[Lore Book] Grammar/Spelling Corrections

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Re: [Lore Book] Grammar/Spelling Corrections

1) I suspect this might be a new rule change, but I'm not certain.

In the Job Thread player guide, there is the following:
viewtopic.php?f=36&t=2684#p11525

"Can I post a job thread for Cylus if we're currently in Ashan?
No. You have to put a job thread or placeholder down during the two months assigned to that season."

Could you clarify whether it should be referring to the seasons Cylus and Ashan, or whether it should be referring to the Rebirth Cycle and Hot Cycle (for example)? I think we can post in whatever cycle we're currently in.

Thanks :)


Edit: Found another

2) Under Succession Characters: viewtopic.php?f=36&t=6687#p41973

"1. If a pc dies then any and all point bank points can be moved to a new pc / existing one via a ticket in the SF. "

any and all banked points?
Edit: Ooops. That's a thing. I guess it's a newbie trying to understand these new concepts.


3) a) From the actual lore this time: wiki/index.php?title=U%27frek

History: First couple of sentences
"Though Vri was messing from the group most of the time, U'frek began to fall for Pre who was so full of life, love, and optimism. "

missing?

b) Further down the page:
"He often journey's with humans and very easily conceals himself within their groups, appearing as an average blind man."

journeys?

c) Near the end:
"He tries to act blind to blend without the human world but others can sometimes see that is can do more than what most blind men can."

to blend in? see that he can do more?
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Re: [Lore Book] Grammar/Spelling Corrections

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Thank you so much! What I've done is:
  • Edited the Job Thread Guide to talk in Cycles, not Seasons. Thank you!
  • Edited the Succession Package. Because we now have a pool of Point Bank Points per player not per pc - wasn't the point you were making, but it brought up a good point so thanks!
  • And U'frek has been edited!
Thanks so much!
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