Review Request 2.2.3

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Heatwave
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Field craft stuff, only that it takes place in Devin's garden.
Skills Used: Expert Persuasion (76x/43k), Competent Detection (26x/22k), Competent Endurance (26x/26k), Competent Discipline (26x/22k), Novice Investigation (5x/23k), 0 Field Craft

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Field Craft x5
Detection x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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	Reviewed 4/22/2020

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Take as Your Model
City/Area: Storm's Edge, Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Some foul language... mostly from Kasoria... okay, almost entirely from Kas
Skills Used:
VEGA - Acrobatics (Expert), Dancing (Expert), Ranged Combat: Bow (Master)
KASORIA - Ranged Weapon: Bow (Novice), Socialization (Unskilled)

Requested Rewards:

VEGA

Skill Knowledge:
Dancing x4
Acrobatics x4

KASORIA

Skill Knowledge:
Ranged Combat: Bow (x6)
Socialization x2

Non-Skill Knowledge:
PC Vega: Quite the Storied Past
PC Vega: Knows a Maxine (but is it THE Maxine?)
PC Vega: One of the Strongest Leaders at Storm's Edge

[Aylune]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Growing Roots in Etzos
City/Area: Etzos, The Veil, Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Some harsh depictions of war. North gets his new name Aylune here, and figures out some of Etzos' current political climate.
Skills Used: Expert Becoming, Competent Defiance, Dreamwalking

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance x2
Intelligence x2
Tactics x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: Yes, for theorizing on Defiance, Spark philosophy, and testing Defiance in the Veil.

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	Claimed for review 4/24/2020

[Brent Forrester]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Home for the Holidays
City/Area: Alivilda, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned thread
Skills Used: Socialization (novice), Interrogation (unskilled), Caregiving (unskilled)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Socialization x 3
Interrogation x2
Caregiving: Making children laugh by pretending to be a monster

Slepnier: Flying horse of the Melrathi military

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Possibly for attending a large family gathering
Wealth Points: n/a
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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	Reviewed

[Brent Forrester]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Woman of Dreams
City/Area: Alivilda, Melrath
Notes/Warnings: Some kisses and flirty behaviour, but nothing explicit. Abandoned thread.
Skills Used: Socialization (novice), Seduction (competent), Cooking (unskilled), Strength (unskilled), Teaching (unskilled)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cooking: Boiling eggs
Caregiving: Looking after a house guest
Caregiving: Finding appropriate clothes for a guest
Seduction: Keeping a lover comfortably close
Strength x2
Teaching: Sharing one's passion
Teaching: Showing places of note on a map
Teaching: Showing physical places in person
Seduction: Taking a lover to an excluded place in nature

Dreamscapes: Dangerous world
Viden: City in the north with an Academy

Loot: Sybil - Sybil has Branded a location near Brent's home.
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: Probably not
Wealth Points: n/a
- If you are claiming Wealth Points, please link to your Wealth Thread for this season, as Wealth Points can not be awarded before this is completed:
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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	Reviewed

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Pride Castle: The Dojo
City/Area: Dreamscape
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Praetorum
Skills Used: Unarmed (Expert), Endurance (Expert), Strength (Competent), Discipline (Expert), Acrobatics (Untrained)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Endurance x 1
Strength x 4
Tactics x 4
Unarmed x 5

Non-Skill: Dreamwalking Brand: Balthazar Black
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No


Balthazar
Skills Used: Socialization (Novice), Discipline (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Strength (Competent) , Unarmed Combat (Expert)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Tactics x 5
Acrobatics x 3
Detection x 3
Strength x 3

Loot: Branded by Praetorum
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Balthazar Black! Kid Magician!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Language maybe, some kissing.
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Discipline (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Defiance (Master), Intelligence (Expert)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Meditation x 2
Socialization x 2
Investigation x 2

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes (Defiance)

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Night She Left
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Depressing Balthazar.
Skills Used: Socialization (Competent), Discipline (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Defiance (Master), Intelligence (Expert), Persuasion (Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Defiance (Embrace): Cooking a steak
Deception x 3
Cooking x 2

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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	Reviewed

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Long Black Arm of Profane Knowledge
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: There's also a PSF ticket pertaining to this.
Skills Used: Devin: Master Medicine, Expert Endurance, Competent Detection, Expert Discipline, Competent Cosmetology
Rakvald: Graft (Master); Becoming (Competent); Meditation (Untrained); Medicine (Novice); Surgery (Competent); Endurance (Competent), Discipline (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Rakvald

Skill Knowledge:

Becoming: Unleashing: The Dubaebo wishes to be unleashed.
Becoming: Echo: Using the voice of his Biqaj form in Dubaebo form.
Becoming: Unleashing: Cannot blend special properties into an unleashed form.
Graft: Energizing Rigor: Numb some of the pain of the grafting process.
Graft: Adhering Rigor: Bond the Dubaebo's spines with fingernails.
Graft: Corruption Rigor: Meld the tissue of the Dubaebo's spines with that of Devin's fingernails to where they form an amalgam material that form claws on his hands.
Medicine: Learning more about the keratin and dermal structure.
Meditation: Concentrating really hard on the grafting process.
Meditation: Remaining calm through the spell-casting process.
Meditation: Sitting still for half a break or so.

Non-Skill Knowledge:

Biology: Skeletal structure of humanoid hands.
Biology: Fur and spines of a Dubaebo
Biology: Nails can regenerate.

Devin

Medicine x2
Discipline x4
Endurance x3
Cosmetology x1

Loot: Black claws for Devin. The description is in the PSF thread I linked.
Injuries/Overstepping: Rakvald moderately overstepped, at least. (Graft)
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Graft/Becoming for Rakvald. Nothing for Devin.

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Letters
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Combined meditation/writing solo as Doran really needs to work on those skills and get Competent or higher. Random people offering to donate blood was the consequence given to Doran in this thread. I decided to make it even worse!
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/132k), Master Research (151x/65k), Master Discipline (151x/36k), Competent Etiquette (26x/27k), Novice Meditation (10x/7k), Novice Writing (10x/3k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation x4
Writing x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no