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Hans
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: So It Begins
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
  • Empathy: Knotting a Thread
  • Empathy: Knowing When Not To Use Magic
  • Politics: About Knowing Your Enemies and Your Allies
  • Politics: Making An Ally
  • Politics: Being Owed Favours Gives You Power
  • Rhetoric: Knowing the Proper Place for a Conversation
  • Rhetoric: Explaining Family History
  • Ree Dornae: Mage (Executed)
  • The Ne'haer Council: Uses Propaganda
  • The Coven of Ellasin: Ne'haer Base
  • Alistair: Attractive
Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Yes
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Due to his Competency in Empathy, Hans can 'taste' emotions.

While these tastes always stay the same, Hans is either repulsed or attracted
to certain tastes due to his own current emotional states.

While happiness might be delicious to him at one time, this could be disgusting to him
if he is in a troubled personal state.
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Thread Name: Freedom?
City/Area: Outside of scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Not really?
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge) 7 posts total, collab thread so 8?
Endurance: Handling Dehydration
Endurance: Stubbornness can trump immediate desires
Fieldcraft: Don't drink sea water
Acting: Communicating without words
I don't feel as if this thread really "earned any knowledges for skills"

Kali'rial: Gave me water
Kali'rial: Familiar tattoos
Baya: Gave me a flower
Baya: Can sing
Pash: Gave me calm
Pash: Carried me to town
Faith: Gave me healing
Faith: Has soft hands

Loot: (If applicable) None
Injuries/Overstepping: Sunburn. Bruising. Splinters. Wing Dislocated.
Fame: Eh None?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: (No)
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Oberan
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Profession: Full time nuisance
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Thread Name: Hallway to Infinity
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Maybe some language from time to time
Requested Rewards:
Pier and Pre: Twin Goddesses
Pier and Pre: Follow Vri around
Vri: Lord of Death
Treid: Immortal without a heart
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Just because I shouldn't doesn't mean I won't.


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Padraig
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Thread Name: The One OnThe Right Pt II
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Skill Knowledge:
None

Loot: +1 flute, +1 pair of shoes, +1 chemistry set, +1 brush, comb, mirror, +1 leather handbag, +1 chest, +1 skeleton model, +1 brain model, +1 lithograph of circulatory system, +1 engagement ring, +1 workshop in the garden!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: None

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Padraig
Skill Knowledge:
None

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Give a gift: flute (+2), (+2) pair of shoes, (+2) chemistry set, (+2) brush, (+2) comb, (+2) mirror, (+2) leather handbag, (+2) chest, (+2) skeleton model, (+2) brain model, (+2) lithograph of circulatory system, (+2) engagement ring, (+2) workshop in the garden! = +26
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

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Aqihlih
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Thread Name: The Most Important Lesson
City/Area: Scal Town
Notes/Warnings: Violence against a child
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Disinfecting a wound
Medicine: Ointment is good for wounds
Surgery: When to stich a wound
Surgery: The uses of scalpels
Endurance: Withstanding pain
Deception: The point of a good poker face

Yludih: An ostracized race
Yludih: The body will trick the brain to survive
Yludih: Crystal bodies yield easy

The Doctor: A horrible man
The Doctor: Everyone is his experiment
The Doctor: Deserves nothing but a gruesome death

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Two wounds on the palm that will likely scar
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Thread Name: [Oakleigh] Liquid Purple.
City/Area: Oakleigh, Eastern Settlement, Rynmere.
Notes/Warnings: Nope. This is a job thread; Hart does odd jobs, and this depicts (controlled) drug use.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge (6 total for a solo)--
1. Common: Placebo, a false drug given during a drug test
2. Common: Saline, salty water
3. Common: Teaser release, an initial release of a product to test the product's reception
4. Common: Pipette, another name for a small glass dropper
5. Gardening: How to make a spore print/how to collect a mushroom's spores
6. Gardening: Parts of a mushroom

Other Knowledge--
Location: Dewwich, Oakleigh, the Eastern Settlement
Location: Thorn greenhouse, Dewwich
Location: Thorn manor, Dewwich
Location: Thorn hospital, Dewwich
NPC: Ives, the gentleman
Drug (Rynmere): Liquid Purple (hallucinogenic mushrooms)
Liquid Purple (drug): Steep in hot water, strain, make into a purplish tea and drink
Liquid Purple (drug): Causes hallucinations, light nausea
Thorn family: Deals in pharmaceuticals

Loot: +1 letter from Lyla on fancy paper. +1 small bag of mushrooms (good for one dose), -12gn for price of mushrooms.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Perhaps positive fame, not sure. Whatever you see.
Collaboration: No.
Magic EXP: No.

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Tei'serin Nji'ryn
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Thread Name: [Treth] Reluctant Healer
City/Area: Ne'haer/Treth
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Linguistics: Some languages are harder to learn than others due to a variety of reasons.
Linguistics: Building blocks are important; the alphabet leads to words, and words lead to sentences.
Linguistics: a polyglot is a person who knows and is able to use several languages

Medicine: Signs of alcohol poisoning include; confusion, vomiting, slow breathing (less than eight breaths a bit), irregular breathing (a gap of more than 10 trills between breaths), blue-tinged skin or pale skin, low body temperature (hypothermia), severely slurred speech, stupor (conscious but unresponsive), and passing out when the patient is unable to be awakened

Medicine: Treatment for alcohol poisoning includes constant monitoring while the alcohol works its way out of the body to prevent choking, and breathing problems, administering fluids to combat the severe dehydration, and the use of vitamins to prevent serious complications.

Medicine: Herbal remedies will not work on alcohol poisoning, and can make things worse. Only a skilled doctor can treat it without harming the patient further.


Other Knowledge

Ne'haer Holiday: Alcohol Appreciation Day

Tei'serin: hates Alcohol Appreciation Day
Tei'serin: knows when she's out of her depth

Aloe: Aloe juice has the ability to coat the stomach lining allowing it to bring down inflammation and balance out acidity. It is best to drink it directly, but it can be diluted in a non-acidic juice if necessary.

Bloodroot: a red wildflower
Bloodroot: grows in early Ashan
Bloodroot: prefers wooded areas
Bloodroot: the roots and rhizome (creeping rootstalk) are best harvested in Vhalar
Bloodroot: can be used to make a red dye when the sap is mixed with animal fat
Bloodroot: the dye is good for dying clothing, wool, and baskets, and can even be used to stain wooden furniture.
Bloodroot: is a beautiful plant that has one single flower that has eight to twelve petals and a bright yellow center
Bloodroot: a good mosquito repellent
Bloodroot: can cause a skin irritation similar to poison ivy in some people
Bloodroot: should be tested on a small area of skin first to see if the patient will have a reaction to it
Bloodroot: is not edible
Bloodroot: the red sap that can be taken from the fresh root can be used to treat ulcers, and skin conditions, as well as being used as a blood purifier when taken orally or used as a caustic topical treatment
Bloodroot: the juice is good for coughs and sore throats, but the bitter taste must be masked, usually by honey, or maple sugar
Bloodroot: in powder form, it can be mixed with water and drunk quickly to cause nausea, and vomiting - it works quickly due to the strength of the herb, but large doses can cause foot pain, tunnel vision, or even be fatal
Bloodroot: the use of bloodroot as a caustic agent in the form of a salve or paste can cause localized tissue damage, and disfiguring scarring
Bloodroot: a paste made from the sap mixed with water can be used to get rid of warts and moles if applied each trial for thirty trials

Milk Thistle: helps prevent hangovers by cleansing the liver

Peppermint: makes a good hangover remedy
Peppermint: soothes nausea by neutralizing overabundant acids and brings down inflammation in the intestinal tract
Peppermint: sipping on peppermint tea the morning after drinking will quell thirst and help bring you back to normalcy

Tei'serin: is interested in learning how to make dyes that can be made out of herbs

Ancient Language: is a rare language
Ancient Language: is hard to learn

Desire to know something fuels the determination to learn it, which in turn makes it seem easier to learn than it might really be.
Dreams aren't always practical.

Loot: Free Item: A five arc aged bottle of red wine from the Lysorian wine region, valued at 30gn. It has a heavy oaky flavour, and is best enjoyed with red meats, +2 Bonus Skill Points


Injuries/Overstepping: none
Fame: Maybe for doing good deeds/helping others?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Atashi
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Thread Name: [Bounty]What did I Stumble Into?
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence I think
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none, I think
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

NOTE: This thread is super old and was graded for the other guy before the system changed. I haven't wrote 1500 words, but I can't continue the thread either.
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Thread Name: [Immortal's Tongue] Couriers Part 2: Alone
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

NOTE: Another old thread, don't know if I wrote 1500 words, didn't check.

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Thread Name: [Darbyton] A tale of two tails
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Lots'a blood, death, violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Shielded Combat (Tower Shield): Structural damage capacity can be breached and should be avoided.
Shielded Combat: Holding fast when backed against the floor as a final resort.
Loot: -1 standard large tower shield
Injuries/Overstepping: this was like arc 716, don't worry about it
Fame: None?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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