A Hunter's Review
Fridgar
Story 5/5
Collaboration 5/5
Structure 5/5
15/15 Experience Awarded
Overstepping:
As consequence of Fridgar's overstepping for using Chrysalis to heal from the brink of death, he will suffer a moderate headache that comes and goes for the next several Trials.
Knowledge:
Swimming: The Current Beneath
Swimming: Around Waves
Swimming: Anger Paddling Technique
Swimming: Managing Your Breathing
Swimming: Swim, Don't Swallow
Unarmed Combat: Fighting The Largest Foe In All of Idalos
Unarmed Combat: Punching the Murdersnoot of a Shark
Unarmed Combat: Striking the Gills of a Fish
Endurance: Nearly Dead
The Ocean: Fek You
Moon: Moon
Linguistics: Speaking With a Mer
Linguistics: Language Barrier
Fame:
Devotion:
Loot:
+1 Great White Shark Totem
Magic: This experience may be used for Magic (Becoming)
The One and Only Moon Moon
Story 5/5
Collaboration 5/5
Structure 5/5
15/15 Experience Awarded
Knowledge:
Fridgar: Lothar With The Grace of a Walrus Mating Ritual
Detection: Of Ripples Via Tentacles
Telepathy: Mind Fek
Intimidation: Telepathic War Cry
Pole Arms (Spear): Stabbing Hard and Fast
Immortal: Fek
Discipline: Not Freaking the Fek Out When A Big Lothar Grabs You
Linguistics: Language Barrier
Linguistics: Misinterpreting Emotional Contexts
Fridgar: Enthusiastically Abandoned You
Fame:
+1 Good Deed (Aiding the strange Fek-worshiping man against a shark)
Devotion:
Loot:
Notes:
Very amusing thread! I loved the portrayal of both characters, and there was a lot of humor to be had in the way Fridgar learned to swim, and Moon's misinterpretation of Fek, the way he used it, and the Immortal Fek. In Idalos, the word Fuck is Fek, so I gave you knowledges according to that interpretation.
I had a hard time finding lores for Moon, toss me a PM if you think I missed something.
PM me if I missed something, or if you have any questions or concerns!