• Mature • A New Dawn (Part Two)

[Octopie]

Unlocking Your Rewards!

Llyr

Such an easy blusher, the mix of teacher vs crush was interesting to read. There is a lot of magical theory here and it was fun to read, you did very well keep a balance of description vs action here that kept things flowing smoothly and it is fun to watch Llyr catch feels for Doran. Good job!

Points

15

Can be use for magic? Yes or No

Knowledge

Skill
[*] Transmutation: Quality: A Comfortable Warmth.
[*] Transmutation: The pressure of ether on the air.
[*] Transmutation: Innate knowledge of ether.
[*] Transmutation: Galvanize.
[*] Detection: Magic: Ether being cast in general location.
[*] Teaching 1/5: Magic: A New Dawn (Part Two) (21 Vhalar 719)
[*] Teaching 2/5: Magic: A New Dawn (Part Two) (21 Vhalar 719)
[*] Teaching 3/5: Magic: A New Dawn (Part Two) (21 Vhalar 719)
[*] Teaching 4/5: Magic: A New Dawn (Part Two) (21 Vhalar 719)
[*] Teaching 5/5: Magic: A New Dawn (Part Two) (21 Vhalar 719)

Non
NA

Loot

NA

Wealth

NA

Renown

NA

Injuries

NA

Doran

There was a lot of things here for Doran to learn, and maybe a bit more about his teacher It will be interesting to see where he takes his magic. Since this was a level up, I would have liked to see a bit more magic being practiced, as opposed to just being spoken about but it was well-done all the same.

Points

15

Can be use for magic? Yes or No

Knowledge

Skill
Transmutation: Identity
Transmutation: Cannot affect organic or undead matter
Transmutation: Isn't permanent
Transmutation: Brilliance: Creating an orb of light
Transmutation: Brilliance: Can be seen by everybody
Transmutation: Quality: The sensation of burning
Transmutation: What flaws are
Transmutation: Allows you to sense when the one who initiated you uses their magic
Seduction: Putting an arm around someone's waist
Seduction: Reacting to someone's kisses and touches

Non
NA

Loot

NA

Wealth

NA

Renown

NA

Injuries

NA

Skill Level: Appropriate