Hagerd Fen

18th of Ymiden 718

A settlement east of Rynmere across a stretch of water called 'the eastern trench' broken into three regions: Welles, Oakleigh, and Berwick.
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Continued from here. 18th of Ymiden, Arc 718

The Witch.

"Like a mother longing for her lost babe, I pray to the great Maven-Mother; I beseech her for the return of our whelp, our kindling. I call upon the ample influence of Delroth. I call to the darkness, and the light, and the ethereal and mundane, all; I beseech you. Please... return her to us. Give us back our Elena, our lost daughter. Show mercy to us poor, forsaken Avriel. Show mercy."

. . .

"She died," the woman whispered, tying her red locks into a knot, fearful of catching them upon the many jagged, tangled branches of the wetland woods. "Elena... died," Clara stated, almost solemnly. She had known her for so long - they were raised together, like sisters, beneath the wings of the Witches of Skalden. They were not sacrificed in ritual, or tortured, or any such thing. They were nurtured by the wings of very dark women, but within their separation from the other girls of their kind, they found one another.

To know that she had fallen, even despite what she'd become, was a tragic thing.

"Mercy," the other Avriel called out. "Mercy!" they yelled. "Mercy for Elena; Mercy for us destitute, hungering, tattered things! Mercy for our daughter and her soul!"

If it wasn't so vile - if they weren't so reprehensible - he almost would have felt pity. But instead, they had their mission, and it was to rend them. It was clear that Alistair could not utilize Clara to separate the Witch Coven, but at least there were only three, rather than four. They could be content in knowing that, alone.

"You know what you have to do," he said. Even though Clara couldn't separate them, she could serve as a distraction. Alistair could assassinate Skreega and Lygmi, isolating Hagerd Fen from her witchlings. The ginger-haired woman nodded her head, as she stood from the forested soil and approached the simple hut within the woods. As she stepped upon branches and made contact with the bristling ground, the witches immediately aimed their gazes to the brush from which she approached, watching steadily.

When Clara emerged from the brush, all of them stared in awe. Most of all, Hagerd, still mourning for her lost child . . . but not without a solemn appreciation for what answer her prayers had given.

"Krona!" she called her. Krona. It certainly wasn't Clara, but he supposed an alias was a necessary thing. Perhaps Krona was the alias - the name they had given her. He was uncertain.

"Mother," the Empath responded back. Hagerd opened her wings and stepped forward, approaching the Empath in a readied embrace. Skreega and Lygmi began to cry, salty driblets rolling down their feathered faces, their beaks opening lightly to mewl. The whole display was disturbing, all of it. Even the way in which they expressed their emotions was disjointed. It was... impure.

"Krona, you -- you are... the answer to our..." the woman followed, her tears equally beginning to flow. She was a large, weighty woman, comparable more to a hen than a falcon or any other winged predator. Alistair was certain that she would not be able to fly, though the thin women of Lygmi and Skreega were different stories.

"Did Elena really die?" she asked.

"Yes," Hagerd responded. "A sudden, impossible illness came over her. No matter our poultices, saps and rituals, we could not restore her. She is no longer alive," the Avriel said, despondent. And then, Clara -- Krona -- looked into the large basin-like nest they had built around the ritual site, adorned in bones and colorful eggs. She saw the... gore within, and failed to stifle a gag. It was Elena, but split into so many pieces. Her torso was separated bloodily from her arms, legs, and neck, which was equally torn from her head. Seven bloodied parts that were once whole, now separated into sections, a twisted idol.

She did not understand why. How would Elena return to them like this? Even if the Immortals answered their prayers.

"Mother," she called her, though her expression grew disquieting and grim. Clara had steeled herself to what was to come next. "I'm sorry. You will soon follow."
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You will soon follow.

. . .

"BETRAYAL!" she shrieked, cawing afterwards like a raven, her sisters and proteges following with the gawking noises of their own. "You speak so direly of me, your Mother? Calling for my death? I should have known you would never return to me. I should have--"

The tearing of space. It sounded almost like the beating of a bug's wings, broken and reverberating motions against the wind. Before long, Alistair's spear - Shadowsong - was bloodied, plunged into the body of one of the Avriel, the third witch of Skalden, Skreega. His gaze intensified, as his shadow tore into hers, biting and ripping through her feathered shoulder while the warm blood dripped from the tip of his spear. A small portal opened, followed by a thunderous moan. Alistair dipped the tip of his spear into the spiraling darkness, a bloody crimson growing from the core, and expanding outward.

Alistair drew his spear back, as the witch fell onto her knees. He began to lick the drawn blood from the tip of his spear, hungering voraciously for her iron-scented ichor, covering the tip of Shadowsong generously. Following after his predatory spark, Alistair too developed a vice of gluttony; hungering for the blood of those he victimized, feeding their essence to himself and his blood red breeches into space.

The woman, startled and shocked by the death of Skreega, opened her wings and attempted to fire droves of steel-like feathers upon the body of Krona. The woman, however, had fled into the treeline, leaving Alistair isolated with Lygmi and Hagerd Fen, who was clearly enraged. Lygmi seemed . . . mostly sorrowful, having lost both Elena and Skreega in a single trial. Still, the wind circled around her, dancing upon her feathered appendages with a chime-like sound whistling from her quills.

It was the ambience to something greater. Hagerd opened her beak wide, like a maw, and began to unleash an unholy sound. It was a song of betrayal, of carnage, of wrath. The sound echoed throughout what must have been the whole forest, sending birds chirping and flocking to the skies, fearful of what lingered below. The more her beak opened, the louder the song became, channeled from the whole of her gut.

It was Bonesong, and a mutation at that. A vile, haunting, powerful and - ultimately - loud vibrato that called outward from her beak. The woman was a monster, even moreso than the man still licking at the blood of her fallen protege.
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From the marsh, and the small depths of water that clung to tall grass and murky ground, crawled out a plethora of teal, bloated men that had been stripped of much of their excess weight. Gaunts, most likely, and quick ones at that. They were likely akin to Damien's, focused on speed and vicious assaults, raking their claws and gnashing their teeth upon flesh.

Like with all Necromancers, the answer was evident. He needed to kill the corpsemaster - preying on their thralls was unnecessary, particularly when Rupturers could close the distance and keep that closure maintained. Alistair held out his spear in one hand, and in the other, he crafted something of a javelin of ether. Lunging it forward, an Ether Missile at high velocity, he hoped to pierce through the woman's fragile form and tear through her flesh. Unfortunately, as the crackling blue ether drew nearer, a gaunt flung itself violently across the bog, leaping before the Ether Missile and taking the brunt of the damage. The creature fell to its side, a gaping hole within its form and a plethora of withered flesh surrounding it, but the mage was certain it had not died instantly. Hagerd, maintaining her song, treated the thrall with the recomposition of its flesh. Slowly, she mended it, as her minions gathered around Alistair, echoes of wind dancing between the gaps that broke their formation.

The mage grit his teeth. Hagerd wasn't wholly weak, but she was unprepared for the pressure he would exert. As the first gaunt flung itself at Alistair, he gripped it by the skull, feeling the ambient ether emanating from within. He attempted to wretch it from Hagerd's control, focusing on the feeling, willing it to break and fall from her grasp, leaving the gaunt frayed.

He did not wholly succeed, but to an extent he did, as he dropped the creature on the floor and watched it twitch and writhe, its ether partly stolen as if it had been left half-flayed. Alistair immediately swung his spear to his blindside, swiping off the head of one of the other gaunts, before carving into it with a diagonal swing. The creature fell to the floor, as feathers flung from afar. Alistair opened a small portal to draw them in, the crimson shaded tear drawing the feathers and launching them rapidly back at Hagerd through another miniscule portal he'd opened beside her. Several of them landed, carving into her chest, imbuing themselves deep within her form.

The creature shrieked, her song breaking. Alistair diced another gaunt in the meantime, before anchoring onto his feet with Gravelmonger, taking off the legs of two other gaunts as he pivoted and swung from side to side, near impossible to follow. A Nail stapled itself to their reality, flinging out sharpened stones at Hagerd, pinning her to the ground.

Then, from the distance, the wind drew forth and sliced at him in a thick gust. He attempted to grab at it with his palms, breaking the ether of the spell and redrawing it, though his meager understanding of Absorption made the process too slow. Alistair's off-hand, the one not wielding Shadowsong, was heavily damaged despite his Boneturner's fingers - several gashes broke in through the bonemold that made up his smooth palms, like chips into thick steel.

The mage grimaced. Hagerd was nearly dead, but her control of the gaunts was maintained, and Lygmi still fought viciously. The pockets of wind that had clung to the gaunts now flung themselves at Alistair, each sharpening into a cutting wing, ribbons slicing through the air.

"Maven-Mother!" the creature shrieked, as Alistair did his best to dance around the swords, breaking the ground as he sprinted away from their sweeping motions. "Save us!" she yelled.
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But she was not saved.

A portal opened behind her, at her fallen feet pressed into the mud, and drew her in. The sharpened rocks stapling her to the ground resisted, gnawing at her flesh, though ultimately the force of the hungry portal drew her back and - destabilized - slowly gnawed upon her flesh, pursuing a deeper shade of red, darkened from crimson to maroon, to a color married to the darkest of blacks.

Lygmi continued to fight Alistair with swipes of wind and feathered blades, but his mobility was evidently superior, and with a Shadowspin he diced through her, carving her into thousands of strewn ribbons that blended like mold against the pavement. Hagerd, Lygmi and Skreega were all dead, though Alistair was not without his injuries. A broken, cut palm, with his mutated bony exterior chipped from the surface of his hand, a deep gash following. Lygmi had managed to slice partly into his hamstring, and one of Hagerd's gaunts bit into his shoulder, a pain aching from the wound . . . though he remained stoic, and quiet.

Regardless, the story ended. Clara's song no longer held any meaning, though now, she could follow with a tale of the Skalden witch's subsequent demise to a mage of superior skill, and morality. Perhaps that song could never be sung in Rynmere, a land of kindled malice versus any product of the arcane. But no longer was she connected to these feathered fiends, and so in truth, she could flutter to any land she so desired.

Was leaving, then, her fate? She was uncertain.

But as she looked upon the broken, bloodied corpses of the three Avriel that once mentored her, she knew that her resolve to warn of their influence had been well-placed.

"I think I'll remain here, in the bog," she said. "Just for a time. I have the opportunity to uncover their secrets. To bury the mangled bodies of children that linger in the dark spots of the hut. To give peace to Elena, who - had she never been found by the Witches Three - would have become a beautiful mother of her own. I think she deserves my affection, even despite it all. Even despite how she appears now."

Alistair nodded. "Will you return to Skalden?" he asked.

"Yes. And I'll tell them all of how the story ended - of the man, the mage, who brought a finality to the tale. Perhaps I will be sent to the pyre for withstanding your presence. If I am, don't pass my memory by, Alistair. Mages like me - wounded, exploited things - we need to be protected. I believe in your virtues. Perhaps they will follow you, our broken arcanists; I hope they do."
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10 | These points cannot be used for magic. I didn't find your brief use of Transmutation enough of an experimentation to grant you magic XP. Alistair is already an experienced Rupturer. Plague agrees.

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An injured palm, gashed, with cut through hamstrings and a shoulder bitten into by sharp undead teeth.

Plague Note™: Given the length of time it takes to heal through your Bonefinger mutation, you will be unable to wield your spear with both hands for a season.

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Skill Knowledge:
Transmutation: Absorption
Transmutation: Absorption can draw from Necromantic constructs
Rupturing: The Nail: Stapling someone to the floor with high velocity projectiles
Polearms: Spear - Maintaining low motions to break through an opponent's formation
Polearms: Spear - Cutting through offensive weapons with Shadowspin
Polearms: Spear - Using the reach of a spear for a lethal first lunge

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Who knew some evil Avriel witches were hanging out in the Eastern Settlements? I didn't. Gross. Also, crazy combat action—go you! You write combat magic with a flair that is enviable.
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- Malvolio | Shakespeare's Twelf Night (II, v, 156-159)
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