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A Relaxing Morning Jog - Part 9 (Graded)

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Ashan 69th of Arc 711

Directly following the events of this thread

The shock of the sudden stab of pain jolted the animal back into rage. A bellow escaped as it swiped at the armor-clad human, spittle mixed with foam and blood send flying. Sharp and long, the beast’s claws whistled through the air. However, Jeesa did not dodge, did not block. She instead prepared a new attack of her own, winding up for a heavy haymaker. Her ether reserves decreased further as the claws failed to even leave as much as a scratch on the breastplate, but not as much as before. Despite the glowing red runes enhancing its strength, the bear was clearly weakened, hindered by its wound.

All the better.

Her readied attack was to be a left hook to the wounded spot once more, which the drillmistress hoped would crush some organs. The heart, preferably, but collapsing a lung or puncturing one with a shard of rib was good too. However, the bear sensed the danger. It managed to position its armored shoulder into the path of the strike, the rounded shape deflecting some of the damage. But not all. The armor cracked like an egg, unable the withstand the impact, which reached the joint underneath without issue. Thick or not, bone was bone still. The armor was sturdy enough to perhaps even take a couple blows from a similarly enhanced bear –though Jeesa very much believed those blows would have to be blunt-force, as the claws were tough and sharp enough to take huge chunks out of trees—but there was an enormous difference between such a strike and one of her own.

Namely, her fist was way smaller. All that force behind a small object was devastating, armor or no. True, in ordinary situations Jeesa would have had no way to break straight through, but the bear had neatly handed her the method of defeating itself. Or rather, the mage who’d created it had.

The bear staggered away, bleeding and limping. Most of the fire in its eyes was gone, replaced by fear. It was considering if it should flee or not, head swiveling in several directions while huffing and growling uncertainly. Jeesa took away its choice, launching herself at the beast, aiming another blow, this time going for its nose. At the last moment, the surprised creature lowered its head, the helmet-like bone structure protecting it successfully. As she’d expected, her normal power –which was akin to a sledgehammer—could not break or pierce the armor. She backed off a little, and then a little more.

And the beast mistakenly believed victory was ready for the taking. It bit through the pain, and backed away itself. Just a little bit, increasing the distance between them, but not for long. The sigils on its forelimbs grew brighter again as it broke into a sprint, propelling its body with unusual gait. Still, it was fast nonetheless, almost throwing its body forward. Jeesa, having retreated quite a bit, began to dash forwards as well, on a collision course with her foe. Each of the drillmistress’ strides pushed her farther than it should, her own strength runes combining with the properties of her armor. Neither party slowed down. Not that they could, each going too fast to react in a way that would allow a complete avoidance of the other.

Within mere moments, they clashed.

It was rather anticlimactic, really.

There was no shockwave, there was no loud smack as the both of them smashed their bodies against each other. One moment they were running full sprint, and the other they weren't. Jeesa had come to an immediate stop within the blink of an eye, all kinetic force absorbed by her armor. She did not feel the impact. Yet the bear did. It wore no Sovereign Ward armor, and the third law of motion still held sway over it. The beast recoiled as it collided with the immovable Jeesa. It was hurt, staggering backwards, but not very much. Dazed for a second, as if it'd run into a wall.

For but a moment did the opportunity last, a tiny opening that passed by quickly. Jeesa seized it. The drillmistress stepped in like a boxer, hand already shooting forward. An open palm strike struck the beast right on its unprotected black nose, hard. That alone would be enough to make it flinch if it’d been an ordinary punch. Enhanced with strength runes and kinetic energy of the equal opposite reaction, Jeesa could easily cave in its entire snout, probably smashing the brain.

But the drillmistress’ armor contained all the force, all the kinetic energy generated by both herself and the bear smashing into each other at full speed. That momentum, that impact, released all at once right in the beast’s face. She held nothing back.

It completely obliterated the monster’s head, even destroying the upper part of its ribcage and clavicle. As chunks of skull and fur and flesh rained down all around, the massive bear slumped and fell. For a couple seconds, its form twitched and spasmed, but it did not get up again. The glow of the runes on its body faded, then vanished completely.

The beast was dead.

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Re: A Relaxing Morning Jog - Part 9

From:
Marion Jeesa
Head Instructor for Cadet Group 6
Officer Barracks Section C, no. 24
Training Grounds West Quarter

To:
Overseer Julius Ratchman
Central Office Block 4, 2nd floor, office no. 156
Training Grounds North Quarter


Time of writing: Ashan 70 of arc 711

Regarding:
Report of the incident which took place in the North Woods on Ashan 69 of arc 711


The morning of Ashan 69 of arc 711, around the 5th hour, Cadet group 6 set out for an endurance drill towards the North Woods, accompanied by myself and three assistants. Permission for this was requested two weeks in advance, and approval was received five days later. We were to head in the direction of Hiladrith for one day, set up camp, and return during the second (for details please refer to my previous report discussing the general overview of this operation, attached to the aforementioned request submitted two weeks prior).

Around noon, we arrived at a clearing within the North Woods, which we was deemed a suitable location for taking a short break. As per regulations, myself and my assistants took subsequent turns standing guard and patrolling the area. During one of which claw markings of a large ursine-like creature were found. Some of the cadets also discovered similar signs, along with bear scat. Based on the size and depth of the prints, the quantities of scat, and frequency of the markings, we believed this to be an abnormally large male bear.

Our resident field specialist expressed concern about the length of the claws on the prints, as well as the depth of the markings. Large chunks had been taken out of trunks of several trees, rather than superficial scratch marks being left behind. As a precaution, we decided to pack up and leave immediately, however we were attacked by the beast itself before we could.

The suspicions of our field specialist were accurate. The creature was not normal. It possessed armor-like bone growths covering its back, head, and limbs. Its teeth and claws were elongated. Visual inspection revealed there to be teeth and claws of another creature attached to the creature’s own. Removal was difficult. Samples of the claws, teeth, and bone armor were submitted to the research department for analysis. Based on personal experience, I believe the creature was experimented on with Graft. Additionally, it was further enhanced with Lucis runes. Resistance, strength, regeneration.

Likely, this creature is the result of an experiment conducted by a mage or a group of mages. It is unknown if there are any more of these in existence. Though we suspect the mage responsible for the Lucis runes on the creature had to be in the vicinity during its rampage, no traces of such an individual have been found. As such we must assume that the suspect is still at large until evidence disputing this assumption is uncovered.

During the encounter with the creature, the cadets displayed great promise for the future. My assistants were able to quickly have assume a defensive formation to stall the creature while I made preparations for disposal of the creature. Archers were deployed to try and take it down in the meantime, but due to its armor the effect of these assaults was limited. Moreover, light wounds from arrows that did get past the armor healed near instantaneously. Unfortunately, the creature did break through the formation eventually by leveraging its enhanced strength and claws to tear through the shield wall. While its subsequent rampage resulted in 38 injured, sustaining casualties was barely avoided. However, the extent of the injuries range from light to critical. Regeneration runes were employed on those with life-threatening injuries to provide first aid, with positive results. As of the time of writing, the heavily injured are hospitalized, but are no longer in critical condition.

Once my preparations were complete, the creature was swiftly eliminated.

Should such creatures be encountered in the future, extreme caution is advised. Its threat level is very high. The creature’s armor is tough enough to withstand blunt-force impacts of sledgehammers. It’s regeneration ability is very potent, able to heal minor wounds near instantaneously, and prevent major –otherwise potentially lethal—injuries from killing it or hindering significantly. It is plausible that the creature’s pain sensation is dampened. The strength runes on its forelimbs allow it to bound forward at greater speeds, and generate enough power to overwhelm a Sovereign Ward in a couple hits when activated. Additionally, the alterations to its claws seem to have reinforced them. They proved tougher and sharper than is natural, capable of damaging the metal of our shields even when the strength runes were not activated.

However, as this creature is artificial, it seems not accustomed to its enhancements. In particular, it did not seem capable of making full use of its armor, still exhibiting the behavior of an ordinary bear. The proposed strategy for taking it down would be to shoot it with heavy weaponry while it attempts to intimidate by standing on its hind legs. Ordinary arrows or bolts will not suffice. Aiming for the heart is advised. Option two is to target the head. While its neck is armored, the throat is not. Likewise, the top of the head is armored, but the face is not. Shooting an arrow through the socket might be lethal. However, we were not able to achieve this, and the effectiveness of this strategy cannot be confirmed.

Complete decapitation has been confirmed to be effective, as this was the method with which the creature was eliminated on Ashan 69 of the arc 711.

This concludes the report.


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Comments: I’m glad that the monster bear is dead!

I thought that ending things with a letter from Jeesa was a great idea. The letter was well-written and interesting, and providing a summary of sorts after such a long series was helpful.

As I told you in my review before this one, I can’t award you XP though as the thread was written from the perspective of Jeesa. It sounds as if you might just have been looking for a way to finish this series even though your PC was injured anyway though.

In that case, I appreciate that you did so, and I liked this conclusion.

Please let me know if you have any questions.
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