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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Setting up A Sybil
City/Area: White Forrest, Viden
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Trap Making: Making large spikes
Trap Making: Making harden spikes
Construction: Hardening wood
Construction: Constructing large spikes
Field Craft: Hardening wood in fire
Field Craft: Shaping a piece of harden wood

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
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Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Llyr Llywelyn
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Special delivery: Thesonyourekindameanto
City/Area: Quacia, Lair
Notes/Warnings: Violence, some gore, drama, it's long...

Requested Rewards:
Fridgar
Knowledge:
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Deflecting arrows with the flat of your ax.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Disarming a knife by removing the hand.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Chopping off someone's hand in combat.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Evading while wielding an ax.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Judging the right time to strike.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Using the light weight of your weapon as an advantage against a foe with a larger, heavier weapon.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Rendering an opponent unable to fight by chopping off both their arms.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Slashing someone's throat with an ax.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Executing your fallen foes in order.
Axes & Bludgeons: [War Ax]: Evading crossbow bolts while in combat with another.
Deception: Pretending to be concerned for someone's wellbeing.
Deception: Pretending to brag.
Hone: Mental Trigger for runic traps.
Hone: Dilation: Catching more than a dozen people in a single trap via Dilation.
Tactics: Making yourself known to the enemy can be a good thing.
Tactics: Drawing out your enemies into your trap.
Tactics: Check before every kill so that you don't kill the person you're looking for.
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Zarik: Enjoys adrenaline rushes
Zarik: Struggles with seeing people die
Zarik: Got shot in the hand
Zarik: Surprisingly durable when his father is concerned
Zarik: You stress him out
Zarik: Put his foot down with you
Zarik: Enters a trance-like-state when a melody is whistled to him
Zarik: The whistle that puts him in a trance
Zarik: Took charge over his father
Zarik: Thanked you for your help

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: +5-10 ? for massacring an unofficial cult of Chrien?
Zarik
Knowledge:
Logistics: Getting to and from Lair (Quacia).
Deception: Acting as if an injury is worse than it is.
Etiquette: Knocking first might not always be best in dangerous situations.
Stealth: Retreating into shadows.
Stealth: Keep back once injured.
Stealth: Using Low Status to Escape Notice
Combat (Unarmed): Blocking an arrow… with your hand.
Intelligence: Discovering a great deal of unknown pivotal information.
Intelligence: A web of overlapping connections.
Tactics: Giving strangers the benefit of the doubt can backfire.
Tactics: Take the element of surprise when you can.
Endurance: You’ve come this far, don’t turn back now.
Endurance: Resolute persistence.
Transmutation: Corrosion too close to an impaled object can melt my own flesh.
Detection: Bloodlust
Detection: The sound of a whip
Detection: A tripwire trap below the knee.
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Fridgar: Bloodlust.
Fridgar: Helped me.
Personal: Something doesn't make sense when it comes to Fridgar.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: Crossbow bolt to the center of the hand, poorly managed surgery.
Renown: +5 (being Zalazar's son and coming to get him?)

Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Hone for Fridgar, using a trap on multiple people via technique and activated his first mental trigger in this thread. Maybe partial Transmutation for Zarik - he learned a new important thing about using Corrosion.
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Rabbit dinner
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?)
Notes/Warnings: Very detailed cleaning of a rabbit
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hunting: Remembering where prey is
Hunting: Using a wolf to help hunt
Hunting: Co-op hunting
Tactics: Tell your subordinate your plans
Tactics: Scare your enemy out
Tactics: Outsmart your foe

Loot: 1 Rabbit Pelt
Injuries/Overstepping:
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Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Praetorum
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Native Tongue: Part 1
City/Area: Yaralon
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Linguistics: Language: Common (Yari)
Linguistics: Language: Common Sign
Linguistics: Yari Common uses ‘ar’ and ‘or’ sounds
Linguistics: Yari Common uses aye instead of yes
Linguistics: Tongue twisters and rhymes can be helpful
Rhetoric: Trying to get out of learning a new language

Pythia: Mute
Pythia: Is a polyglot

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: None
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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

Head

  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Kaelrik
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: be always aware
City/Area: Quacia
Notes/Warnings: Excited derpiness.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rupturing: Bestows complete spatial awareness
Rupturing: Awareness of movement within ten feet
Rupturing: Awareness of the passage of things within ten feet
Meditation: Filtering out distractions to enable focus
Meditation: Quiet surroundings assist the inexperienced
Writing: Drafting concise notes for reference at a later date

Loot: Notes on the basics of Novice level Rupturing.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience?: Yes. Rupturing. Kaelrik has learned that he is aware of all of the things...to an extent.
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Hunting The Beast
City/Area: White forrest Viden
Notes/Warnings: Very Violent not for the squeamish
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Hunting: Improvising when things go wrong
Hunting: Vel'ky Bear hunting
Hunting: Vel'ky Bears are huge
Tactics: Traps are important
Tactics: Use everything at your disposal
Tactics: Thinking fast when things go wrong

Loot: Bear
Campsite with walls
Injuries/Overstepping: A gash on Wald's arm
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Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: VI. From This Place of Wrath and Tears
City/Area: Mistral Woods, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: The usual - language, violence, what I do best!

Okay, starting to wrap it up now, but I can't just leave things hanging. One more to go!

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Blades (Dagger): Under The Chin, Into The Brain
Detection: Piecing Together How a Fight Transpired
Medicine: Making a Simple Poultice
Medicine: Applying a Poultice After Stitches
Medicine: Calendula Makes a Good Anti-Infection Poultice
Philosophy: A Quick Death Beats a Lingering, Painful One


Loot: +1 good quality combat knife/dagger
Injuries/Overstepping: Just the continuing effects of overstepping from the last part
Renown: Almost...
Wealth Points: Not yet
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
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Common Speech | Thoughts | Ith'ession Speech | Speech of Others
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Kalortah
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Singing to the Dark
City/Area: Viden Academy Scalvoris campus.
Notes/Warnings: Study thread. Boooring. Sorry :(
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Singing: Keep your throat well lubricated to prevent mishaps.
Singing: Acoustics can make or break a performance.
Singing: Everyone has a certain range they can hit. Nobody has it all.
Singing: Taking care of your health is essential to maximize your voice's potential.
Singing: Breathing exercise to warm up your instrument (voice)
Abrogation: Disrupting sound waves with a quick barrier.

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: don't think so
Renown: for attending class.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Very light use of abrogation. Moderator's discretion.
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Kalortah is always under the effect of the Tarouz ability,
Grandeur

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Eldyn Morose
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Larza Impre
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Flavius Erythrian
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Milian Le Moigne
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Wald Lowca
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

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Thread Name: Knock on Wood
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Single father issues. And insults towards a crippled boy
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Like i have Dreamwalker As if

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown:
Wealth Points:
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience?: (No)
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 44
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Ricky
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Re: Review Request 2.2.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Along the Merry Waves
City/Area: Orm'del
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Skill
  • Instrument (Ukulele): Flat Notes
  • Instrument (Ukulele): Sharp Notes
  • Instrument (Ukulele): Tuning
  • Instrument (Ukulele): Higher Octaves
  • Instrument (Ukulele): Lower Octaves
  • Discipline: Patience With Learning Instruments
Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: Nah
Wealth Points: Nah
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Collaboration: Nurp
Magic Experience?: No
Reviewed by Strange
word count: 86
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