[Haven] Bringing Together the Past and Future...

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Balthazar Black
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The time for speeches began but Balthazar lingered behind the settlement leaders. He was the shadow on the wall, even though he glowed. Easy to see but not being looked at or looked for. His involvement with the settlements had reduced greatly when Kura removed him from power but it had not ended. He still had friends, allies, and loyalists among the settlers of Haven. He had people he knew would want to hear something from him. The difference now was that he didn't feel that it was his place to speak to those small sects of people. In private, over a drink or two, maybe- but not on the same stage as Darius and Elisabeth. What Darius interpreted as a need for time to gather his thoughts, Balthazar had intended to serve as a notice that he'd not speak on the same stage as them.

If they felt he had a place among them to speak from, he would figure something out.

Elisabeth had said that their effort starting the settlement had helped her when she came into control of Haven, but Balthazar didn't know that he believed it. She'd have done as well as him if she'd been the founder. She might even have started them off in a better place than he did. He had so many goals in those trials. Goals that were achievable if not simple. Goals that stretched the bounds of alchemy and magic. Goals he could not follow through with as soon as his magic had been sealed away from him. Goals that did not matter now that they were being replaced by new ones.

Elisabeth began with the first address, calling the attention of the many settlers gathered around them. She used flowery words that one might find in a poem or a long rehearsed speech yet they were just the words that seemed to come to Elisabeth. She had that way of speaking and he did not. Elisabeth painted Darius and Balthazar in a light that Balthazar felt only the bearded blonde was worthy of. After all, if he hadn't been leading the people poorly then it was purely the Albarech's choice to remove him. They couldn't make such public statements or implications if they wanted to foster peace for the divide that Balthazar had created.

When Elisabeth was done, Darius spoke and he gave a similarly well-defined speech. Another monument to try and follow with whatever words Balthazar could think to muster. He still didn't know what to say or how he should say it. His history with speeches lead to him being removed from leadership. How was he to speak now without doing the same thing he'd done before? He would not go back on what he felt was true to the people who knew his heart. The longer he waited and listened to the other two, the less he wanted to make a speech. Another speech would do little good for them... but maybe a promise was better? When Darius was done it felt as if all the lingering eyes fell onto Balthazar. They were waiting for him to say something or cement himself as the shadow on the wall and the watcher in the wings. He might have enjoyed being the shadow and the watcher... but it was not right to leave them wondering. He stepped forward as Darius stepped back.

"I am not one for speeches and there is little left for me to say that these two have not. While I do not walk hand and hand with you anymore, I, and the two up here with me, will always be there for any of you. I am not of Scalvoris but I am not of any other land either. I lived my life equal parts in Yaralon and across Idalos exploring. I am and will always be an outlander, but I make this promise to you all now- if you ever need my help, I will answer the call. I will answer and help to the best of my ability as would your leaders." Balthazar made a small gesture back towards Darius and Elisabeth, "You are a strong people. You have brought life where it was never meant to flourish and every trial you help that life thrive. Look to your left, look to your right. Those are the heroes who have saved Faldrass from becoming a ruin. Not one of us here now could have done it without the rest. Enjoy the celebration, it is for you more than for us. It is you who have made this whole journey succeed."
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Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
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Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

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  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.

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Elisabeth quietly listened to both Darius and Balthazar, silently comparing what all three had said to the settlers. Well, not quite. What they had said was important, obviously, but what intrigued the young leader more was how they told it. The differences between them and their experiences had never been so stark and visible to her.

Darius focused his comments on Scalvoris and the events leading up to the eruption. He was Scalvorian through and through, and what he said reflected that. Elisabeth and Balthazar, however, were not. They were two that, through time and circumstance, had answered the mysterious call of Scalvoris. Elisabeth had focused on the people and their achievements, while Balthazar used his time to set himself apart and manifest unification. Sometimes Elisabeth worried that Haven didn't benefit from having a Scalvorian leader. Still, she did the best she could to learn from the settlers and incorporate what she learned into the traditions of Haven.

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The speeches were done, and at Delilah's direction, small vellum vessels were loaded into the longboats and taken out beyond the waves crashing to shore. Setting the little boats free into the Hollow Sea was an essential part of the tradition, so a few settlers from both Haven and Hopetoun oversaw the sentimental launch.

The rest of the evening went as anticipated. Stories were told; time was shared. After it was said and done, there was an agreement between all the settlers that the gathering of reclamation trial would become an annual event, passing hosting responsibilities back and forth between the two settlements.

For Elisabeth, she found herself watching the settlers, sharing their experience. But more often than not, the young mage's eyes drifted to Balthazar, always prompting a soft expression to return to her features. As often was the case, he didn't say a lot in a crowd's presence, but she didn't need him to - his being there to share the event with her meant more than words could express.

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  • Language: Scalveen

Elisabeth Black

  • Renown: 10
  • XP: 15
  • Knowledges:
    • Psychology: Helping people move forward from tramua
    • Politics: A united front helps shore up bridges between people
    • Teaching: Patience is a needed virtue when teaching others
    • Etiquette: Using a speech to welcome people to your settlement
    • Leadership: Giving credit where credit is due

Darius Baer

  • Renown: 10
  • XP: 15
  • Knowledges:
    • Meditation: Make time for meditation.
    • Logistics: Managing manpower to ensure all bases are covered.
    • Seafaring: A captain should always be prepared to go down with the ship, even when the ship isn't going down.
    • Psychology: Recognising someone's demeanour.
    • Seafaring: Understanding the flow of currents.
    • Politics: Working with others to present a united front.
    • Etiquette: The host should always speak first.
    • Socialization: Include your audience so that they feel a personal connection to your speech.
    • Leadership: Empower your people.

Balthazar Black

  • Renown: 10
  • XP: 15
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Skill Review: All Skills used appropriately to PC's level
Notes: This was an interesting ceremony and gathering. A neat way to bring together the two settlements on Faldrass. I'm sure this will have lasting impacts and result in lifelong bonds for the people of both villages.

The scene and action as everyone got ready to get together was meticulously described and laid out, and left not a moment where I felt there were empty spaces in the narrative. Balthazar was his ordinary non-festive and borderline sardonic self. Elisabeth was the perfect hostess, and Darius of course a good presence.

I enjoyed the speeches of each character, from Elisabeth's flowery lyricism to Darius' inspiring speech, and then Balthazar's deferential humility. It was an interesting look at each of these three characters, that have become something of a trio lately if I'm not mistaken. Anyway, good writing. Enjoy the rewards.

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