Review Request 2.2.4

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Nostalgia
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Lucid dream on both parts. A little mild horror.
Requested Rewards:
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Woe

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[*]Rhetoric: Question: What is a Giraffe?
[*]Baking: A giraffe is a cake, made with chocolate and a variety of fruit.
[*]Discipline: Stop bellyaching.
[*]Discipline: Don't be a girl.
[*]Detection:  Telling that something is not quite right.
[*]Detection: Realizing that you are in a dream.
[*]Poison: The blue cookies should only be inhaled, effect is that they cause you to tell the truth.
[*]Poison:  Blue cookies kill when ingested.
[*]Whip: Nostalgia (1/5)
[*]Whip: Nostalgia (2/5)
[*]Whip: Nostalgia (3/5)
[*]Whip: Nostalgia (4/5)
[*]Whip: Nostalgia (5/5)
Skillplay
Rhetoric: Untrained
Baking: Untrained
Poison: Untrained
Discipline: Expert
Detection: Competent
Whip: Master
Endurance: Competent
Vega
[*]Rhetoric: Question: What is a Giraffe?
[*]Baking: A giraffe is a cake, made with chocolate and a variety of fruit.
[*]Deception: When in doubt, bluff it out.
Skillplay
Rhetoric: Untrained
Baking: Untrained
Deception: Untrained
Psychology: Competent
Detection: Master
Loot/Losses: Dreamwalking for Woe. Vega remembers that she can dreamwalk.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Doran
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Scalvoris Sand
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Teaching thread for Doran's Licentiate in Alchemy. Alchemy's a dangerous science, so Doran's being careful. He does of course not keep his students’ creations. He’s just examining them as the students will need to get a grade at the end of the semester or something like that.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/135k), Master Strength (151x/51k), Expert Detection (76x/35k), Expert Teaching (76x/47k), Novice Writing (10x/5k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy x2
Strength x1
Writing x3

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: No. This is Doran's Ymiden wealth thread though.
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
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word count: 120

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: A Major Betting Blitz
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Just some gambling
Skills Used: Novice Meditation, Novice Gambling
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Meditation, Detection, Gambling, Intimidation, Mathematics, Persuasion, Socialization, Deception
Deception: Remaining Stoic in Distress
Gambling: A Game of Blitz
Meditation: Slowing One's Heartbeat
Intimidation: Copying Expressions
Detection: Reading Facial Expressions
Gambling: Detecting One's Bluff
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: An Unwanted Man
City/Area: Storms Edge, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: If you count the emotional violence Vega is wrecking Pat with then sure; also Squirrel is the mod who's actually meant to review this! Sorry for the inconvenience of posting it here. :oops:
Skills Used:
Vega
Intimidation (4)
Leadership (4)


Knowledge:
Numb-nuts
  • Endurance: Sitting Out In The Ymiden Heat For Hours
  • Rhetoric: Embracing The Concept of Faith
  • Discipline: Waiting On Someone When They're Taking A While
  • Rhetoric: The Difference Between Being Self Absorbed and Self Reflective
  • Deception: Lying To Yourself Is Easiest Compared With Lying To Others
  • Discipline: Learning To Become A Solution Instead of a Problem
  • Rhetoric: Finding Humor In The Ways Someone Treats You
  • Rhetoric: The Mannerisms Of Bards
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Your call
Wealth Points: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Grade claimed for Squirrel.
Last edited by Patrick on Fri Jun 05, 2020 1:09 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 151
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Immortal Kombat: Moseke
City/Area: Balthazar's dreams
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Skills Used: Non-lucid dream, skills don't matter.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Non-lucid Dream.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Kasoria
Reviewed
word count: 48

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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Dancer Distress
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: It's a really long thread btw, just a heads up
Knowledge:
Patrick
  • Tactics: Waiting For The Opportune Moment
  • Investigation: Following "Smoke" To See If There's A Fire
  • Discipline: Turning Down "Fun" When Others Are In Need
  • Acting: Feigning Disinterest Where You're Clearly Interested
  • Investigation: Getting Information To Solve A Recurring Issue
  • Gambling: Determining The Stakes For Yourself
  • Rhetoric: Deciding What Exactly Is "Right" In A Situation
  • Tactics: Figuring Out Your Enemy To Gain The Upper Hand
  • Tactics: Learning To Stay One Step Ahead Of The Enemy
  • Tactics: Baiting A Perpetrator For A Trap
  • Acting: Playing The Role Of Another's Lover
  • Seduction: How To 'Flirt' When You're Considerably Dating
  • Acting: Playing It Cool Or Natural Works Best
  • Rhetoric: The Appeal Of A Woman Who Knows What She Wants
*I'm aware that I can have maybe one or two more lores, but these are the ones that will suffice. Much appreciated for handling this elaborate thread!

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Your call
Wealth Points: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Kasoria
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word count: 191
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Thirty-Two Arcs
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No lores necessary
Knowledge:
Patrick
N/A


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Kasoria
Reviewed
word count: 39
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Snap, Crackle...
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Just looking to clean out old threads at this point
Knowledge:
Patrick
  • Endurance: Feeling The Physical Toll of Sessfiend's Chaotic Energy
  • Gambling: Spilling Your Secrets To Someone You May Trust
  • Discipline: Fighting Powerful Forces of Tempation
  • Discipline: Resisting The Chaotic Urges Of The Sessfiend Curse
  • Gambling: Taking A Risk You May Regret Later
  • Discipline: Quelling The Thirst For Blood Brought On By Sessfiend
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Your call
Wealth Points: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Kasoria
Reviewed
word count: 95
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: What You're In For
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Just looking to clean out old threads at this point
Knowledge:
Patrick
  • Running: Dashing To Catch Someone That's Falling
  • Acrobatics: Catching Someone Before They Hit The Ground
  • Detection: Noticing When Someone Is A Troublemaker
  • Running: Avoiding Apprehension By The Lae
  • Running: Putting As Much Distance Between You And Your Pursuer
  • Running: Chasing After Someone
  • Running: Tucking Into A Slide Over The Ground
  • Acrobatics: The Concept of Powersliding
  • Strength: Hoisting A Person Over You
  • Endurance: Taking Blows To The Gut Like A Champion
  • Unarmed, Brawling: Using Your Head As A Weapon
  • Unarmed, Brawling: Breaking Out Of An Opponent's Constraint
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Your call
Wealth Points: N/A
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Kasoria
Reviewed
word count: 134
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Immortal Kombat: Edasha
City/Area: Balthazar's dreams
Notes/Warnings: Violence and suggestive themes. I don't have AF access so I tried to keep everything vague.
Skills Used: Non-lucid dream, skills don't matter.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Non-lucid Dream.
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Kasoria
Reviewed
word count: 64

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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