Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Sons & Daughters
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards: N/A
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Yes

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: The Tell
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Interrogation: Lies Rewarded with Pain
Interrogation: Lies Rewarded with Future Threats
Interrogation: Ask Questions Directly
Leadership: Asking for What You Need
Leadership: Taking Over a Situation
Leadership: Defeating Naysayers with Success

Non-skill:
Hand of Truth: A Dominant Hand Twitch Signals a Lie

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: Yes, for successful interrogation of a mage
Collaboration: No

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Rising Tides
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: This thread covers some of the challenges for the event challenge.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none; dream thread
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Collaboration: yes

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Colder Weather
City/Area: Westguard
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language

Just a two-parter this time, nothing extreme. Really more tying up some loose ends. Enjoy the sense of foreboding... ;-)

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Knowledge:
Endurance: Training While Wounded and Winded, To Prepare for the Same in Battle
Persuasion: Reassuring a Child
Shield (Heater): Use in a Shield Wall
Shield (Heater): Only Useful If It's In Front of You
Tactics: Expect Your Enemy to Strike When You Aren't Ready
Teaching: Identifying Flaws in a Student's Form


Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Martyn: Sneak Little Shit

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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Cold and kind of alone
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None - just a simple memory to establish a bit about Kes' goals
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Field craft: Small kindling makes better starter for fires
  • Discipline: Counting steps in order to return from where you started
  • Falconry: Whistling to give commands
  • Navigation: Following roads for quicker travel
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: Up to reviewer
Collaboration: Newp


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Kesindir: "Spoken word in Rakahi"
"Spoken word in Common"
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Others: "Spoken word"


"I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived....I wanted to live deep and suck out all the marrow of life." ~ Henry David Thoreau
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Losing his Lunch Moneh
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: Beatings and trash talk.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Acrobatics: Breaking one's fall on a soft body.
Endurance: Taking a beating.
Etiquette: Addressing a nobleman properly.
Intimidation: Mocking a nobleman in order to demoralize
Tactics: Letting one's assailants trip over themselves.
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Rushing a guy without warning.
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Flying noodle tackle
Unarmed Combat (Grappling): Simple matter to toss a flying noodle aside.

Loot: Class is already paid for
Injuries/Overstepping: Bumps, bruises. Nothing that won't heal by now.
Renown: 5 for getting gud and training with a nobleman.
Collaboration: Yes
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Rynmere: Jack North; Rharne: Robin Faulk, Tom Puddleton, Ruwayd al-Karim

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Krome Accent, Short (5'2"), Often carries either a bindle or a large bag/satchel.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Knife Club
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: A complete training thread. Maybe a bit dull?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Blades (Dagger): Commit when you mean to attack.
Blades (Dagger): Every moment is critical
Blades (Dagger): Don't let your enemy's movements go unanswered.
Blades (Dagger): Dagger is the best blade for close quarters.
Detection: Is that a knife in your pocket or are you just happy to see me.
Seduction: Don't be surprised if she kisses you back.

Loot: Class fee paid for long ago
Injuries/Overstepping: Prolly not.
Renown: Not sure.
Collaboration: No

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Rynmere: Jack North; Rharne: Robin Faulk, Tom Puddleton, Ruwayd al-Karim

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Krome Accent, Short (5'2"), Often carries either a bindle or a large bag/satchel.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: A Fisher of Fish
City/Area: Surrounding waters of Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Just some good ol' boring fishing!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Fishing: Fish prefer quiet over noisy areas
Fishing: Using a net to catch more fish at a time
Fishing: Baiting the water to attract more fish
Fishing: Inspecting equipment for flaws or breaks
Discipline: Focusing on tasks at hand
Field Craft: Using fire to repair fraying on a net
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Sore back from digging for half a break
Renown: Up to reviewer
Collaboration: No

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Kesindir: "Spoken word in Rakahi"
"Spoken word in Common"
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Others: "Spoken word"


"I went to the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front only the essential facts of life, and see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I had not lived....I wanted to live deep and suck out all the marrow of life." ~ Henry David Thoreau
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: [Public Library] Bookshelves and Black Feathers
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: This thread covers a lot of challenges for the event challenge.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Ari'sora
Skill Knowledge

Linguistics: languages are grouped into families that share similar characteristics
Linguistics: Languages of Northern Idalos; Cerke, Murnasian, Basa, Perwarshian, Pij'thak, and Sulnysian
Linguistics: Languages of Southern Idalos; Banumi, Grovokian, Arathnaka Runes, Umhini, Dydahi Etch, and Xototi
Linguistics: Languages of Eastern Idalos; Omyeric, and G'ni
Linguistics: Languages of Western Idalos; Athivelienic, Irarian, Nysin, Anume, Nidtaic, Rifaish, Dregneen, and Naratrien
Linguistics: Languages of Central Idalos; Pailtic, Ku'aric, Ominowa, and Yjik
Linguistics: Common is spoken everywhere
Linguistics: some languages are not part of a particular family
Linguistics: languages that aren't part of a language family may have originated in one city rather than a region, or be used primarily be one race
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): using your wings to batter an enemy works just as well as hitting them

Non Skill Knowledges

Language: Anume

Language: Arathnaka Runes

Language: Athivelienic
Language: Banumi
Language: Basa
Language: Cerke

Common: is a trade language
Common: is a spoken and written language
Common: alphabet
Common: numbers 1-100
Common: "yes" and "no"
Common: simple greetings
Common: "My name is..."
Common: "I speak little Common."
Common: "Can you speak Scalveen?"


Language: Dregneen
Language: Dydahi Etch

Language: G'ni

Language: Grovokian

Language: Irarian

Language: Ku'aric

Language: Murnasian

Language: Naratrien

Language: Nidtaic

Language: Nysin

Language: Ominowa

Language: Omyeric

Language: Pailtic

Language: Perwarshian

Language: Pij'thak

Language: Rakahi
Rakahi: language of the Bi'qaj
Rakahi: spoken primarily in Rynmere and Ne'haer
Rakahi: is a spoken language
Rakahi: has very subtle but specific accents and undertones when certain words or syllables are uttered that gives a clue to other Biqaj where the speaker was raised
Rakahi: can be difficult for non Biqaj to learn
Rakahi: alphabet
Rakahi: numbers 1-100
Rakahi: "bad object"; a swear

Language: Rifaish

Language: Sulnysian

Language: Umhini

Language: Xototi

Language: Yjik

Kyreen: is a baker
Kyreen: is good at moving heavy things
Kyreen: helped Ari'sora
Kyreen
Skill

Strength: using legs as well as arms
Strength: hauling a heavy weight
Strength: carrying another person
Strength: levers, even long limbs, make moving things easier
Logistics: appraising a situation before planning
Logistics: using available resources
Caregiving: supporting an injured person
Medicine: heavy blows can dislocate joints
Medicine: injured people should be carried
Research: choosing one book of many
Socialisation: joking about weaknesses


Non-skill

Biology: Bird reproduction methods
Biology: Mammal repropuction methods
Biology: Reptile reproduction uses a mix of eggs and live births
Biology: Fish reproduction methods
Biology: Some creatures care for their young and others don't
Biology: Not all creatures pair up to mate

PC: Ari'sora: winged woman



Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: Ari'sora's left shoulder and wing were dislocated. The injuries themselves are healed when the joints are popped back into place. But she will suffer lingering soreness for several trials. She also has many bruises ranging from mild to moderate in severity. These will also heal in several trials.
Renown: none for Ari'sora, but possibly slight for Kyreen for helping Ari'sora
Collaboration: yes

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Last edited by Rei'sari on Wed Dec 26, 2018 10:18 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 530
Rei'sari was formerly Ari'sora, but after getting a fresh start in life and a new appearance from Vega, she changed her name to Rei'sari.
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Re: Review Request Thread 2.1.8

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Thread Name: Knapping the Hog
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: On the short /quick side, job thread.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Pickpocketing: It's easier if they just hand it over.
Pickpocketing: Don't just shove your hand in their pocket.
Pickpocketing: Shove bystanders into the mark, as a distraction.
Climbing: Crevices in a wall can be gripped.
Running: Make tight turns to throw off heavier pursuers.
Acrobatics: Leaping off a wall.

Loot: Just wages
Injuries/Overstepping: Prolly doesn't matter at this point, but nothing serious anyway.
Renown: Slight or small for committing a crime.
Collaboration: No
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Aliases
Rynmere: Jack North; Rharne: Robin Faulk, Tom Puddleton, Ruwayd al-Karim

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Krome Accent, Short (5'2"), Often carries either a bindle or a large bag/satchel.
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