Review Request 2.2.4

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Mathias Blackwood
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Holding Storm's Edge: Let's Cook This Noodle
City/Area: Storm's Edge, Rharne.
Notes/Warnings: Language, violence.
Mathias Skills Used: Blades (Novice), Transmutation (Expert), Strength (Novice), Endurance (Novice), Tactics (Novice)
Kasoria Skills Used: Abrogation (Master), Karambit (Master), Acrobatics (Expert), Tactics (Master), Deception (Expert), Detection (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Mathias Knowledge: Transmutation - The Strength of Adamantite, Transmutation - The Sharpness of Adamantite, Transmutation - The Color of Ivory, Transmutation - Shapecraft is not meant to go through your foot, Strength x 2, Endurance x 2, Blades (Gladius) x 3
Kasoria Knowledge: Abrogation x2, Dual Wield: Dagger x Karambit x2, Karambit x1, Deception x1, Persuasion x2
Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable. In thread I gave Mathias spontaneous bleeding, pains, and ether explosion.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: If applicable.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes. Transmutation for Mathias.

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Mathias Blackwood
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Holding Storm's Edge: Let Loose The Worms of War
City/Area: Storm's Edge area, Rharne.
Notes/Warnings: Language, violence, a little gore?
Mathias Skills Used: Ranged (Expert), Transmutation (Expert), Strength (Novice), Endurance (Novice), Tactics (Novice), Detection (Competent), Strength (Novice), Running (Untrained), Climbing (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Strength - Lifting Your Own Weight, Tactics - Getting Out of Fireworm Reach, Climbing - Easier with arrow-handles, Ranged x 3
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: Yes, Transmutation.

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Vega Dweeb
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: ~~~~ Not Just Strong, Snuffle Strong!~~~~~
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Vega

Knowledge:
Used:
Leadership: Master
Musical Instrument: Stringed: FIddle: GM
Intimidation: Competent

Requested:
Intimidation: x 3
Leadership x 3


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None

Renown: Yes please.

Wealth Points: Nope


Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience?: No

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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: The Most Dangerous of Cages
City/Area: Ne'haer underground.
Notes/Warnings: References to violence, maybe foul language. Not much otherwise.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Woe

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[*]Discipline:  Standing by the man who just ambushed and kidnapped you without expressing hostility.
[*]Discipline:  Suppressing an immediate reaction.
[*]Persuasion:  Try to convince a monster that killing someone isn't necessary.
[*]Rhetoric:  Wrestling with your own morality in the form of a speech.
[*]Rhetoric:  Arguing for the sparing of a life.
[*]Rhetoric:  Warning against the dangers of magic.
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Discipline: Expert
Persuasion: Competent
Rhetoric: Novice
Loot/Losses: +1 Hone grimoire
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: none
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

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Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain
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Ulric
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: A Suit of Armor Unlike Any Other
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Ghosty stuff. Language?
Skills Used: Syphon (Competent), Materialization (Master), Possession (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Possession x 3, Materialization x 2, Syphon x 1
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None. Can't claim wage.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No. Ghost XP.

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Ulric
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Great Ghost Metal Battle
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Ghosty stuff. Language?
Skills Used: Syphon (Competent), Materialization (Master), Blades (Competent), Discipline (Novice)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Syphon x 3, Materialization x 3
Loot: Gain Good-Quality Ghost Metal Plate Armor and a Average-Quality Ghost Metal Longsword.
Lose 6 Ingots of Ghost Metal
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None. Can't claim wage.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No. Ghost XP.

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Yrmellyn Cole
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Incredible Ideas
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Old placeholder from 2018 finally filled out and done with!
Requested Rewards:


Yrmellyn

Skills Used: Expert Detection (76x/34k) Expert Investigation (76x/46k).

Skill Knowledge
Detection x3
Investigation x3

Non Skill Knowledge
NPC: The peddler of mystery wine


Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: They Haven't Caught Us Yet
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Lots of alcohol. Our PCs are drunk!
Skills Used: Devin: GM Deception (106x/85k), Master Medicine (151x/43k), Expert Persuasion (76x/43k), Expert Discipline (76x/27k), Competent Detection (26x/23k), Competent Research (26x/17k), Competent Resistance (26x/12k), Competent Strength (27x/28k), 0 Running
Balthazar: Resistance (Untrained), Intelligence (Expert), Acrobatics (Competent), Discipline (Competent), Storytelling (Untrained), Defiance (Masterson), Rupture (Expert), Attunement (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Devin
Intelligence: Bars in Scalvoris
Research: Attunement: Everybody has a frequency
Research: Attunement: Enables you to tell when someone is lying
Research: Attunement: Soothing mutations
Research: Attument: Overstepping can give you tinnitus
Resistance x8
Storytelling x5

Balthazar Black: Yari
Balthazar Black: Private Investigator
Balthazar Black: Attuner, Defier and Rupturer
Balthazar Black: His mutations
Balthazar Black: My frequency made him overstep
Balthazar
Resistance x 8, Rupture (Porthole): Cutting a cigar, Attunement: Overstepping tinnitus, Acrobatics: Walking while really drunk, Storytelling x 5, Intelligence: Bars in Scalvoris, Intelligence: Devin’s House

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: Balthazar overstepped Attunement. That was already taken care of via modbomb though. Apart from that Balthazar is very drunk (0 Resistance), and Devin is kind of drunk (Competent Resistance).
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: Yes, Attunement for Balthazar.
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Carver
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Cold Like The Sea
City/Area: Scalvoris Town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This was meant to be a study thread....... it ends abruptly because it splits into an AF thread. Carver is not the best at focusing on homework. You've been warned. (longer thread, varied scenes).
Laures
Skills Used: Discipline (Novice), Cosmetology (Novice), Running (Unranked)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology x6
Discipline x4
Running x4

Renown: +5 (for being used as a test subject by other students)
Injuries/Overstepping: very minor cigarette burn.
Carver
Skills Used: Resistance (Unranked), Caregiving (Unranked), Discipline (Comp), Endurance (Comp), Engineering (Unranked), Research (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance x1
Seduction x2
Caregiving x4
Resistance: Inhalation: Tobacco (Smoked).
Resistance: Inhalation: Bugberry (Smoked).
Engineering: Using a sketch with arrows to represent the concentration of weight.
Engineering: The shape of structures.
Engineering: Stability in structure.
Engineering: The Triangle is the strongest natural structure.
Engineering: Numbers represent measurements of designs.

Renown: +5 (for standing out in the cold Cylus like a crazy person)
Injuries/Overstepping: scratches on ankle from aye-aye mouse.
Loot: n/a
Wealth Points: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: No

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Devin
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Excitable Boy They All Said
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Skills Used: Rakvald: Meditation: Competent; Discipline: Expert
Devin: Expert Discipline (76x/27k), Competent Meditation (40x/15k), Competent Detection (26x/23k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald
Meditation: x 5
Discipline: x 4
Devin
Discipline x1
Meditation x7
Writing x1
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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N/A
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