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Rose Greenwood
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Little Monsters
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Sadly, an unfinished thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Calming children with soothing words
Caregiving: Using a native language to put people at ease
Socialization: Greeting a stranger
Socialization: Making a friend through common interests
Detection: Noticing the presence of a window in the room
Stealth: Sneaking through the Medicine House
Logistics: Planning a rescue operation
Persuasion: Using toys to convince a child to behave
Endurance: Working with a headache
Negotiation: Offering sweets and toys to stubborn children

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Minimal if anything for treating sick kids
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP:No
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Letting Off Steam
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Vega very much played a "cameo" role in this thread as it was focused mainly on the npc, so no points or knowledge for her.


Arlo

Knowledge:
Gambling: Biqaj game: Stars
Gambling: Dealing cards
Gambling: Shuffling cards
Gambling: Stars: Put stars in 'constellations'
Gambling: Stars: Rules of exchange
Gambling: Stars: Blocking another
Intelligence: Using an invisible spy to gather information
Intelligence: Gather as much information as possible about intentions
Intelligence: Watch facial expressions for clues

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Maybe, Arlo might get slight (5) for being a bit more of a card shark than the Biqaj suspected
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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word count: 122
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Sephira
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Price of Lies
City/Area: Faldrass, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Sephira finally visits her mother and admits her identity as a mage.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Holding hands to provide comfort
Discipline: Staying calm in the face of disappointment
Investigation: Asking for witness testimony
Detection: Noticing bruising and scratches
Negotiation: Convincing a stubborn person to leave their home
Running: Running in sand

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: II. Old Faces
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Part II of the Euphoria Caper, and there will be three more to come! Hope you like this one, and any critique would be welcome. Feel like I rushed it in places.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: Using Personal Contacts
Intelligence: Fences as Information Sources
Intimidation: Frosty Tone of Voice
Intimidation: No Threats, Just Stating The Inevitable
Tactics: Have Your Weapon CLOSE, Not Just NEAR
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Crab Claw Punch


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Dillan: Former Enforcer, Current Cripple
Etzos Culture: A Toast To Endeavors!
Drugs: Euphoria, A Soft, Smelly Drug
NPC "Wide" Nick: Fence, Middleman, Fat Bastard
NPC Vorund: Influential, But More Powerful on the South Side


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Maybe a little, since he's been making the rounds...
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Woe
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Cat's Half in the Bag
City/Area: Andaris training grounds
Notes/Warnings: Training thread, might be boring. Hedge your expectations
Requested Rewards: 10 points
Knowledge:
Whip (Scourge): Turning your wrist to deliver a stronger blow.
Whip (Scourge): The pain of the weapon causes is part of it's danger.
Whip (Scourge): Relentless, speedy strikes can strip hide asunder
Whip (Flail): Even a blindman could use it.
Whip (Chains): Can be used to bludgeon or grapple with armored opponents.
Endurance: Perservering beyond discouragement and exertion.

Non-Skill Knowledge:

NPC: Bower: A hard-nosed trainer
NPC: Bower: Doesn't coddle his students
NPC: Bower: Willing to make a wager with his fellow masters on the outcome of sparring
NPC: Bower: Underestimates weapons he doesn't understand.

Loot: Just the training.
Injuries/Overstepping: A few scratches, bruises, aches, and pains. Bruised ego.
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 153
Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Mutations/Scars/Markings

Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Setting Sail
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Aegis modbombed, so will review
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Recognising that yelling doesn't (always) help
Discipline: Explaining who you're angry at, when you're angry
Discipline: Don't allow yourself to get into a rut of negative emotions
Navigation: Reading a map to plan routes
Navigation: Identifying warm water currents
Persuasion: Logical, reasoned argument
Psychology: Physical damage often heals faster than psychological trauma.
Storytelling: The story of honest Betsy


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: None
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no


Arlo

Knowledge:
Caregiving: The art of carrying gently
Caregiving: Easier when you care about the person
Navigation: Reading a map to plan routes
Navigation: Identifying warm water currents
Persuasion: Clearly reminding someone of what really happened
Storytelling: The art of a good story is often in simplicity
Storytelling: What makes a good storyteller
Strength: Moving slowly to ensure accuracy is hard on the muscles


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown:
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
word count: 171
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Vega Dweeb
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Solitude Standing
City/Area: The Hollow Sea (Viden)
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Nalos Ability: Night Torch: Can keep going indefinitely as long as it's the only one.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Put rosin on the bow
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Always check that it is in tune before you start.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Don't let your palm close on the bow when holding it.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Double check your hand position against the neck, especially while learning.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Playing open strings still requires practice.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Nope.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Lavana Tharn
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: Let It Out, Child
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City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: A mental break down, foul language.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength Tapping Into Resentment
Strength Tapping Into Hate
Strength Tapping Into Fury
Strength Going Into A Beserker Frenzy
Discipline; Harnessing Emotional Turmoil
Discipline; Channeling Dark Emotions Into A Focus, A Weapon
Loot: Loss Of Leather Armor, Bronze Gauntlets, Bronze Sabatons.
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Credit To Pig Boy For The Posting Templet!
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Alistair
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Profession: Wanderer
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Review Request 2.1.3

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Thread Name: The Witch With Claws
City/Area: Cappola, Oakleigh (Rynmere's Eastern Settlements)
Notes/Warnings: Slightly graphic descriptions
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Obeying Another
Discipline: Humility As An Asset
Discipline: Forcing Oneself to Move Forward

Loot: I would like this to be considered for a minor quest to Syroa, to unlock the next Sesser ability, "Demon's Kiss". Since Alistair is finally giving into her and pledging obedience, I think this is definitely worthy!
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Your discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 88
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Nightshade Eld
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Profession: The Best Hero
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Review Request 2.1.3

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Take the Lead
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: I wrote this at midnight because I just wanted my job thread done and it most certainly shows :mrgreen:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Business Management: Always doing what must be done
Business Management: Moving around employees to deal with missing positions
Business Management: Dealing with a position of leadership
Business Management: Trashy jerk bosses suck, don't be one
Business Management: Pick someone suited to the job you're assigning
Leadership: Understanding how bad you are at leading


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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