hopes that a chord could be plucked and an agreement struck.

But then, there was a point where even this woman’s well-being will be sacrificed to satisfy another’s frustrations.

She remained silent.

“I cannot help but get the sense that you believe you have the high ground in our little stand-off,” the red-haired bandit says as he finds his feet, moving around the stool towards the dining table. “A stand-off in which you cannot even, well, stand in. No, all you do is sit there with lips pressed shut, leaving every person who has sat opposite of you to their own devices. Left them wondering just who you actually are.” He begins to rummage through his backpack. “The daughter of a wealthy nobleman or merchant? A poor girl from Lowtown who simply had the misfortune of wearing her nicest dress in the wrong place at the wrong time? How are we to know if you’re worth anything at all?”

Vex felt her eyes on him as he pulled out a small hatchet from the bag, rolling it around in his hand. “I have my ways, of course.” He turns to face the woman, who eyes were locked on the weapon in his hand. He smiles, tapping the flat portion of the hatchet against the side of his skull. “Of course, as you’ve probably already ascertained, I can’t just start hacking off limbs until I can truly say whether Daddy is going to pay for the safe return of his sweet daughter. His whole daughter. So you sit in silence all the more, hoping that eventually I and my associates will give up and, what, let you go?” With a sudden heave, Vex hurls the hatchet at the girl. “WRONG!”

Despite having no real ability in throwing weapons, Vex was satisfied by the dull thud of the hatchet against the woman’s left knee. She was struck by the flat, metal side, so no blood was drawn, though it would certainly leave a bruise. That alone made Vex smile. The hint of fear behind the girl’s eyes was just a bonus.

Vex moved closer to the girl. “The thing is, sweetie, you have overestimated the strength of your hand in our little game. You think that I am so reliant upon the outcome of our little exchange that I would not risk . . . cutting it off prematurely.” Vex was right beside the bound woman at this point. He bent down, placing his hand on the woman’s knee as he reached down to retrieve the hatchet. He squeezed the girl’s leg and blessed by the sight of girl wincing in his periphery. “But there are countless others girls out there who would be more than willing to sing me the song I want to hear. Those not willing,” Vex looked up from his crouch into the woman’s eyes, “will be forced to sing a different one entirely, one that they won’t find so pleasing to their ears. Or to any part of them, really. And, if we’re forced to reach that point, I won’t give a fuck about who you are anymore.”

And there it was: fear. Just the barest hint of it, a crack in the resolve, the resistance. He knew he should press further, to break her down before dawn struck. But then again, this was Cylus, and daylight was a long, long way off. So why rush?

It was from this vantage point that Vex spotted something he hadn’t seen before on the woman: the metal links of a necklace around the woman’s throat. Reaching up, he wraps his fingers around the chain and gives it a yank. “And what do we have here?” he asks, holding the object up to the light.
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The chain snapped with a single tug; a few pieces clattered off the woman’s shoulder and dropped to the wooden floor below. Vex stepped back to admire the piece in the light. Instead of metal, a thin wooden block hung on the chain with two pine trees etched into the flat side. Other than that, it was unadorned. Definitely not worth anything to the casual individual, but Vex suspected it had some sentimental value to the woman. He was especially intrigued by the carving itself, which felt familiar to the red-haired bandit. He couldn’t quite place it, but there were quite a few families in Rynmere who could distinguished themselves from one another by symbols like this. He just had to figure out which one.

Of course, that required him to get out of this cottage to investigate. Unless, of course, the woman decided to cooperate with him, though that still didn’t seem likely. She was watching him examine the necklace, looking for any sign of recognition on his part. She seemed to have recovered from her earlier fear, now that there was space between them again, and didn’t look as if she was interested in disclosing anything further.

So be it.

“The lost pup appears to have a name tag,” Vex said with a wide grin across his face, pocketing the necklace. “I just can’t wait to start asking about those pretty little trees on the front. Hope you don’t mind if I have to get a little rough with the people I meet.” He wanted her unsettled, wondering the lengths he would go to acquire the answers he sought. As of right now, he couldn’t hurt her, but that limitation ended the moment he left this little cottage. This was for both of them, then. For her resistance, and his frustration. A combination that would soon be paid at the expense of another.

“Or, if you’d like to spare me the effort, and some innocent person unnecessary pain, you could just tell me who you are.” Let her think she still had some bargaining chip, some control in their little game. Vex went about his business while he let that statement hang in the air, moving over to his bag to put his hatchet away. His work, at least for tonight, was over. He, so fittingly enough given the current locale, was like a farmer who had planted a seed. For now, all he could do was wait and see just how they would grow from here.

And, besides, it wasn’t like she was going anywhere.

“Very well, then,” Vex said, snatching up his bag and moving to the door. “I’ll see you again soon enough, sweetie.” He didn’t even give her a second glance as he stepped through the door to the white night.

The guard glanced at him from his place right beside the fire. “Keep her alive until I get back.” Vex said as he looked glanced out into the dark night; the wagon had probably been taken around the back of the house where the stable was. “I’ll try to send word the next time I’m coming, weather permitting. Try to have her tied up whenever I’m coming. They’re easier to work with that way."

Vex made a move as if he was about to leave, before turning back to the look at the guard. “I imagine you’re going to get bored being snowed in outside the city. You’ll probably wish you had a nice woman to keep you warm at night . . . don’t hurt her too much, would you? Bruises, sure, but nothing that will leave a scar.”

The guard grinned a near-toothless grin. He understood the implicit permission he had been given, and he didn’t wait long to disappear into the cottage as Vex began his trudge around to the wagon. He was well out of earshot, on his way back to Andaris, when the first cry echoed through the night. But what could he do, even if he had heard?

She made her choice.
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Name: Vex

Knowledge: (9)
Negotiation: Being Kind and Relatable Helps People Want to Agree With You
Intimidation: Flaunting a Weapon To Make People Fear You
Intimidation: Threats Can Do Wonders if Believable
Intimidation: Sometimes The Harsh Truth is Enough
Interrogation: Questioning With Kindness
Interrogation: Logic to Make People Talk
Throwing Weapons (Hatchet) : Sometimes You Just Have to Throw It and Hope It Hits
Torture: Squeezing The Wound To Cause Pain
Torture: Threatening Loved Ones

Loot: +1 Necklace
Injuries: N/A
Fame:
-1 General Bad Deed (Threatening the Girl with Psychological torture)
-1 General Bad Deed (Breaking the Girl's Necklace)
-1 General Bad Deed (Hitting the Girl's Knee with Hatchet)
-1 General Bad Deed (Giving Permission to the Guard to Hurt the Girl)
-1 General Bad Deed (Hearing the Girl Cry But Doing Nothing)
Total: -5 Fame

Devotion: N/A

Story: 5/5
Collaboration: 0/5 (Solo)
Structure: 4/5
Magic: These points may NOT be used for Arcana

Comment: Hello Vex! <3 I actually really enjoyed this thread, it was executed very well and I find Vex's character to be rather interesting. I tried to find what knowledges I could, and I hope you enjoy all the negative fame! XD There's just a few notes to make:

There were a few little issues, which is why I took a point off structure. For example:

"To him, it was music and dance to him; "

and

"A few strands of her curly brown hair had fallen across her brow, and she was not unable to even knock them away."

and

"Her dress, green in color, was of a nice cut but had been torn slightly one sleeve and stained across the abdomen area."

and

"Besides the table, their (there) was a kitchen area"

and

"Oh sure, your pretty little dress has been torn, its gotten a few stains on it there weren’t there before all this."

As well as other small flaws here and there. Nothing major, but I'd suggest reading your sentences a little closer in the future to make sure they flow nicely. I also noticed that you switched the way you'd say things. Like... One sentence you'd say words like, "begins" instead of "began" and "finds" instead of "found", but the next you'd use "pulled" instead of pulls. Little things like that, which affect the consistency of the post.

Just one more note: Aukari aren't distinguishable from humans. The only tell is their red hair, or if they hold onto someone for a long time and their unnatural heat becomes apparent. Or, for example, if they bleed on someone, as their blood would feel like boiling water or really hot coffee. You can read more on this here: here. I didn't deduct any points for this, but I ask that you keep it in mind in the future.

If you have any concerns or comments, please feel free to PM me. <3
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