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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Barrett's Privateers: Part 1
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Spotting a greedy scammer
Leadership: A ship is only as good as its captain
Negotiation: Getting a larger share of the loot
Negotiation: Knowing when you have no other options
Rhetoric: Using display of ability to prove your value
Rhetoric: Talking yourself into a higher position

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
reviewed by strange
word count: 83
Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Varthakh
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Overshoot
City/Area: Northern Gauthrel, Western heights.
Notes/Warnings: This is the first thread in Fridgar's becoming ability development quest, approved here
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Becoming: Borrow: Taking four traits at once.
  2. Becoming: Borrow: More expensive than Adapt.
  3. Becoming: Borrow: Trait: Venomous fangs.
  4. Becoming: Borrow: Trait: Body temperature control.
  5. Becoming: Borrow: Flexible enough to make totems fit for any climate.
  6. Resistance: Kinaba ether venom.
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  • Bestiary: Kinaba: Can sense mages
  • Bestiary: Kinaba: Has venomous fangs and claws that sabotage ether usage for mages
  • Bestiary: Kinaba: Territorial and attack anything in their territory
  • Bestiary: Kinaba: Their horns, claws and teeth all sell for a pretty penny
Loot: +1 Kinaba totem in the form of a blindfold, +1 Kinaba Loincloth.
Injuries/Overstepping: Kinaba venom; backfiring magic and health drain from magic usage for one break, One shallow bite wound on the forearm
Renown: Uthaldria offered fame rewards (which was updated into renown) for monster kills once upon a time, I'll leave it up to the reviewer though.
Wealth Points: +2 in exchange for the Kinaba parts listed in the thread?
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: None
word count: 188
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Transmogrification III
City/Area: The Gleam, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Usual Becomer gruesomeness.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Totems are repositories for the mage’s soul to fill.
Becoming: Blended Form: Tyara + Zarik
Becoming: Blending in the same animal family (Mammals)
Becoming: Blending techniques
Becoming: Blending
Etiquette: Patience while waiting for another person.

Loot: +1 Lucretia Totem
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - Becoming (first time using blending)
word count: 80
Please — consider me a dream.
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Varthakh
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Snake Slayer
City/Area: Northern Gauthrel, Western heights
Notes/Warnings: This is the second thread in Fridgar's becoming ability development quest, approved here.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Becoming: Borrow: Chrysalis while borrowing would be very costly.
  2. Becoming: Echo: Permanently echoed the Solghannon's blood rage.
  3. Becoming: Echo: Permanent echoes are removed if the totem you are echoing is slain.
  4. Hunting: Tracking a serpent.
  5. Hunting: Determining reptile hormones through taste.
  6. Hunting: Pay attention to the shifts in the trail.
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Loot: 5x Scalv Ziemia eggs
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Uthaldria offered fame rewards (which was updated into renown) for monster kills once upon a time, I'll leave it up to the reviewer though.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: No
word count: 124
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Intaglio
City/Area: Emea: Rebuilding of Emea
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
None requested
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points:N/A
Magic Experience?: N/A
word count: 36
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Transmogrification IV
City/Area: The Gleam, Quacia
Notes/Warnings: it has.... singing.

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Becoming: Echo
Becoming: Echoing a human’s ability to sing.
Becoming: I'd rather not use devour.
Meditation: Singing to keep one's mind clear
Singing: Shifting tone and pitch
Singing: Sea Shanties

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes - Becoming (used echo for the very first time and of preferences in regard to the domain magic)
word count: 88
Please — consider me a dream.
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Mads
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: A Bird in the Hand
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Both Zipper and Mads are physically in the Veil at this time and have access to their sparks
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Zipper
Attunement: Frequency: Zarik
Attunement: Jamming
Attunement: Note: Deception
Attunement: Note: Power
Attunement: Note: Transmutation
Attunement: Note: Regret
Attunement: Soothe: Reverting the most extreme mutations

Llyr
Meditation: The Potential of Complications
Meditation: Someone else is in your Soul.
Research: Topic: The Offspring of Mages
Socialization: Making… colleagues.
Rhetoric: The truth given freely.
Discipline: Letting an attuner explore your soul.
Intelligence: Contact: Miss Humming, Emea dreamwalker.

Mads
linguistics: Ith’esson:
a rough language
an aggresive language
a poetic language

intelligence-
contact: Llyr Llewellyn
contact: Fiona O'Conner

none requested

Loot: none requested
Injuries/Overstepping: if applicable
Renown: if applicable
Collaboration: yes


Domain Magic Only
Magic EXP: attunement (zipper)
If YES then what is your current level of Domain Magic?: master
Last edited by Mads on Sun May 26, 2019 4:22 am, edited 3 times in total. word count: 154
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Our Travels
City/Area: Kael Jeger, uthaldria, Western heights
Notes/Warnings: Kinda boring
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Nah

Loot: -5 Scalv Ziemia eggs
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Maybe some for presenting trophies to the Jackal of the Jeger
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: None
word count: 49
Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Ill Winds
City/Area: Orm'del Sea
Notes/Warnings: Violence + Language

Just a quick narrative/plot piece, but I couldn't resist throwing some chop-socky in there. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Landing After a Double Kick
Endurance: Fighting Tactically Even While Being Pummeled
Teaching: Instructing While Fighting
Teaching: Simplifying The Lesson into a Single Sentence (where possible)
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq): Double Front Kick
Unarmed Combat (Ki'Enaq - Combo): Forearm Block, Kidney Shot, Rib Punch


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Blackbrine: Nomadic Pirate Stronghold of the Orm'del Sea
NPC Kilmain: Leader of the Luck Lady's Sellswords
NPC Legonne: Powerful Mage, But Not Willing to Overstep
NPC Otrar: Young, Dark-Skinned Sailor
NPC Otrar: Oddly Skilled with a Dagger
Yaralon - Ashan 719 Event: Blockaded By Blackbrine Ships


word count: 133
Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Hunting Sakarum.
City/Area: Northern Gauthrel, Western heights.
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Becoming: Borrowing: Gestalt totems.
  2. Hunting: Following the trail of an underground tunnel to find prey that burrows.
  3. Hunting: Determining the direction your prey is heading by the direction their toes point in their tracks.
  4. Hunting: Some prey is clever enough to ambush pursuers.
  5. Hunting: Perception is Key.
  6. Hunting: Using the vibration sense of your corruption to your advantage.
Loot: +1 Gestalt totem (Wyvarnth, Paltharnum, and Thiussum Ithecal.)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience?: None
word count: 98
Whenever one finds oneself inclined to bitterness, it is a sign of emotional failure.
-- Bertrand Russell
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