Review Requests 2.1.6

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Gangui
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hardcore Wagoneering
City/Area: Etzori Free Market
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Rough Whiskers
Unarmed Combat: Death Grapples
Detection: Movements in the dark
Blades (Dirk): Killing blow
Blades (Dirk): Knife in Mouth
Stealth: Moving in the dark.

Loot: Some type of war trophy from killing AA assasins?
Injuries/Overstepping: mustache was ripped off, plus some bruises.
Renown: For killing assassins and sabotaging AA.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Gangui on Thu Aug 30, 2018 3:29 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 77
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Give Me Freedom, Oar Else.
City/Area: Orm'Del Sea
Notes/Warnings: Violence, nothing too explicit. References of rape and slavery.
Requested Rewards: 10 skill points
Knowledge:

Endurance: Working the oars for hours at a time.
Psychology: Assessing the motivations of your subjects.
Psychology: Divesting a broken man of a shred of hope.
Tactics: Executing and instigating a mutiny.
Tactics: Overthrowing a better equipped force with greater numbers.
Unarmed: Arm lock/half-nelson.
Loot: A scourge (Whip)
Injuries/Overstepping: Bumps, Bruises, and lascerations should heal by the time he makes landfall.
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no
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Cervantez
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Do you wanna build a zombie
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?)
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Strength: Transporting a dead body up/down stairs
Discipline: Practice makes perfect
Necromancy: Waking up the Bones
Necromancy: Instructing your Undead
Necromancy: Picking the right corpse
Necromancy: Ether makes the Dead rise like bread

Loot: 3 human thralls, 1 Marrow{Skeleton} Thrall

Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Yes)
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Jonathan Burr
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Fire Flowers, Part III
City/Area: Viden, Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Colorful explosions. Jon has detonated working prototypes of his Fire Flowers in the Viden Academy quad. Students will wake up on the 9th of Saun to colorful bursts of sparks splashing against the windows and covering the entire yard in blue, gold and green colors. Note: The timeline on the Fire Flowers development has been pushed back to give more time in the season. Will post-date threads soon.
Requested Rewards:

Strength: Flinging an object into the air
Chemistry: binding agents
Chemistry: using a binding agent to keep a powder in a shape
Chemistry: Compression makes oxidization slower
Chemistry: basic explosives safety
Chemistry: a large burst of energy will accelerate explosives

Loot: Eureka! The thrill of discovery. Also Fire Flower Powder in Blue, Green and Gold.

Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 152
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Emerit
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Race: Biqaj
Profession: Fisher(wo)man
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Fish for your life - Part II.
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: She found a secret! Friell was one of the world's best swordsman! (Verify with Peg who gave me that secret)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill

Negotiation: Buying as a set lowers the price
Negotiation: Don't bother with low value items
Negotiation: Price versus condition
Negotiation: New category, new price
Appraisal: Good condition = fair price
Appraisal: Own knowledge for reference

Non-skill

Race: Biqaj: Negotiators by birth
Friell: The Spirit of Adventure's shopkeeper
Friell: One of the best swordsman in the world
Friell: Seems to like redheads
Friell: Somewhat charming


Loot:
  • Common pole with fishing line
  • Spinning lures
  • Small hammer
  • Biqaj tree
  • Trap box
  • Harpoons
  • Ear cuff earing
Cost: 33gn 5sn


Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Ellen'wyn
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Àìdá Sädudä
City/Area: Desnind
Notes/Warnings: Another abandoned thread. Niv is no longer an active character, so no rewards are necessary for her.
Ellen’wyn Persuasion: Pleading and begging
Endurance: Having hair pulled
Endurance: Stubbing a toe
Endurance: Toughen your feet by being barefoot
Acrobatics: Vaulting from a high place
Acrobatics: Channeling energy into a fluid change of momentum
Flying: Controlled and slow drop
Meditation: Focus an image in your mind

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: n/a
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Vega Dweeb
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Tall Tales & Truth
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: no

Requested Rewards:
Vega & Arlo
Knowledge:
No knowledge for either of us, thanks.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Naaaah.
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 40
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Vega's skin has a reflective metallic sheen with a red glow. Her eyes still swirl biqaj colours, but one colour is always bright red which glows like fire. She has a bright red glow in her chest, situated directly under the mark of a heart (Daia mark) in the middle of a glowing silver dragon on her chest (Xiur). She's unnaturally warm to the touch
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Tio Silver
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Against the Storm
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Seafaring: Sailing through a storm
Seafaring: Face incoming waves head on
Seafaring: Keeping the crew united
Seafaring: Steering a ship over waves
Seafaring: How lightning affects ships
Singing: Sea Shanties


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Hikaru
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Jeweler's Envy (pt 1)
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Part of a 7 part story.

Knowledge Requested:
Socialization: Accepting a challenge
Endurance: Working all night
Persuasion: Addressing a Crowd
Politics: Making a stand
Politics: Emotional Speech
Leadership: Sharp tone of voice

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: yes

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: n/a
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Hikaru
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Jeweler's Envy (pt 2)
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Part of a 7 part story.

Knowledge Requested:
Elindria: Divine Opulence: Can beautify objects
Politics: Bitter defeat
Socialization: Losing a contest
Endurance: Operating with little sleep
Seduction: Longing Eyes
Empathy: Color of Jealousy

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: yes

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: n/a
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