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Niv gives Ellen a very important gift but some people have other plans

With the escalation of hostilities between Etzos and Rhakros, a series of small walled towns is being established as a network of early warnings and defenses against Rhakros' reprisals. Only the very bravest and most formidable of characters should risk themselves on the Witches' Wilds frontier.

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Ellen was bristled visibly and kept an eye on the lingering henchman that watched their leader patiently. They seemed content enough to leave her alone after the signal from the dark figure. She stood uneasy, shifting from foot to foot, a grimace twisting her face as he began his slow and strange tale. She didn't appreciate theatrics.

The redhead preferred to just say what needed to be said instead of beating around the bush--but she'd learned in her dealings with the Prince that he enjoyed the verbal game. So she kept her mouth clamped tightly shut. So tight that her teeth hurt, for that was the only way she could keep from snapping at him to hurry up.

She hovered near Niv, anxious as to why he might be interested in her, but she had a growing suspicion that was ultimately confirmed. He was angry that Niv had saved Gangui from an assassination attempt orchestrated by none other than himself. Ellen felt sick. Her mouth was dry and her stomach rolled. She knew they were at odds, but she never really expected it to come to this.

Why are you surprised? an angry voice inside her head screamed.

He had given her every opportunity to expect something like this, and never made any attempts to hide it. Ellen knew that her--what... friend? acquaintance?--had a less than stellar track record. But she never expected to him do something to bold and openly cruel. How could she have been so wrong about a person? Perhaps she had just fooled herself into believing he wasn't so terrible because she was desperate to feel good about herself as well, another half Avriel. Nightshade Eld had been the only other she'd ever met, but that was seasons ago now and she hadn't seen the woman since.

So all she had was the leader of the Al'Angyryl to reflect on, and apparently he was far from finished. It seemed a simple warning was not what he had in mind.

"Reprimand? I don't think that's really necessary. Niv is only a--!"

Ellen reached toward her friend, moving to shield her with a hand and insert herself between the two. Perhaps it was more naivete, thinking that she could reason with the creature. That was not the case. Her fingers closed on empty air as he snatched Niv up. He was so much faster and stronger than her, yet she'd never really witnessed it firsthand.

"Wait--!" Her mouth opened, but he moved too quick. She couldn't form a plea. All she could do was choke on the words as the Tunäwä tumbled through the air.

Her legs moved on their own accord. She tried to chase after her friend, to catch her before it was too late, but she was halfway to the fireplace as the Tunäwä was swallowed by the flames. Ellen stumbled and fell, sliding and crawling to the edge of the mantle. She thrust an arm briefly into the belching fire but shrieked in pain and pulled back as it singed her skin. Niv was already gone. The logs shifted, spitting embers at her with an air of finality.

She sat there for a long moment, staring slack-jawed into the flames. It was getting hard to breathe. She grabbed the front of her shirt, struggling to draw in a breath as tears wells and spilled down her cheeks. She gasped and clawed at her chest, dragging in rapid and ragged lungfuls before coughing as the tears choked and blinded her.

Ellen turned, head spinning, and saw the black smudge that was the Prince. She blinked away more tears, staring at him with a strange, pained expression.

"You," she finally choked out. "You..." Another ragged breath, a her hand found her knife. She ripped it from its sheath and climbed clumsily to her feet. "I'm--going--to kill you."

Her body shook, but her voice had found some strength. The words were a snarl, and she bared her teeth as grief and shock were rapidly replaced with an adrenaline-fueled rage. He was fully armored with a mace at his side and a small army behind him. She had a knife. But she didn't care. Ellen screamed again, furious and dazed, and charged him. She ran as fast as could in her battered and bandaged condition, but it felt like she was moving at a snail's pace. Her blood roared in her ears and all she saw was him.

She lifted the blade, ready to drive it down into his eye socket when a large hand suddenly grabbed the back of her shirt and jerked her right off her feet. She grunted and fell hard, knife clattering across the floor. Ellen looked up just in time to see one of the men that had grabbed her earlier come down hard with his first, then everything went dark.
Last edited by Ellen'wyn on Wed Jul 25, 2018 8:09 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 830
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Noth always needed to have a reason. There were so many people who lived their lives like animals, constantly following after their instincts and simply doing whatever the first thing that came to their minds was without any regard for the consequences that might follow or the effect that they might have on others. The twilight hybrid was not like those bestial men and women, but rather, he was extremely meticulous and he spent a great deal of his time enacting assorted plots and schemes so as to ensure that everything would fall into place appropriately. And, whenever it came time to slay someone else, to put their meaningless lives to an end, and to steal them away from everyone who had ever known or loved or cared for them… he needed a reason.

He could not always share the reason that a person needed to die with them. When he engaged in the many ambushes and raids upon caravans and Black Guard patrols that were necessary for the functioning of Al’Angyryl, he did not have enough time to share the reason behind the unfortunate fates of his opponents. In the thick of combat, conversation and logical thought were put to the background, and for good reason; to think too heavily during battle could distract the mind from the more important matters of enemy movements and skills.

Eventually, however, the hybrid would stumble upon a scenario where he had the opportunity to present the reason behind someone’s demise. He found it easiest to explain why someone needed to die by using stories. Oftentimes, the stories that he told were those which had once been taught to him by Nicholas, and they taught assorted morals and values to their listeners. He distinctly remembered informing a small gang of thugs who had nearly beaten a mutant to death the story of a mirror which reciprocated whatever was given to it, and after he had concluded, he slew the entire group for their sins.

Telling the Tunawa why she would die was frankly no different than that scenario. He had already decided before he had ever ventured into the tavern that she would need to die in order to compensate him for the survival of his enemy, and he had considered the reasoning behind it for quite some time as well, concocting the story so as to inform her in the best way possible of what was happening. Perhaps it was a pointless endeavor, since the person who heard the story would not be able to consider its merits or to understand it in a deeper sense for very long after its conclusion… but some part of him itched to let them all know that their fates were not some act of random violence, that everything was cause and consequence.

Perhaps if he had known that Ellen would be present for the murder, he might have changed the story ever-so-slightly… included a reminder to her that her survival was best achieved if she stayed out of his way. Indeed, the Avriel considered such a thought even as the woman glared in grief-stricken rage at him, the knife flying to her grasp as she galloped towards him with the apparent intent to stab him to death for his transgressions. One of the Fiends who had been responsible for moving other patrons from the establishment caught her along the way, her vision having apparently tunneled in enough on the hybrid that she did not even catch his approach until he had already taken hold of her, and promptly dispatched her into death’s counterfeit.

The Prince of Eternal Mercies stepped carefully over to the limp body, his talons raking softly upon the floor until he stood over her like an apparition over a child, a phantom and a wraith awaiting the consumption of one’s soul. Gently, carefully and with a trained precision he placed the massive blades across her throat, feeling the soft flush of her heartbeat against the deathly nails even as he clamped ever-steadily down upon her.

He could have slashed her throat open, and left her bleeding upon the floor. It would not be the first time that he had killed someone in such a vicious manner… the touch of liquid and meat upon his claws had grown familiar. He could even decapitate her in such an easy-hold with little more than a slash of his talons, or perhaps he could press down on her throat until it had collapsed inwards upon itself, or merely choked her to death, a gentle death… asphyxiation.

Yet… he needed a reason, and one did not come to mind. He raised the talon from her, observing as the tiniest rivulets of blood trailed down her throat where the natural claws had pricked at her flesh, a final parting gift: a necklace to remember him by.

And, without another word or action, the hybrid left.
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

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Ellen

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:

Endurance: Being knocked out
Endurance: Running while injured
Endurance: Sticking your hand in a fire
Endurance: Agitating current injuries
Intimidation: Bare your teeth
Intimidation: Death threats
Discipline: Anger can help you focus
Discipline: Keeping your mouth shut even if you’re impatient
Deception: Fake it til you make it
Psychology: Witnessing the murder of a loved one

The Prince of Eternal Mercies: Murdered Niv
The Prince of Eternal Mercies: Sworn enemy
Niv: Death by fire
Niv: May not be gone forever

Magic: No magic exp

Other: A fresh back eye and a shallow cut across the throat. Renewed pain in her current injuries.
+1 seed of rebirth
+ 10 fame for being in the tavern with a spooky birdman and his goons, thinking it was a good idea to try and fight him on your own with a flimsy knife, and for not being murdered after it backfired.


Sephir-noth

Points awarded: 15

Knowledge:

Unarmed: Snatching up a person
Unarmed: Hurling someone into a fire
Meditation: Controlling and directing anger
Discipline: Not giving in to an easy kill
Discipline: Holding yourself to standards
Storytelling: Speaking to a captive audience
Storytelling: Getting rid of distractions

Magic: No magic exp

Other: +20 fame for a public execution. I was a bit on the fence about this, since Noth did clear out the tavern first, but I figured people could still witness the events through the window, and Ellen will probably spread the word anyway.

Notes: Aaaaand there he comes: the big bad bird brutally interrupting an emotional moment between close friends. I knew what was coming, but damn, I felt my insides clench at Noth's first line of dialogue, and Niv's naive response. And then Ellen's dawning realization and desperation... great work, all of you!

Niv: Poor, poor Niv. The knowledge this was her death thread really gave all your posts a bittersweet feeling. I think it speaks volumes of her purity and innocence that when faced with a menacing abomination clad in armor her first thought is that he might want her help. Too pure for this world indeed.

Noth: I do enjoy how you play your part as the big bad villain. The charisma, intimidation, his entrance, his monologue... And then he just casually murders Niv. And yet, there's so much more to him than 'oh, he's evil' and I think you do a great job showing that as well.

I changed two of your meditation knowledge to Discipline as they didn't feel like meditation to me. Hope that's okay.

Ellen: In a way, I think Ellen drew an ever shorter end of the stick than Niv did. To watch powerlessly how your friend is tossed in a fire, just wow. I feel like her emotions were very well captured and played out, and they really did a number on my heartstrings. Well done.


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