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So the trio got to setting the field for what would become the Orchard Walk. A pathway of trees and shaded bowers where trees, bushes, flowers, and plants would grow up and down the way. Kisaik was a bit of an eye in the sky for much of this process. He'd learned a great deal about leadership with Vega and Winston over the past few cycles, between Vega's aiding Hopetoun with the construction of the Beacon, to the founding of Sweetsong, and the defense thereof against the formidable Pirate Lords that had attacked it. He'd learned much from his friends, and put it all to use, leading them in their efforts to bring some more green to Sweetwine, and the vale where they'd chosen to build their community.

Kisaik was very hands on, as he had to be for much of the splicing of plants. To ensure that every plant that didn't grow on the canopy wouldn't suffer for lack of sunlight, he spliced the trait of the Sweetwine Vine into each and every instance of ground vegetation. Vega pitched in with the heavier lifting and logistics of it all, also helping to lead the other villagers in their supportive efforts. Just all around bringing much needed muscle to their efforts.

Winston was the morale-boosting gale of discord, singing poorly for them all. Yet even though his voice was a little hard on the ears, the rhythm was good enough that everyone found their own way forward through his chorus. Kisaik joined in with some mis-matched harmonies of his own, not being a great singer himself, but he enjoyed it as much as most. He even helped with a bit of air-flute and ocarina to accompany their efforts in between his work splicing the necessary plants.

The traps were set in unobtrusive places, where people wouldn't stumble into them blindly, but setting the stage for clear boundaries to be established when they would be needed. He held off on anything overtly offensive.

The trees themselves were spliced with Sweetwine Vine Tomatoes, as Kisaik had the sole progenitor in its pot nearby, taking leaves and buds and placing them all along the trees flowering branches. He took his time, speaking and humming to the plants as he went about the business, not too brusquely.

Eventually, the grove would bear fruits of the Sweetwine Vine Tomato, when the trees would grow. The Sweetstone Tree would encourage the growth throughout the seasons, and they'd have fully fruited by the next growing season, he was confident, so long as the Sweetstone Tree stood.

Finally having planted most of the lines of tree seeds along the path, he joined the rest of the villagers near the Sweetstone tree where he bid them arrive shortly after their work concluded at the end of the day.

He smiled at them all, as he stood upon a low-hanging branch from the shining tree, it's boughs filled with jade and other such jewels.

"My friends, you've all done marvelously. Now it's time for the Sweetstone Tree to do its part I believe, if it sees merit in our works?" He patted the branch below his feet, and so bid the spiritual energies imbedded in the tree, and its powerful concept of growth to spread through to the end of the Orchard's walk. Sure enough, the seedlings broke their shells from the ground, quickening there to small saplings one after the other.

"There we have it!"
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Thread: [Sweetsong] Orchards Walk
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods

Renown: Yes for creating a marvel of gardening as a community.
Do you want this to be considered for Mark Progression? (Y / N) Yes
If so - which mark. Loshova for Kisaik and Winston, and Daianaya for Vega
Peer Reviewers: Please give feedback as to whether you feel this is appropriate for Mark Progression.
Once feedback is received, player should then post in the PSF.
If any PC in this thread is in a faction, please list them: Song-Forged, Kisaik Vega and Winston and I think Jasper too, not sure.
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Collaboration: Yes
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Kisaik:

Knowledge:
Gardening: 8
Leadership: 1

Loot: -
Language -
Losses: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 15. For creating a marvel of gardening as a community.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Winston:

Knowledge:
Flying: Living day-by-day 'in the air'
Gardening: Learning how to garden from a GM!
Gardening: You have to plan for optimal growing conditions in advance
Medicine: Snekfruit: Can heal or Harm
Research: Botany: Wickon Tree
Research: Botany: Plants from Rynmere

Loot: -
Language -
Losses: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 15. For creating a marvel of gardening as a community.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Vega:

Knowledge:
Gardening: Learning from the actions of another, more experienced gardener
Singing: Singing in harmony to a tone-deaf ferret

Loot: -
Language -
Losses: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 15. For creating a marvel of gardening as a community.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15

Jasper:

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Finding a Babysitter who likes there job

Loot: -
Language -
Losses: -
Wealth: -
Injuries: -
Renown: 15. For creating a marvel of gardening as a community.
Skill Review: Appropriate to level.
Points: 15
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Comments: I love how you three worked together on the Orchard Walk and decided to write about a calendar event!

The Orchard Walk sounds wonderful!

Kisaik’s ability to just pluck seeds from his hair amazes me, and your writing makes it obvious that he truly cares about the settlement and his friends. On top of that, he is very creative!

And i he knows a lot about gardening!

I didn’t know that Winston could turn into a fairy. I have to say, it suits him. And his berries are fun!

It’s good to see that Joy is still with Vega and that she seems to do well after what she’s been through. I like how you write Vega’s children – and that they are very much a part of her threads.

I love how Vega has no problem with Winston being a fairy, but is just wondering why he is a fairy right now!

I almost forgot that people are more focused on spirits in Melrath. You described Jasper’s attitude when it comes to the Immortals very well, Jasper. Jasper seems like a very spiritual man!

This thread can be used for mark progression and faction points in my opinion. Please apply for them in the PSF and the appropriate trackers.

Enjoy your rewards!
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