Hear That?

[Hina]

I am quitting standing trials. It is clear that nobody here wants to rp with me nor do I think I will be missed in the slightest.

If you are a newbie, you should know that mods and even other players can ruin your character at any time and for any power trippy reason. In my time here, I have had mods simply not reply to my posts for weeks and weeks at a time, had my character waste half a season because a mod made up a rule to have my character thrown in jail, been made pregnant against my will, and also been assigned penalties against my will just because a non mod thought to give me a hard time. You can do a bit of research and find that only staff members have accomplished anything noteworthy in this game, because they are the only ones immune from random bullshit.

I would not reccomend this game to anyone looking to accomplish anything in a roleplaying game.

[Aegis]

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Thread Review

I personally prefer if you'd use more realistic and personal writing terms. A few things you write is quite offputting as a reader. These are not in violation of any rules or the like, they are just stylistically in poor taste.

"Hina had been in a bit of a rut ever since her last level up."

This is one mild example. Just pointing it out as a way to improve your writing.



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Review Request Link: viewtopic.php?f=242&t=16103&p=114547#p114538

Hina

• Skill Points - 10 (May be used for Hone)
• Renown - 0
• Skill Knowledges
  1. Meditation: Ignore all the noise
  2. Endurance: Enduring ear pain
  3. Hone: Learning the rune of sound
  4. Cosmetology: Primers makes makeup last longer
  5. Cosmetology: Blending makeup into skin
  6. Cosmetology: Picking a shade that matches your skin
• Non-Skill Knowledges
• Items and Other Rewards

Player 2

• Skill Points -
• Renown -
• Skill Knowledges
• Non-Skill Knowledges
• Items and Other Rewards

Final Notes

If you have any questions, please PM me.

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