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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: IV. Agnus Dei (Part Four of Four)
City/Area: Quacia, Ashvane Estate (The Gleam)
Notes/Warnings: Conclusion of four-part solo series. Tyara being somewhat crass.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Personally delivering the debt payment for someone else.
Logistics: Setting up a meeting time.
Persuasion: Agreeing to help in exchange for something else.
Deception: Suppressing pain when recent injuries are unknowingly touched.
Deception: Keeping secret Tyara’s requests for money.
Deception: Agreement to keep a secret.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: irritation of any injuries from previous threads in the solo series.
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 108
Please — consider me a dream.
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Kaelrik
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: fire and blood
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Feels.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fridgar
Acrobatics: Running up walls.
Acrobatics: Kicking off walls for extra distance.
Acrobatics: Front fall.
Acrobatics: Throwing yourself into the upright position.
Flying: Taking flight from mid air.
Meditation: Reflecting on the state in which you run out of emotional energy.
Meditation: The desire to stop feeling.
Meditation: Recognizing when it's time to emotionally distance yourself.
Running: Running up walls
Running: Leaping off walls
Teaching: Showing your student what to do.
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Alistair: Has another Havendal
Alistair: Initiated Kaelrik into rupturing
Kaelrik: Has more faith in you than you do
Kaelrik: Fearless
Kaelrik: Good hearted
Kaelrik: Tries hard
Kaelrik: You mentored him in training
Kaelrik: You Kindal's other Havendal
Kaelrik: Has feelings for Alistair
Kaelrik: Doesn't understand
Kaelrik: Thinks you're blind

Kaelrik
Strength: Press-Up’s and their proper form
Strength: Sit-Up’s and their proper form
Strength: Squats and their proper form
Strength: Burpees and their proper form
Strength: Knowing the proper diet for muscle growth
Strength: Overhead Press
Strength: Weighted Curl-Ups
Strength: Deadlift’s and their proper form
Strength: Cool-down exercises
Endurance: Pushing through a prolonged workout
Defiance: Requesting the Earth to warn of approaches
Defiance: Requesting the Air to warn of approaches

Fridgar: Can turn into a Sohr Khal
Fridgar: Can turn into a Llewnos
Fridgar: Feels trapped in relationship with Alistair
Fridgar: Can see with more than just his eyes

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore muscles, maybe?
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 266
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Kaelrik
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: what maketh a man
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: More feels.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alistair
None Requested.

Kaelrik
Alistair: Proposed to me
Alistair: Wants to build a family with me
Alistair: Gave me my freedom
A Vow to Become a Forgesmith


Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 63
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Kaelrik
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Pack your bags we're leaving
City/Area: Quacia, then flight to Helice
Notes/Warnings: Fridgar is a dick.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Kaelrik
Fieldcraft: Preparing belongings for a journey
Tactics: Discussing the points of an upcoming conflict
Tactics: Focusing on the task at hand
Rupturing: Blinking in close quarters
Defiance: Utilizing the winds to assist in flight

Fridgar: Can fly long distances
Fridgar: Exudes an aura of menace and terror
Fridgar:…dick.
Fridgar: Took me on my first flight

Fridgar
Deception: Weaving lies into truths.
Deception: making someone feel desired when they aren't.
Flying: Much easier without fighting the wind.
Stealth: Your footsteps are quieter on carpet.
Stealth: Watching someone sleep.
Stealth: The easiest stealth kill would be to take them in their sleep.
Stealth: Easier done with a good control of your body.
Stealth: Even weight distribution.
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Kaelrik: Naive
Kaelrik: Agreed to go to Helice with you on a moment's notice
Kaelrik: Agreed to fight with you
Kaelrik: You were his first time... flying
Kaelrik: Handy for long flights

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience?: No.
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 194
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Interloper: Part II
City/Area: Quacia, Helice
Notes/Warnings: Nu
Requested Rewards:

Alistair
Knowledge:
Scapegoat: Can be used to turn a crowd against someone
Scapegoat: Shifts anger towards a specific thing
Scapegoat: More effective if anger is already present

Loot: Nu
Injuries/Overstepping: Nu
Renown: +10 for publicly speaking against Megaris' council and helping free an important local figure
Wealth Points: Nu

Collaboration: Nu
Magic Experience?: Nu
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 75
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hunt for a Hunt of a Hunt
City/Area: White Forrest, Viden
Notes/Warnings: Arrow in eye syndrome
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hunting: Snow Foxowls are very skittish
Hunting: Snow Foxowls have sharp senses
Hunting: Snow Foxowls Whistle to attract mates
Hunting: Snow Foxowls need to be approached quietly
Stealth: Sneaking up on skittish animal
Stealth: Sneaking up on Snow Foxowl

Loot: 1 Snow Foxowl
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: -
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 80
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Walking The Path Part 2
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: It is a long fight sequence and at the end sexual activity is implied but not explicit.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: - Unarmed Combat: Avoid your opponents strengths
- Unarmed Combat: Strike First, Strike Hard
- Unarmed Combat: Kick with Heel
- Unarmed Combat: No one wins with a headbutt
- Unarmed Combat: Attack limbs to loosen grip
- Endurance: Mind Over Matter
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Cut over right eye, bruising, soreness.
Renown: I don't think it is worth any?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 100

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Good Camp is Hard to Find
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership: Deciding when to turn back
Leadership: Knowing whose opinion you have to care about
Leadership: Delegating tasks
Mount (Kheledzan): Making a tight landing
Mount (Kheledzan): Using defiance to help take off
Defiance: Listening to the water to find a stream

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Ehhhh maybe? For being sort of promoted in his company.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Defiance
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 89
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hog Hunting
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Softening then hardening earth to trap an enemy
Defiance: Changing the direction of a breeze so you’re downwind of an animal
Endurance: Getting stabbed by a boar tusk
Hunting: Identifying boar tracks
Hunting: Boar vitals are further forwards and downwards
Ranged (Crossbow): Shooting a trapped target

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: None
Wealth Points: +1 WP (Ashan Wealth Thread)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Defiance
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 84
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: III. Speaking the Language
City/Area: Mistral Woods, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Strong Language, Sweet-Ass Violence

Kasoria doing what he does best, carving his way through peons on a path to the Big Enchilada

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Blades (Gladius): Blocking Blows from Two Opponents at Once
Blades (Gladius): Thrusting Through the Sternum into the Chest Cavity
Blades (Karambit): Block and Downward Slash to Disarm an Opponent
Dual Wield (Gladius x Karambit - Combo): Gladius Block, Karambit Slash
Strength: Throwing Your Hips and Shoulders into a Thrust through a Tough Obstacle
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Pinning an Enemy's Weapon Arm To a Wall By the Wrist


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Not yet
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 132
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