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Navyri
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Race: Naerikk
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Thread Name: A Mother's Touch
City/Area: Augiery
Notes/Warnings: Mild Violence
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Knowledge:
Skill Based
Blades: Forward Knife Grip Techniques
Blades: Reverse Knife Grip Techniques
Endurance: Getting Smacked By a Staff
Unarmed Combat: Leg Sweep
Unarmed Combat: Utilizing Size Difference in Close Combat
Acrobatics: Dodge Roll
Non-skill Based
Augiery: Slave Expectations
Augiery: Punish Your Insubordinate Slave
Language: Gravokian
Gravokian: Proper Pronunciation
Gravokian: Honorifics
Deshira: An Intense Fighting Instructor
Deshira: Stern
Deshira: Wants You To Be Strong
Deshira: Punishes Weakness
Gaius: Didn’t Agree with Naerikk Training
Gaius: Disobedient Slave
Gaius: Had Difficulty Adapting to Naer Culture

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bruises, sore muscles
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Last edited by Navyri on Fri Oct 06, 2017 10:22 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 119
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Noth
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Thread Name: Will Spy for Food
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: No warnings. This is a very short, one post thread written for the sake of having this be a canonical event. It's not very exciting, and borders on extremely mundane. Sorry. :(
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Logistics: Waste Nothing
Logistics: Give Away Things you Don't Need

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Alistair
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Alistair

Thread Name: Totem cREEEation
City/Area: Fields of Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nah, just XP please
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Fridgar

City/Area: Fields of Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Naw
Loot: +1 Lurker Totem Axe
+1 Stekir Totem
Injuries/Overstepping: Naw
Fame: Naw
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Naw
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Alistair
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Alistair

Thread Name: Arrogance
City/Area: Fields of Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Some mature speech
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Nah, just XP please
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Fridgar

City/Area: Fields of Gauthrel
Notes/Warnings: Some mature speech
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed Combat: Counterweight

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Splinters across the upper body, subsequently disinfected and removed by Alistair
Fame: Naw
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Naw
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Zip
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Profession: Professional Scowler
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Thread Name: Edge
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: small bit of violence near the end
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Transmutation: Step 2 - Alteration
Transmutation: Step 3 - Reformation
Transmutation: Flaw
Unarmed Combat: Throwing a Haymaker
Endurance: Staying up all night
Discipline: Staying focused during a long Transmutation
Loot: (if applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Fame: Not sure how memories work but I'm hoping for some negative for the little beatdown at the end. If not, please ignore.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

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Gangui
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Thread Name: [The Crescent Arena]The Etzori iron heel shakes the rust off
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Torture and Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
NPC: High Marshal Brogan Pahrn
NPC: Marshal Royce
NPC: Marshal Web
NPC: Shield Arm Tailog
Etzorsi Captial Punishment Techniques
Nightshade Eld: Stands with me, especially on the matter of Injustice
Nightshade Eld: Good judge of character.
Nightshade Eld: True to her words.
Finn O'Connor: Annoying Kid and Tattletale
The Citadel: Full of prying ears.
The Blackguard: Have an eye on me...maybe...
Leadership: Keep face before an audience.
Leadership: Delegating tasks.
Negotiation: Bribing Guards
Negotiation: Making Demands
Neronin: Very Agreeable

Loot: start up funds for the expedition.
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Fame: Positive for his speech at the bar.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Thread Name: A New for your thoughts, Bard?
City/Area: Scalvoris Town Harbor
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of violence on the Immortal’s Tongue. Confessions of love. This is a PH from Ymiden finally completed.

Requested Rewards:
Kali’rial
Skill Knowledge:
Language: Xanthean (Aìdá)
Language: Xathean curse words
Language: Rakahi (qua’ma)
Detection: Signs of a missing person
Domain Magic: Empathy: Shared threads

Other Knowledge:
Pash: Will hold you hostage on his boat when things go awry
Pash: Loves you, and you saw it

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Pash Vy’ryn
Skill Knowledge:
Language: Xanthean (Aìdá)
Persuasion: Confessing love to end an argument
Empathy: Duplicating your own threads
Empathy: Sharing your feelings with someone else

Other Knowledge:
Kali’rial: Kept her expedition horrors from you
Kali’rial: Loves you … patiently

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes, please.
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Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Robin Stark
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Thread Name: Mole
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: None//weird language though
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Defiance: Embrace
Defiance: Metal's Call
Defiance: Magma's Call
Defiance: Cracks in the Earth
Persuasion: Careful with your Words
Negotiation: Pressing the Conversation
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Light Overstepping, if any
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes
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Kali'rial
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Thread Name: Beginnings
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge: (3 out of 6 for one page solo)
Language: Xanthean general conversation
Cartography: How Idalos looks from above
Sailing: Waves can destroy boats

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Osi Bori: Has called Kali to start her journey

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Fame: n/a
Devotion: n/a
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Navyri
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Thread Name: En Pointe
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Kinda lost where I was going with this thread shortly after the beginning. Sorry if it's boring.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Skill Based
Knowledge: Acrobatics: Toe Touch
Acrobatics: How to Leap Gracefully
Acrobatics: How to Do the Splits
Dancing: En Pointe
Dancing: Tour Jeté
Endurance: Running on Bloodied Feet
Non-Skill Based
Location: Andaris
Gravokian: Counting

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Bloodied/Blistered feet
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Last edited by Navyri on Tue Oct 10, 2017 1:17 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 84
"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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