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Noth
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mirror on the Mountain
City/Area: Etzos, The Underground
Notes/Warnings: Very Violent
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Storytelling: Telling a Story to teach a Lesson.
Intimidation: Telling Stories to Highlight Wrongs
Unarmed: Stabbing at someone with Talons
Unarmed: Stomping on Fingers
Mace: Striking Fingers breaks them
Mace: Striking the Neck breaks it.


Loot: 4 Bronze Nels for looting pockets
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: Negative for another triple homicide.
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Theo Nji'Ryn
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Thread Name: Pass The Brandy
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Violence, killing, mature themes.
Zana
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Pretending to cower
Acting: Faking emotions
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Stab to the throat
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Defending against a quicker attacker
Bladed Combat: Dagger: Eye strikes
Deception: Considering what emotion looks like and hiding it
Detection: Making out figures in the shadows
Intelligence: Symbols as signs of group membership
Intelligence: Don't assume motivations
Persuasion: Explaining how you're perfect, just the way you are.

Loot: A few handfuls of coin (reviewer's discretion), 1 x signet ring with a strange symbol on it.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Killed bandit (x1)? Reviewers discretion
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Theo


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Bladed Combat: Sword: Forward lunge
Bladed Combat: Sword: Maintain the element of surprise
Bladed Combat: Sword: Concealed weapons
Detection: Making out figures in the shadows
Intelligence: Symbols as signs of group membership
Intelligence: Don't assume motivations
Intelligence: Use your environment for clues
Persuasion: Trying to avoid trouble
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Move quickly to surprise
Ranged Combat: Crossbow: Throat shot


Loot: Handful of coins and a signet ring with a strange insignia on it.
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Kill a bandit x2? Reviewer's discretion.
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Neronin
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Beneath the Marbled Halls
City/Area: Etzos, Museum of Art and History
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Appraisal: Identifying the state of Old Texts
Appraisal: Comparing State of Repair to that of the Past
Research: Reading Historical Accounts
Research: IDentifying Traits of the Sundial
Rupture: Sundial
Alchemy: Used to Imbue Traits into Items

Location: Etzori Museum: Vault 33
Location: Etzori Museum: Vault 45

Loot: Parchment with notes on the Sundial and Alchemy
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer Discretion
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Aeodan
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Zin'mataa II: Control
City/Area: Oakleigh
Notes/Warnings: Hinted homosexual tendencies
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Endurance: Resisting joint locks
Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): Joint locks after throws
Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): How to apply an armbar
Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): How to apply a 'kih-murah'
Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): How to apply a kneebar
Unarmed Combat (Zin'mataa): Controlling an opponent means dictating their capabilities

Non-Skill:

Judah: Philsophical
Judah: Appreciates your attraction
Judah: Relaxed and easy-going

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: No
Devotion: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Doran
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Blood of an Empath
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: This is a job thread, so it may be slightly boring.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Primers: Are sometimes necessary for a reagent to work
Alchemy: Accelerants: Speed up a reaction
Alchemy: Blood Magic: Infusing a medium with the capabilities of a domain of magic
Alchemy: Blood Magic: Beware of backlash!
Empathy: Quilt
Chemistry: How to tell human and animal blood apart

Horn of a Horned Carowa: Can be used as an alchemical primer

Loot: two magic rings
Injuries/Overstepping: None. There is no Overstepping penalty due to Doran having Legendary Chemistry. But he does have a headache from spending so much time in his laboratory!
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Mutations

N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Instrument of Sea & Stars
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Nah. We like a few innuendos, but this thread didn’t go as planned. Sad face.
Zana
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: A pout
Etiquette: Idle chit-chat
Etiquette: Underwear is usually expected
Etiquette: Speak the native language, it's polite
Etiquette: Meeting strangers
Etiquette: Family will always be more important
Psychology: Confidence is noticeable
Psychology: A robust ego makes it hard to insult someone
Psychology: Telling a broody person they're brooding doesn't help

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion
Devotion: Delroth: Spend over a break making yourself look good (+3) Make someone else feel jealous / inferior (+5)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Pash
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: It’s not always actually okay
Etiquette: Compliment your date, even when they already know they look good
Etiquette: Some cultures don’t care about personal space
Psychology: Knowing when it’s not a salvageable situation
Psychology: Biqaj social rules
Rhetoric: Keeping up with a witty date
Rhetoric: Dealing with family opinions
Seduction: It’s okay to keep some things a mystery
Socialization: Knowing where the good parties are

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Rafael Warrick
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Hide and Seek
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: This thread was part of the previous global event. That's where the mist-men come from.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill-related
Stealth: Hiding in an attic
Tactics: Keeping Your Blade Within Reach
Endurance: Surviving Multiple Cuts And Bruises
Tactics: Smashing A Window To Provide An Escape Route
Acrobatics: Dodging by leaping back
Acrobatics: Ducking dodge and rebound
Acrobatics: vaulting over an edge
Blades (Longsword): Catch an attack on the guard and counter
Tactics: It's better to retreat when outnumbered

Non-skill
Ne'haer: Route to the docks
Mistmen: Appear to be made of fog
Avari: Malcolm's Friend
Godric: Malcolm's Friend

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Some mild injuries I imagine. All injuries he had before shit hit the fan were nullified by Avari's (Malcolm's NPC) magic.
Fame: Some positive fame for beating back mist men, saving Malcolm, and general fighting prowess?
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Collaborative thread, but the requested knowledges are just for my character.
Magic EXP: No
Notes: The acrobatics knowledges are the ones I'd like to have the most, please :)

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Life is a dark comedy, only you're not in on the joke.
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Linika
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Back to Square One.2
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nah, just Linika's sharp tongue.
Requested Rewards:
Skill-Based Knowledge:
  • Alchemy: Frageon is a Very Versatile Combining Reagent
  • Deception: Sneaking Frageon Stock in with the Regular Chemicals
  • Detection: Heel Click Reactions Can Expose a Tail
  • Detection: A Roundabout Route Can Expose a Tail
  • Xypha: Telepathic Comm: Can Receive From Many Sources
  • Xypha: Telepathic Comm: Eye Contact is Key
Non-Skill-Based Knowledge:
  • Intelligence Authority: Still Watching You
  • Intelligence Authority: Wants You to Work for Them
  • Viden Location: Viridian Wing layout
  • Viden Location: Viridian Wing Connections to Other Depts.
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Deliberately negative, the IA wants her to still be known as an enemy to Viden.
Devotion: Positive for Yvithia, Linika is starting to come around.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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"Shelf Life'...What an ironically contradictory concept."
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Navyri
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Home Invasion
City/Area: Krome, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: A fufilled placeholder from last season.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Stealth: Beware Creaky Floors
  • Stealth: Naerikk Thieves Thrive in Complete Darkness
  • Stealth: Favor Shadowed Areas
  • Deception: Concealing Your Facial Features
  • Appraisal: Using Touch to Assess Fabric Quality
  • Pickpocketing: Removing Someone's Necklace
Loot: The two objects listed/linked in the thread:
A black silk scarf
A golden pendant/locket

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Negative, please?
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Nir'wei
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Thread Name: A Safe Landing
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Faith Knowledge: None
Nir'wei Knowledge:
Business Management: Setting aside a workplace.
Business Management: Maximising profit of available land.
Business Management: Doing your research before beginning your ventures.
Business Management: Taking the first steps to building a farm.
Business Management: How to plan a business proposition.
Business Management: Considering supply lines.
Business Management: Weighing the value of different crops.
Business Management: Determining aims for a business venture.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None (Rot already cured)
Faith Fame: +5 for Gift
Nir'wei Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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