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Jonathan Burr
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Thread Name: Anatomy Lessons
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Research: Sketching a subject for later study.
Aberration: Controlling the sphere
Aberration: Draining a subject slowly.
Aberration: Thievery
Aberration: Learning from your Harvester
Aberration: Holding a subject within a sphere.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 60
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Thread Name: Relief Effort 9: Listing
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Negotiation: Working out a timeframe
Negotiation: Talking to someone who's dead.
Persuasion: Leaving it up to them what they donate, but assuming it'll be something
Research: Collating numbers
Research: Checking that lists match
Writing: Make a mass letter seem personal.


Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: She's maxed
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no
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Nightshade Eld
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Thread Name: Busting Bandits
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence, but it is a thread with Noth and Night so that's just to be expected
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Sometimes cheesy works
Deception: Feigning insanity
Detection: Observing everything around you
Detection: smoke in the distance
Fieldcraft: Always being prepared
Politics: Punishments should fit the crime
Politics: Capital punishment is useless and should be avoided
Politics: Brushing away bad laws
Politics: Makrs are better off hiden in Etzos

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: We stopped a large troupe of 'bandits' so whatever the grader thinks that's worth
Collaboration: Yeah
Magic EXP: Nope
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Last edited by Nightshade Eld on Tue May 29, 2018 10:33 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 110
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Thread Name: Not a Good Start
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some violence, total chaos
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: Rooting out a thief
Endurance: Withstanding the negative effects of an adrenaline rush
Endurance: Never relaxing
Fieldcraft: The effects of strange weather on the local area
Flying: Lighting is really dangerous
Resistance: "Thrill" effects
Resistance: Not allowing adrenaline to have a negative effect on combat performance
Tactics: Recognizing a bad idea a little too late


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Medium to small for being part of the entire debacle of this thread, it devolves into true madness
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: For Dummies
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Teaching: Using simple explanations or diagrams to give understanding
  2. Polearms: Naginata: Natural Standing Position
  3. Polearms: Naginata: Mid-Level Position
  4. Polearms: Importance of footwork
  5. Polearms: Naginata: Lower Level Position
  6. Polearms: Naginata: Similar to the spear
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Sandspeck Chase
City/Area: Ishallr
Notes/Warnings: This was an old thread that has since been abandoned by the other player, Ae'garn, who isn't active currently.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: 6 posts = 8+3 = 11
  1. Animal Training: Negotiating with the animal
  2. Animal Training: Allowing for leverage in what the animal wants to do
  3. Endurance: Being in the cold for longer than expected
  4. Endurance: The numbness of overworking muscles
  5. Etiquette: Matching the height of the person you're speaking to
  6. Detection: Finding objects similar in color to their surroundings
  7. Logistics: Planning for the weather
  8. Mount: Proper seating
  9. Mount: Must throw one leg over at a time
  10. Mount: Evening out weight
  11. Strength: Pulling self onto mount
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Small for participating in the annual sandspeck chase
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: We're literally doing this for points
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: language
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Dream
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Renown: No
Collaboration: Yes. Ellen and moi
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 37
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Thread Name: The Doran Chronicles: Requiem for a Doran Sourcebook
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?)
Requested Rewards:
Zip lores (10)
Attunement: Soothe
Attunement: Soothe: May have some unpleasant and unexpected side effects depending on the mutation
Attunement: Soothe: Suppressing a mutation that prevents the ingestion of standard food and beverage
Negotiation: Accepting unreasonable demands
Negotiation: Assertively dismissing an unreasonable demand
Negotiation: Bluffing to the bitter end
Negotiation: Going to absurd lengths to stall the inevitable
Negotiation: Playing stupid
Negotiation: Poker face
Negotiation: Using mockery to derail a negotiation

Finn lores
Unarmed combat: kicking Fiona’s shin
Intimidation: do as I say or the Dorans will get it
Deception: Pretending to be mom
Deception: Pretending to be Neronin
Acting: Playing along with Zipper
Tactics: Asking leading questions
Tactics: Feeding Zipper drunk
Strength: Dragging a drunk Zipper up a flight of stairs
Discipline: Not lashing out, despite being puked over
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: nu
Renown: The smallest if possible. Neighbours be wondering...
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Not enough. no
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Thread Name: Not a good start Same as nightshade a couple posts back.
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  1. Pickpocket: using the crowd as cover
  2. Pickpocket: crowded shopping district have easy marks
  3. Pickpocket: beware anti-thief measures
  4. Pickpocket: requires nimble fingers
  5. Pickpocket: The Classic "bump-into-someone-and-steal-their-wallet" trick
  6. Acrobatics: moving through a dense field of cacti
  7. Deception: acting surprised
  8. Deception: pretending not to know anything
  9. Stealth: suspicious behavior stands out
  10. Appraisal: gauging the difficulty of a target
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: old thread
Renown: maybe
Collaboration: yes, with Night
Magic EXP: Magic is basically the easy mode of ST


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Thread Name: Meditation
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Just a quick solo, nothing bad happens
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Meditation: Adressing an issue, even if it hurts
Meditation: Facing personal demons somewhere you feel safe
Meditation: Help offered by the peacekeepers jewel
Meditation: Useing the earth to keep yourself grounded
Meditation: Self reflection is an extremely important part
Psychology: Learning not to fear death through desensitization

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic EXP: N/A
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