Review Requests 2.1.5

[Tristan Venora]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: An Unexpected Meeting
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: The thread was never finished because the other PC disappeared. It's over 1.500 words, so I thought I'd put it here. I need more XP!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Oferring somebody who looks thirsty a drink

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Perhaps a little for being a noble and showing up in the arena where everybody can see him?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

[Tristan Venora]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: What's better than a drink?
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: The thread was never finished because the other PC disappeared. It's over 1.500 words, so I thought I'd put it here. I need more XP!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Enduring the Ymiden heat
Etiquette: If somebody has an accident because of you, you should apologize!
Socializing: Small talk
Writing: Drawing inspiration from real events
Writing: Drawing inspiration from music
Writing: Coming up with ideas can be hard sometimes!

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe a little for buying drinks and offering to teach the other PC.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bloodbored 0.2 Final Mix
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: I don't even
Requested Rewards:
Dream
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: (Yes/No)

[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Practice makes perfect (or not)
City/Area: Scalvoris.
Notes/Warnings: Job thread. The random nosebleeds are a side effect of the last seasonal event (Devin also got pretty violet eyes though).
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Exaggerating your skill with the lute
Deception: It wasn't a mistake, it was intentional!
Medicine: How to stop a nosebleed
Musical Instrument (Lute): Playing a few chords in order to warm up
Musical Instrument (Lute): Playing slowly leads to fewer mistakes
Musical Instrument (Lute): Practicing is important!

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: nosebleed
Renown: Maybe a little for playing at Cally's?
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP:no

[Finn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Commemoration of the sea
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: Bonus stuffs for doing a festival
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Immortal: U’frek
U’frek: Ruler of the seas
Detection: Know the caste by the attire
Rhetoric: Body language puts meat on words
Caregiving: Pocketmoney for children
Medicine: Scrapes and bruises from fights

Loot: perhaps from the bonus for doing the festival if approved
Injuries/Overstepping: nope
Renown: not sure how much but probably positive for giving money to a child
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Rey'na]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Charity of Chance
City/Area: Scalv town, Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Good vibes!
Requested Rewards:
Polearms - Spear: Works with a shield
Round Shield: Hard to use
Round Shield: Can accompany a spear
Round Shield: Correct stance
Round Shield: Trying to block overhead
Round Shield: Room for improvement
Loot: Good guy points and a Masterwork Round-shield
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: 10 maybe? for actively helping out the poor? Idk
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Also to be reviewed by Peg as part of a plot line! Feel free to skip this if you're not Peg

[Ellen'wyn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Everlong
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Ellen and Enrick are drawn together in a dream regarding their familiars.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: n/a
Loot: n/a
Injuries/Overstepping: n/a
Renown: n/a
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: n/a

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Murder of Hailey Shore
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: The thread was never finished because the other PC disappeared. It's over 1.500 words though, so I thought I'd put it here. I need more XP!
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: N/A
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: yes

Doran Cooney

[Doran]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: An Unlikely Alliance
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Longsword): Meant to be wielded with both hands
Blades (Longsword): How to hold your sword correctly
Blades (Longsword): Survival is the primary objective of a fight
Blades (Longsword): The best way to keep your opponent from hitting you is to hit them first
Blades (Longsword): Parrying isn't always the best defence
Blades (Longsword): If you can, step out of the way of your opponent's attack
Blades (Longsword): Every defence must be made with an attack in mind
Blades (Longsword): If you hesitate, you'll die
Blades (Longsword): Lead with the sword and follow with the body
Linguistics: The word "pal" implies a certain familiarity
Strength: Sometimes it's better not to use your full strength
Strength: If you want to succeed, you need to be stronger than everybody else

Patrick: I taught him to fight
Patrick: Treasure hunter

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Maybe a little for teaching Patrick?
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Doran Cooney

[Patrick]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: An Unlikely Alliance
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Skill

• Blades (Broadsword): How To Hold Your Sword Correctly
• Blades (Broadsword): No Mercy, No Second Chance
• Blades (Broadsword): Maintain the Initiative
• Blades (Broadsword): Dodging Is Better Than Parrying
• Blades (Broadsword): Follow Your Defense With An Attack
• Blades (Broadsword): Parrying Strikes
• Blades (Broadsword): Fending Off Opponent's Blows
• Strength: Creating Force With Power
• Strength: Wielding A Broadsword

Generic

• Doran: A Master Swordsman
• Doran: Taught You The Ways of Sword Combat
• Doran: Expects You to Survive
• Doran: Waits To Hear From You About Orimar

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Eh, your call
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no