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Praetorum
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Undertow
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Undertow mutation allows for easier swimming
Defiance: Undertow mutation will not allow me to be still in the water for long
Defiance: Using defiance to ask the water to be still
Endurance: Getting caught in a riptide
Swimming: Swimming is easier with new mutation
Swimming: Turning requires some delicacy now

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Mild overstepping, loss of elemental control (water) for 3 trials
Renown: Prae lost control of the element in public, so maybe?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Defiance
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pain is Naer
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Extreme ultraviolence by Max and Nav.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Discipline: There's a fine line between stupidity and courage.
Discipline: Enduring extreme pain.
Endurance: Taking a massive beating.
Etiquette: You need to respect the powerful and influential.
Etiquette: How not to talk to a lady.
Flying: Your take-off can be interrupted with a swift chop to the wings.
Flying: It's hard to fly without functional wings.
Intimidation: Weaklings aren't scary.

Loot: I don't think he had anything worth taking for nav or max.
Injuries/Overstepping: Disclocated wings will take time to heal.
Renown: 10 got beaten into the snow by Nav.
Wealth Points: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 125
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

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Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Qit'ria
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Profession: Huntsman
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Memory in Cycle
City/Area: Lake Lovallus, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: This was abandoned by the moderator. I was given permission to self moderate it as a series, as linked in the thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
[*]Caregiving: After roughly a year, babies can sleep through the night
[*]Dancing: Twirling on the tips of your toes
[*]Detection: The scent of flowers while dead often indicates spirits
[*]Discipline: Watching vigilantly over her sleeping child
[*]Discipline: Nothing is permanent, so enjoy it while you can
[*]Materialization: Oozing through a door like water through earth
[*]Materialization: Feeling big and small simultaneously
[*]Materialization: One piece needs to go first
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
word count: 126
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Tio Silver
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Profession: God of Curses
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tiki Army
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Necromancy: Fetches
Necromancy: Animating Fetches
Necromancy: My Tiki Soldiers
Puppetry: What a puppet looks like
Puppetry: Tiki puppets
Puppetry: The walk of a manipulator


Loot:
  • 26 Battle Puppets (fetch type thralls)
  • 26 low quality, tiny spears
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 64
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Tio Silver
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The House That Tio Built
City/Area: Yaralon / Goblin Sanctuary
Notes/Warnings: Goblin murder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Attunement: Frequency of Territe wells
Defiance: Building a hovel
Unarmed Combat (Da'riya): Pushes and Pulls
Unarmed Combat (Da'riya): Trips and Kicks
Unarmed Combat (Da'riya): Lure
Unarmed Combat (Da'riya): Throws

Loot:
  • 1 hovel.
  • 1 territe well.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 99
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Tio Silver
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Umbrella- ella- ella- eh- eh- eh-...
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alchemy: Making an alchemical umbrella
Alchemy: Using volcanic rock as a reagent
Alchemy: Using oil as a reagent
Alchemy: Using pig's trotters as a reagent
Alchemy: Heat-resisting properties.
Chemistry: Oil's water resistant properties.


Loot:
  • 1 Masterwork+ Cane Sword
  • 1 "Neverweather": an alchemical umbrella that it resistant to heat.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: -10: price of masterwork+ cane sword.
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 114
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Kasoria
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: IV. Game Changer
City/Area: Mistral Woods, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Wee bit of Violence

More of a filler piece before Da Big Fight, but some sweet magic showing off. Thanks!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation: Forming Shields of Hardened Air
Abrogation - Shield: Takes Around Half a Bit to Form
Abrogation - Shield: Capable of Blocking and Breaking Missiles
Abrogation - Shield: Crafting a Shield the Size and Shape of a Round Shield
Abrogation - Shield: Needs to be Maintained by Constantly Feeding Magic into it
Psychology: Using Magic to Demoralize an Enemy Unprepared to Face It


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Not yet
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Np
Magic Experience?: Yes
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word count: 117
Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Eliza Soule
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Joined: Thu Jun 14, 2018 11:20 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Profession: Artist
Renown: 283
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Starlight and Tragedy
City/Area: The Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Drawing: Infusing sentiment into a drawing
Drawing: Use of shading, lines and curves to draw the eye to a subject
Drawing: Overuse of detail can ruin a desired effect
Drawing: Finishing and preserving a charcoal drawing
Painting: Use of oil paint for saturated, glowing color refraction
Painting: The importance of titling a work of art

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 91
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Wald Lowca
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Joined: Sat Feb 09, 2019 12:14 am
Race: Human
Profession: Hunter
Renown: 300
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cutting up a Fox
City/Area: White Forrest Viden
Notes/Warnings: What does the title say, yes that is what happens
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Butchering: Processing a Fox
Butchering: Cutting a tail off properly
Leadership: What Ylfa Looks for in a leader
Field Craft: Poles from trees
Cooking: Cooking a fox
Animal Training: Try and understand your animal

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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word count: 81
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Balthazar Black
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Joined: Fri Jan 18, 2019 1:15 am
Race: Human
Profession: Leader of The Black Cats
Renown: 1885
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Flayer in the Fields Part 1
City/Area: Outside Yaralon, the Crags
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Martial Art - Strong, rigid movements
Defiance - Work with small steps, not big ones.
Defiance - Manipulating Water from a Source
Defiance - Cleaning the air
Defiance - Movement aids control
Defiance - Scorn Doesn't Last
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Light to medium overstepping with earth. (Important for part 2)
Renown: No.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes
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word count: 79

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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