Review Requests 2.1.6

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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Squeezing Metal
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Just a solo

Knowledge Requested:
Jewelry Crafting: Handling Pliers
Jewelry Crafting: Applying gentle pressure
Jewelry Crafting: Types of gripping tools
Discipline: The importance of being on time
Discipline: Taking it slow and steady
Discipline: Keep information to yourself

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: n/a
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Deeds Most Foul
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Gore.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Throwing Weapon (Dagger): Hitting the Sternum
Throwing Weapon (Dagger): Sinking a Knife Between the Ribs
Throwing Weapon (Dagger): Striking the Upper Chest
Resistance: Handling Dead Bodies
Resistance: Handling Rotten Bindings
Strength: Dragging a Dead Body

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Neg
Renown: Probably not
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Never
word count: 67
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: And So Sanity Slipped
City/Area: Slags Deep, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Violence. Gore.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Gladius): Through the Eye Socket
Stealth: Quieting Breathing
Stealth: Keep Your Profile Low
Stealth: Stay Out of the Light
Stealth: Moving From Obstacle to Obstacle
Stealth: Keep to the Shadows

Non-Skill:
Stormy Skies: Combats Enemy Advantage with Light

Loot: Nah
Injuries/Overstepping: Neg
Renown: Yes, for murder.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Never
word count: 74
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Storm Sent Riches
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Dead body but not graphic at all
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Seafaring: Keeping your footing on deck
Seafaring: Small manuevers
Seafaring: Boarding another ship
Seafaring: Holding a ship steady
Navigation: Planning a route from point A to B
Strength: Dragging up a heavy object

Non-Skill Knowledge:
The Morgana: Shipwreck on the coast of Scalvoris
The Gilded Siren: Rynata's sloop
The Blue Wave: Rynata's family's ship

Loot: None since she gives it away
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Strength in Numbers
City/Area: Rharne Prison, Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Some violence, but nothing vivid. Cursing. Lots of cursing.
Requested Rewards:
Strength: Sit-ups
Strength: Working out regularly
Strength: Easier with help
Strength: Push-ups
Strength: Prison workouts can be tough
Unarmed: A punch to the head
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Memory thread, so no
Renown: 5 maybe, for causing trouble
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: Nope
word count: 70
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: I spy with my biqaj eye
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nurp

Requested Rewards:
Vega
Knowledge:
Caregiving: Playing games with children to distract them
Caregiving: Tickling children
Detection: Spotting land in the distance
Detection: Spotting signs of life
Hunting: Identifying types of mortal tracks by size
Sociology: Strange customs of isolated tribes
Sociology: Gender roles are different across cultures.


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Please. Maybe 10 for this?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
Arlo
Knowledge:
Baking: Using underneath a campfire to bake
Cooking: Preparing a feast in a camp with helpers
Detection: Using a spyglass to make spotting things easier
Detection: Spotting signs of life
Engineering: Making a cooler for a hot trial
Hunting: Identifying types of mortal tracks by size
Sociology: Strange customs of isolated tribes
Sociology: Gender roles are different across cultures.
Storytelling: Gender roles in stories


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping:
Renown: Please. Maybe 10 for this?
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: N/A
word count: 163
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: I. To Teach Terror
City/Area: Etzos, Commercial Circle
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

First of of a three- or maybe four-parter, just setting the stage for what's to follow. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Acting: Feigning Fear and Beggarly Desperation
Discipline: Watch Your Target, Stinking and Uncomfortable, For as Long as You Have To
Disguise: Dirt and Shit Smears to Look Like a Beggar
Intelligence: Reconnaissance Can Last Trials, Not Just Bells
Intimidation: Your Home Is Not A Castle
Tactics: Identifying a Guard Dog as a Threat to be Neutralized First


Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos: Commercial Circle
NPC Roger Thumberland: Leading Etzos Merchant, Trading and Transport Magnate, Favorite of The Council
NPCs Ressler and Clyde: Thumbderland's Bodyguards
Sammy: Good Dog, Ferocious Guardian
NPC Vorund: Wants to Expand his Legitimate Business, With Thumberland's Connections


Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Special Delivery
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Just a solo

Knowledge Requested:
Discipline: Holding your tongue
Discipline: Resisting temptations
Rupturing: Portals don’t move
Rupturing: Blinking – have to see the destination
Rupturing: Phasing – lets you see through barriers
Rupturing: Overstepping can cause motion sickness

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: yes
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: Portal Goes BOOM
City/Area: Scalvoris town
Notes/Warnings: Just a solo

Knowledge Requested:
Meditation: Breathing in to coincide with movement.
Rupturing: Not all portals are safe to pass through
Rupturing: Costs ether to maintain portals
Rupturing: Portal creation is loud
Rupturing: Overstepping can cause fatigue
Seduction: How not to do it

Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a

Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: yes
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Re: Review Requests 2.1.6

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Thread Name: No Rest for the Dead
City/Area: Yaralon, Wilds
Notes/Warnings: Lots of murda
Requested Rewards:

Necromancy: Preserving Keeps the Corpse Fresh
Necromancy: Thoughts help direct thralls
Necromancy: Applying ether in various mediums
Necromancy: Emotions effect thrall reactions to reanimation
Necromancy: Controlling a Corpse is like being a Puppeteer
Animal Husbandry: Speaking to your Animals

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: ???
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (Yes)
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