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[Lysoria] Corruptions

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Saun 35, Arc 702

“No, I won’t do that!”
Victor Amielle, the second son of the Lord of Lysoria, proclaimed in a firm tone of voice, crossed his arms over his chest and looked his old, white-haired tutor Master Martinus defiantly in the eyes. “I get that I have to study etiquette and politics and such because I might have to represent my family at all kinds of events and father and Stefan can’t always be there. This here doesn’t serve a purpose though! What does meditation have to do with anything?”

“A lot, my lord”,
Master Martinus who had just entered the library where their meetings usually took place a few bits earlier and announced what they would learn that trial replied. He looked thoroughly unimpressed. His voice had become even more unpleasant in the three arcs since he had started to teach Victor. It sounded as if someone were dragging their nails across a chalkboard. Sometimes, Victor wondered if he talked like that on purpose, but either way, he refused to let it have any effect on him anymore.

He was almost a grown man now!

“You said that you want to become a mage when you are old enough which is something that I will not discourage you from, my lord. Mages have always had a high status in Lysoria, and you seem to put some effort into your research of the various domains. There are certain precautions that you should take though, my lord”, Master Martinus spoke. In other parts of the world mages were discriminated against or even killed because of what they were; in Lysoria on the other hand, they had always been able to walk about openly and show their mutations, without having to fear anything.

“Exactly”, Victor who sat opposite the old man at the table in the center of the library replied, ignoring the last sentence. “I want to become a mage and not fall into a trance or stare into space. I don’t want my mind to become empty – I want to use it! I want to do things with it and not relax and nearly fall asleep!” he finished and crossed his arms over his chest, looking a bit smug. In his opinion, he had come up with a few convincing arguments. Master Martinus couldn’t possibly disapprove of his wanting to use his mind.

He was a teacher, after all!

“Meditation is about more than just entering a trance”, Master Martinus replied in an incredibly dry tone of voice. “Having so much power at your disposal and having your soul be affected in such a way can be terrifying. Meditation helps keep you focused under duress – and it can prevent overstepping as well”, he pointed out.

“Well, I don’t plan on overstepping”, Victor retorted.

“You can’t always decide to not overstep”, Master Martinus shot back in a sharp tone of voice that he would not have dared to use in front of one of the older members of House Amielle. A moment later, he let out a sigh and remarked, “I can’t change your mind, can I? We won’t meditate then – as long as you take a look at this book here”, he added, opened his leather book bag, removed a book from it and handed it to Victor.

The young noble furrowed his brow as a read the title, “Corruptions. Why is there a woman with a weird green growth on her face and an eye on her forehead on the cover?”

“I won’t tell you, my lord”,
Master Martinus replied. “Just take a look. We will talk about the book tomorrow, and if you still don’t want to learn to meditate then, I’ll accept your decision, and I'll make sure that your father won’t have a problem with it either.”

Victor thought that he looked incredibly sly when he said that.

“Now then”, Master Martinus said a few moments later. “Since we apparently won’t meditate to-trial, would you mind telling me the names of the noble families of Ne’haer, who currently rules them and what they are known for? As a member of House Amielle and future leader, you should know who your political allies and enemies are, my lord.”
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Once his impromptu politics lesson that might actually have been interesting if Master Martinus hadn’t made him repeat what he said quite as much was over, Victor retreated into his room and lay down on his bed in order to take a look at the book – and find out what the weirdly deformed woman had to do with his desire to become a mage.

He didn’t start reading at the first page though; instead, he leafed through it in order to find out if there were any interesting pictures in it. What he saw, exceeded his expectations by far. There were people with their fingers and toes fused together – or fingers and toes sticking out of their head, their chest or any number of other body parts that fingers and toes definitely didn’t belong on.

There were people with animal body parts or plant-like growths, people with skin that had been turned to metal, wood or stone, people that were so deformed that they could probably barely move anymore – and people who had been turned into living skeletons of sorts. It was …

… it was disgusting and scary even though Victor who fancied himself a grown man and quite brave on top of it didn’t want to admit it. He moved back to the first page and actually started reading. Apparently, meditation could help prevent those things from happening – or at least render the effects a little less severe. The book didn’t explain how exactly though, at least not in any way that he understood.

He would have to ask Master Martinus the next trial. Maybe his tutor would be able to explain things properly to him. Except … except that Master Martinus would be far too happy if he told him that he wanted to know more, after all. He couldn’t allow that to happen! He didn’t want to admit that he had been wrong. Maybe … maybe he could just claim that he had hated the politics lesson so much that even meditation seemed to be preferable?

Or maybe he could reluctantly agree to a meditation lesson because Master Martinus had seemed to be so excited about it, and he didn’t want to make his favourite tutor ever unhappy?

He’d be a benevolent and generous noble!
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When Victor went into the library the following trial and told Master Martinus what he had decided, he had the feeling that the old man looked right through his deception and knew exactly what was really going on – which wasn’t fair in his opinion. How did he know?

He looked at Master Martinus.

Master Martinus looked at him.

A moment later, the tutor spoke, “Now then, my lord, what I want you to do is close your eyes. Close your eyes, try to relax and take a few deep breaths. Inhale and exhale slowly and deeply and try to focus on the sound of my voice. Try to not let anything …”

“Why do you want me to close my eyes?”
Victor interrupted him, looking kind of irritated. “That doesn’t make any sense to me. Wouldn’t it be better if I saw what I did with my magic? I might make a mistake. My spell might go in the wrong direction, I might accidentally hurt someone, or …”

“Well, yes”,
the old man conceded and sighed. “At your level of experience, you will likely not be able to focus if your eyes are open though – or if you move too much.”

“Please close your eyes now, my lord, focus on the sound of my voice, and try to not let anything distract you. Try to let go of all your thoughts and feelings”,
he told him.

Victor met his gaze before he inclined his head sharply and did as he had been told. He closed his eyes, tried to relax and inhaled and exhaled deeply. It actually made him feel calmer and more relaxed, strangely enough. And what more, Master Martinus’ scratchy voice made sure that he couldn’t concentrate on anything else, such as the thoughts and feelings that he supposedly had to let go of (he didn’t have any at the moment though, apart from a certain amount of frustration).

At the same time, it made staying relaxed quite challenging though. He wondered if Master Martinus was aware of that. Should he tell the old man to try and change his voice?

He decided against it. His tutor might be offended and become even stricter than he usually was, and Victor didn’t want that to happen. He just wanted to learn to meditate so that he could become a mage as soon as he was eighteen. Or maybe he’d already ask his father to find him a mentor when he seventeen. Seventeen was more than old enough in his opinion!
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I think this is the first time I've read a Victor thread, and honestly, it took me too long to realize this was a flashback. I was certain that Victor was a grown man, so I was very confused when Victor's non-adult status was brought up.

Anyway. A very solid thread. It's a fun read, and I think Master Martinus is a wonderful NPC. You did a great job capturing the classic teen immaturity in Victor, as well as his spoiled brat side.


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