Review Requests 2.2.5

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Zunylanih
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Seeing Stars (Red Ones)
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Aftermath of a brawl, some violence. Not much else to warn about I think.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Zunylanih
Linguistics: Common Language x 5
Sesser: Thespian: Can be used to pretend to be sad, or vulnerable, lulling people into a sense of pity.
Skills Used
Acting: Competent
Deception: Novice
Unarmed Combat: Novice
Endurance: Competent
Sesser: Favored
Linguistics: Novice
Fieldcraft: Untrained
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion
Wealth Points: none
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: License to Purchase
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Used this NPC
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:


Politics: Ambition is a powerful accelerant for those looking to get promoted.
Politics: Mutual ambition leads to mutual fulfillment of goals.
Sombran: Isolated Calm: Making mutually agreeable deals when negotiating on your own behalf becomes easier.
Sombran: Commerce Spirit: Can be fed wealth in order to become stronger.
Sombran: Commerce Spirit: Stronger spirit means stronger concept.
Sombran: Commerce Spirit: A strong concept of Commerce means business becomes much easier to fulfill.

Loot/Losses: Purchased: an adamantite Masterwork+ gladius.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Most likely.
Skillplay
Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Negotiation, Appraisal, Detection, Leadership.
Expert: Empathy, Persuasion, Politics, Discipline, Seduction,
Master: Nothing Used.
GM: Psychology
Wealth Points: Spent 14 wp + 1 wp that he fed to his Commerce Spirit so 15 WP in total subtracted from ledger.
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Wuthering Winds (1)
City/Area: Rharne, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Fishing (comp), Detection (comp), Hunting (comp), Acrobatics (nov), Fieldcraft (exp), Butchering (comp), Endurance (nov), Animal Husbandry (comp), Mount (equine) (comp)
Requested Rewards:
Butchering: descaling a fish
Butchering: deheading a fish
Butchering: deboning a fish
Fieldcraft: leave nothing behind
Fieldcraft: packing up a camp
Acrobatics: moving smoothly from prone to kneeling

Loot: N/a
Injuries/Overstepping: N/a
Renown: Doubt it, but Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Victor Amielle
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Puppet
City/Area: Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Research thread. The puppet was a consequence given to me in this thread. Some mention of traumatic events.
Skills Used: Master Research (100x/52k), Expert Discipline (76x/40k), Expert Meditation (76x/22k), Competent Detection (26x/36k), Novice Writing (25x/8k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: The history of Melrath
Research: The geography of Melrath
Research: The government of Melrath
Research: The laws of Melrath
Research: Checking several sources to get the complete story
Writing: Summarizing what you read in a book

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

Items

Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Otorhinolaryngo … whatever!
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Study thread for Devin's Licentiate in Medicine. Devin and his classmates perform ear and throat exams. I mention boils, ear wax and tonsil stones. It's not very detailed at all, but some readers might find it gross regardless. The NPC students can be found here.
Skills Used: GM Medicine (250x/77k), Master Persuasion (155x/74k), Expert Discipline (80x/46k), Expert Endurance (76x/36k), Expert Detection (76x/60k), Novice Writing (20x/16k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Symptoms of otitis externa
Medicine: Treatment of otitis externa
Medicine: How to perform an ear exam
Medicine: How to perform a throat exam
Medicine: Tonsil stones
Writing: Taking notes in class

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Warm Reception
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Darius
Skills Used:
Acrobatics (Competent)
Detection (Expert)
Discipline (Expert)
Etiquette (Competent)
Navigation (Competent)
Socialisation (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Walking on ice without falling over.
Detection: Noting the chill in someone’s hands.
Detection: Recognising the outline of your ship in the bay.
Discipline: Staying calm while walking on ice.
Etiquette: Mirroring the expression of another.
Etiquette: Reassuring someone that apologies aren’t necessary.
Etiquette: Realising when you’ve held a lady’s hands for too long.
Etiquette: Thanking someone for a gift.
Etiquette: Extending an invitation to someone.
Navigation: Relying on the expertise of a local guide.
Socialisation: Using a riddle to break the ice.
Socialisation: Answering a stranger’s question.

Loot: A small metal snowflake
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Elisabeth
Skills Used:
Detection (Master)
Discipline (Expert)
Etiquette (Competent)
Navigation (Novice)
Socialisation (Competent)
Endurance (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)
Investigation (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Navigation - Navigating the streets of Viden
Detection - Seeing a rowboat out in the Bay
Detection - Noting when someone's hands are really warm!
Detection - Tone of voice can indicate a change in emotion
Investigation - Theorizing that someone is not from Viden based on clothing
Investigation - Riddling out where someone is from based on clues
Etiquette - Complimenting someone on their ship
Etiquette - Giving a small gift because one missed a holiday
Socialization - Sometimes you just 'click' with a new friend
Psychology - A place can have profound emotional significance
Meditation - Meditation is not always intentional
Meditation - Easier to fall into a meditative state when in familiar surroundings

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tiny Bubbles
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Memory thread where little Oram learns from his older brother how to hold his breath under water and to…blow bubbles.
Skills Used: Detection, Discipline, Swimming.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

[Discipline] Don’t panic when you run out of air.
[Swimming] Holding one’s breath and blowing bubbles underwater.
[Swimming] The air in your lungs affects buoyancy.
[Swimming] Temperature of water can take a while to get used to when first entering.
[Swimming] Everything looks and sounds different underwater.
[Teaching] Use tests that are hard to guess the answers for.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: N/a
Wealth Points: n/a
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Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Cut Open
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Non-lucid dream of the moments after Syroa killed Balthazar. Marked if for mature for gore. The dream does not depict events as they actually transpired, just vaguely.
Skills Used: None really, but Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Endurance (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Consequences of Oversteeping
City/Area: Nashaki Trade Academy
Notes/Warnings: Mean professor.
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Detection: x 3
Brewing: x 3

Loot/Losses: Flunked out of NTA
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Brewing, Cooking.
Competent: Detection, Deception, Etiquette, Endurance.
Expert: Discipline, Meditation.
Master: Nothing Used.
GM: Nothing Used.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No
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Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain
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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Breaking the Surface
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Another therapy session with Balthazar's Court Appointed Therapist Elliot Ratched. He discusses his death from As It Is Written. Maybe a lil gore warning? I'm not requesting knowledge for it.
Skills Used: Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Psychology (Expert), Socialization (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None, but Balthazar's therapy session will be reported to Kura.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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