Review Request 2.2.4

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Brent Forrester
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Great Melrathi Wilds (Part 1)
City/Area: Melrath Wilds (and Svartown & Fensalir)
Notes/Warnings: This is one of the Melrath Rebirth Calendar events
Skills Used: Negotiation (competent), Fieldcraft (novice), Mount (novice), Woodworking (novice), Cartography (master), Mathematics (novice), Drawing (expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft x2
Cartography: Working with a teammate to determine distances with a sighting stick
Cartography x3

Loot: Sighting stick (crafted)
1 set of good leather armor (Tier 3 armor) - Purchased using Tier 5
1 set of shortbow + arrows + quiver (average) - Purchased using Tier 5
1 dagger with scabbard (average) - Purchased using Tier 5

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Possibly something for joining the "Great Journey"?
Wealth Points: Will be submitted as a wealth thread
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claiming this one. Will review it when it comes up in the queue.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Great Melrathi Wilds (Part 2)
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings: This is one of the Melrath Rebirth Calendar events (previous thread linked)
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (novice), Mount (novice), Navigation (competent), Cartography (master), Drawing (expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: Traversing a swamp
Fieldcraft x1
Cartography x3
Drawing x1

Loot: Map of Myrkvior Woods (travelled section) including the landmarks of: Hochojobon Colony, Tio’s shrine (although identified as only a strange arch), and Alora’s Crater (although identified as only a massive black crater).

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Possibly something for continuing the "Great Journey"?
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claiming this one. Will review it when it comes up in the queue.
word count: 151
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Immortal Kombat: Lisirra
City/Area: Balthazar's dreams
Notes/Warnings: Violence, bugs. Part of a long series but the series is not linked cause... I don't make them all that connected so you don't have to read nine threads to understand this one.
Skills Used: Non-lucid dream, skills don't matter.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Non-lucid Dream.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Journey to Skywatch Keep
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: none
Skills Used: Cooking, and Medicine - no exp or knowledges in either yet, but the things they were doing were extremely simple and they had good instruction in exactly what to do beforehand.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledges

Logistics: never let yourself run out of supplies
Medicine; Herbal: an infused oil is an oil that has been infused with beneficial herbs
Medicine; Herbal: how to make infused oils
Medicine; Herbal: A healing salve is an oil-based medicine that is used topically; it consists of a carrier oil that is infused with herbs, resins or other medicinal compounds and then is thickened with a bit of wax (usually beeswax) for easier use. They can hold their shape outside of the container they are stored in, but may “melt” on contact with body heat.
Medicine; Herbal: how to make healing salves
Medicine; Herb: uses for willow bark

Non Skill Knowledges

NPC: Sebastian
Sebastian: is a squire for the Lightning Knights
Sebastian: is the recptionist at Skywatch Keep
Sebastian: his father is a Lightning Knight

Location: Skywatch Keep
Skywatch Keep: is the home of the Lightning Knights
Skywatch Keep: is located in the Sky Quarter adjacent to the Lightning Cathedral
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: possibly slight (5) for volunteering at the Order Outpost, and for being Vivian Shiryu's adopted kids since Vivian is a well known Lightning Knight
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Stealth and Explosions (2)
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used:
  • Chemistry. Currently Competent (35 XP.)
  • Teaching. Currently Competent (35XP + 6BP.)
  • Disguise. Currently Competent (35 XP.)
  • Persuasion. Currently Master (220 XP.)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Chemistry x4
  • Disguise x2
Loot:
  • 12 Smoke Bombs
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Great Melrathi Wilds (Part 3)
City/Area: Melrath Wilds
Notes/Warnings: **For Pig Boy's Review. This is one of the Melrath Rebirth Calendar events (previous thread linked). Fight scene with some violence.
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (novice), Mount (novice), Navigation (competent), Cartography (master), Combat Ranged (unskilled)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat Ranged: Proper archery stance
Combat Ranged: Nocking an arrow to a bow
Combat Ranged: Drawing an arrow to one's ear
Combat Ranged: Aiming slightly higher than the target
Cartography: Marking contours of the same elevation using spyglass
Cartography: Using multiple perspective drawings to create more accurate map

Loot: Masterwork quality of map for Melrath Region (Parts 1 & 2 supplement the destinations covered). Alternatively, a 'good' quality map can be considered if the threads were not detailed enough for a masterwork map.

Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Possibly something for completing the "Great Journey"?
Wealth Points: N/A
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for review when it's up on queue
word count: 196
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Menochoros/Blades II
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Part 2 in a series of training threads as Doran needs a few more combat-related knowledges.
Skills Used: GM Blades (257x/42k), Master Strength (151x/52k), Master Discipline (151x/36k), Expert Endurance (76x/37k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Expert Tactics (76x/26k)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades x3
Strength x3

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for Review
word count: 82

Mutations

N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Yeva
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Review Request


Thread Name: Water Way
City/Area: Eastern Sea
Notes/Warnings: Minor gore, such as reopened scar tissue and loose teeth, but nothing too unfortunate. In this thread, Yeva treats a deaf man of scurvy (with the help of a translator), so its an old wealth thread with hints of medicine and linguistics. Thank you.
Skills Used: Medicine (Expert), Linguistics (Novice), Detection (Novice), Socialization (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge
Medicine
Common Infliction for Seafarer's
Scurvy: Caused by Severe & Chronic Vitamin C Deficiency.

Detection
The Signs of Scurvy in Seafarers

Linguistics
Facial Expressions Are Vital in Non-Spoken Language
Names Hold Cultural Significance and Meaning
Signing Requires the Use of Hand Movements & Facial Expressions

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Common Sign: Used In Idalos by Deaf or Mute Individuals
Common Sign: A Visual Language
Common Sign: Has Its Own Alphabet
Common Sign: "Life"

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Please, if possible.
Wealth Points: This is my wealth thread, I will be requesting it in the appropriate forum. :)
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Something Fishy This Way Comes
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Fieldcraft thread, fish injured and killed
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (comp), Fishing (nov), Animal husbandry (nov), Detection (nov), Polearm (spear) (nov), Stealth (nov), Swimming (nov)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fieldcraft: coping with the heat
Polearm (spear): aiming through water
Fishing: Tickling a fish
Fishing: Matching the tools to the fish
Fishing: Baiting a hook
Fishing: casting a line

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for review
word count: 91
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Balthazar Black
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Profession: Leader of The Black Cats
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Immortal Kombat: Karem
City/Area: Balthazar's dreams
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Part of a long series but the series is not linked cause... I don't make them all that connected so you don't have to read nine threads to understand this one.
Skills Used: Non-lucid dream, skills don't matter.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Non-lucid Dream.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for review
word count: 84

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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