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Eternity
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: mature tag because of violence (do I need a mature tag for this if it isn't gore?). Also this is a memory thread


Thread: Attacked [Memory]
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills used:

Endurance: novice
Strength: unskilled
Combat (blades): novice
Acrobatics: novice
Deception: novice
Tactics: novice
meditation: novice
discipline: novice

Skills claimed:

Endurance: Enduring the pain of getting kicked to the ground.
Strength: struggling to get free from being pinned
Combat (blades): stabbing behind one's shoulder
Acrobatics: x1
Deception: making up a name on the spot
Tactics: x1

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
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Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Local Language Thread? ( No)
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: Not claiming knowledge for this one.


Thread: A Promise to Vri
City/Area: Almund

Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: Nope.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Nope
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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Eternity
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Notes/Warnings: Nasir is a flavor npc I've used once before. This is the last thread she is used.


Thread: Dance and Song
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills used:

Singing: Novice
Gardening: unskilled
Writing: unskilled
Dancing: unskilled
Socialization: Competent
Endurance: novice

Skills claimed:

Singing: Warm up your voice by singing some simple tunes
Singing: Notes near your natural speaking pitch are easier to hit
Gardening: putting soil in a pot
Gardening: putting seeds on top of soil
Writing: adding to a shopping list
Dancing: stepping side to side

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
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Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Local Language Thread? ( No)
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Gennadiya Lyosha Doctor
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)


Thread: Finding The Place (Part 1)
City/Area: Rharne

Skills used: Logistics (competent), Socialization (Expert), Fieldcraft (untrained)

Knowledges
Field Craft x2
Logistics x2
Strengthx2

Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Yes - Gernevoir
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Pyrre Ej'qy
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: Mature themes in a brothel (vague descriptions of drug use and vaguer hints of sex acts)


Thread: Blind Disregard
City/Area: Almund

Renown: N/A?
Wealth Points: N/A
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Collaboration: No
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Appearance

Pyrre's right lower leg is missing and has been replaced with a wooden peg after a run in with Chrien.
As a Biqaj, his ears are slightly pointed and his skin glows a silvery hue under the moonlight. His eyes change accordingly:
Standard Aquamarine, gold starburst Upset Indigo, silver starburst
Curious Pale blue, gold starburst Injured Jet, silver starburst
Angry Gray and gold, silver starburst Drunk Pale amber, gold starburst
Amorous Platinum, gold starburst Scared Emerald, silver starburst

Cursed

Hated by Chrien
"The first level of Chrien's curse bestows terrible misfortune upon the Hated. A series of events will befall them daily that range from the minor and annoying to the severe and dangerous. Rarely are these forces of mishap deadly, but curiously those that are around the Hated seem to benefit from remarkably better luck than they might have otherwise had."
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: This is an Adult Forum thread with sex and mentions of drug use


Thread: Hookup Culture pt 1
City/Area: Adult Forum
Skills used:

Endurance: novice
Strength: unskilled
Acrobatics: novice
Socialization: competent
Larceny: expert
meditation: novice
discipline: novice
Resistance: unskilled
Seduction: competent

Skills claimed:

Resistance: it’s hard to coordinate when drunk on booze
Resistance: being drunk can numb the senses
Seduction x2

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
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Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Local Language Thread? ( No)
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Notes/Warnings: This is an Adult Forum thread with smut. I'm trying to claim 1 WP for this


Thread: Hookup Culture pt 2
City/Area: Adult Forum
Skills used:

Endurance: novice
Strength: unskilled
Acrobatics: novice
Socialization: competent
Larceny: expert
meditation: novice
discipline: novice
Resistance: unskilled
Seduction: competent
Deception: novice
Cosmetology: Novice
Stealth: Expert

Skills claimed:

Stealth: distributing weight on a bed as to not wake a sleeping partner
Stealth: tiptoeing
Discipline: resisting the urge to sleep
Endurance x1
Strength x1
Seduction x1

Renown: 5 if the theft is noticed
Wealth Points: Requesting 1 WP. I already have approved wealth threads this cycle. I didn't see anything requiring that I link them but I can
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Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Local Language Thread? ( No)
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

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Notes/Warnings: none


Thread: The Lead
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Skills used:

Intelligence: unskilled
Cosmetology: Novice
Stealth: expert
Larceny: expert
Discipline; novice
Meditation: novice
socialization: competent

Skills claimed:

Intelligence: paying for information
Cosmetology: combing knots out of hair
Cosmetology: filing nails
Stealth: avoid stepping on leaves if possible
Stealth x1
Larceny: keep your hands warm because cold hands are harder to move

Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
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Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Local Language Thread? ( No)
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Natalia Gregorios
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Notes/Warnings: Just a Nat/Obe thread. Natalia uses 'Crystal Clear' from her 'Clarity' MB domain and Oberan uses one of his non-MB abilities "God Seal" - listed here.


Thread: The Phantom of the Oberan
City/Area: Western: Etzos
Oberan:

Skills Used
Athletics - GM
Stealth - GM
Larceny - GM
Appraisal - Expert
Business Management - Novice
Detection - Expert
Endurance - Expert
Intelligence - Comp
Investigation - Comp

Knowledge

Business Management: The Importance of Connections
Business Management: Business Model
Business Management: Attracting Clientele


Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No
Local Language Thread? Yes - Ith'ession
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Seira Shiryu
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.7

Rewards Requested

Notes/Warnings: none


Thread: Questions and Answers
City/Area: Rharne

Renown: none
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
Local Language Thread? no
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