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Nasod
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: To Start
City/Area: Koros, Helice, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, Llyr is ok with it going up for review
Requested Rewards:

Blades{Longsword - Nodachi}: One-handed swings
Blades{Longsword - Nodachi}: Cutting down sea monsters
Investigation: Checking where kids might go
Detection: That's what a monster sounds like
Strength: Throwing a blade through a beast
Socialization: Helping a friend in need
Intimidation: Being far more vicious than monsters
Intimidation: Brutal displays can scare others.

Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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㊮ "I'm nothing more than a snake. With cold skin and no emotions, as I slither around searching for prey with my tongue, swallowing down whoever & whatever looks tasty." ㊮
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Review Request


Thread Name: Orange You Glad
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards: 10 xp
Knowledge:
Medicine: Observe Symptoms, Ask Questions
Medicine: Common First Trimester Ailments
Medicine: Natural Preventatives for Blood Infection
Medicine: How to Alleviate Nausea & Heartburn
Medicine: Maintain Patient Records
Research: How to Take Proper Notes
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Athart: History of the Trevender Family
Athart: Has No Order of Adunih Branch (Ashan 719)
Renown: 10 - Giving medical aid to a Trevender ally.
Wealth Points: 1wp
- Orange You Glad
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: N/A
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What doesn't kill you makes you hungry
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hone: Flaying Specialization - Fire
Hone: Core runes have simpler designs
Hone: Rune of Sound
Meditation: Pressing on your chest during breathing exercises
Meditation: The importance of really feeling your breathing
Meditation: Recognizing that you are uneasy

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes, Hone
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Yeva
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Review Request


Thread Name: Fire Starter
City/Area: Athart
Notes/Warnings: A thread where Yeva meets Pharan.
Requested Rewards: 15xp/each
Yeva Knowledge:
Writing: Copy Symbols with Care
Linguistics: How to Write Avrellian Script
Linguistics: Struggling with a Thick Accent
Linguistics: Practice Speaking with Natives
Linguistics: Common Languages of Central Idalos
Discipline: Repress Your Embarrassment
Fieldcraft: How to Use Flint & Steel
Fieldcraft: How to Breathe a Fire to Life
Research: Find a Patient Teacher
Teaching: Don't Withhold Information

Pharan Knowledge:
Teaching: Explaining a mechanical process
Teaching: Explaining the reason behind why something is done a certain way
Detection: Taking note of someone’s slave collar
Investigation: When a slave doesn’t act like a slave
Investigation: Drawing conclusions from a string of evidence
Investigation: Each person’s handwriting is different
Deception: Leaving others to guess what you know
Deception: Keeping observations to oneself
Linguistics: Languages spoken in Rharne
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruised knee (Yeva)
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Knives Are Sharp
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
  • Polearm, Quarterstaff: Spinning The Pole
  • Thrown, Knife: Basic Stance
  • Thrown, Knife: Using Practice Weapons Helps
  • Thrown, Knife: Following Through With The Throw
  • Thrown, Knife: Gauging The Distance Before A Throw
  • Thrown, Knife: Refining Your Arm's Posture
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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"Freedom is everything."


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Ulric
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Blade of a Dead Man Part 2
City/Area: Outside Darington
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Syphon: Life force feels addictive.
Syphon: Emotional Energy fells calming
Materialization (Traverse): Heavily draining, just Flux it
Materialization (Flux): Picking up a sword
Materialization (Flux): Slowing down ectoplasm
Materialization (Flux): Can be used to increase visibility
Loot: Got his anchor back.
Injuries/Overstepping: None? Not sure how it translates to a ghost using a whole bunch of etcoplasm, stealing some more, and using it too... then stealing more...
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No (Does ghost experience count?)
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word count: 106
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Practice For Perfection
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
  • Strength: Pushing Yourself Past Limits
  • Thrown, Knife: Different Angles Determine The Trajectory
  • Thrown, Knife: Furiously Throwing Knives At A Target
  • Thrown, Knife: Relying On Your Line of Sight
  • Thrown, Knife: Twisting Your Body From The Hip For A Better Throw
  • Thrown, Knife: Wrist Movement
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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word count: 78
"Freedom is everything."


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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: All That Remains
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Violence and murder, not for the faint of heart
Requested Rewards:
  • Acting: Hiding Your True Intentions
  • Acting: Playing A Part In A Ruse
  • Intelligence: Relying On Sources To Locate A Problem
  • Stealth: Using a Hidden Dagger In Your Sleeve
  • Stealth: Stabbing An Unsuspecting Target
  • Unarmed, Brawling: Snapping A Target's Neck
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Maybe 10? For the murder and the statement it makes?
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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"Freedom is everything."


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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Questions?
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Hone: Rune of Sight
Hone: Rune of Ethersight
Hone: Runes can be drawn less precisely with more experience
Hone: Grimoires are meant to help fix runes in your mind
Meditation: Meditating to know your ether reserves
Meditation: The warmth of a fire can help relax you

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes, Hone
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Patrick
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Foot In the Door
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Usage of Drugs
Requested Rewards:
  • Intelligence: Establishing Contacts Through Propositions
  • Intelligence: Getting Information Through Business Deals
  • Persuasion: Convincing Others Your Intentions Are Real
  • Persuasion: Sweet Talking Someone Into A Business Deal
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to you
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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"Freedom is everything."


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