Review Request 2.1.3

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: III. "And Like That... He's Gone."
City/Area: Foster's Landing and Etzos Prime
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Violence

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Deception: Luring a Target Closer with a Cry for Help
Discipline: Staying Patient Even in Tense Circumstances
Discipline: Leave Proper Healing to Healers
Intelligence: Coded Exchange of Words
Medicine: Treating a Wound with Alcohol
Tactics: Planning Your Escape in Advance

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Doesn't Cheat His Underlings
NPC Harry The Horse: One of Vorund's Many Contacts

Loot: Contract Fee of 500gn (supposedly around $10,000 in our money, which seems reasonable, considering he got half that for a much simpler contract)
Injuries/Overstepping: Shallow cut on right forearm, stitched up but still aches
Renown: Yes and No, considering he's careful to cover his tracks... you decide!
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Victor Amielle]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Curious Case of Amelia Verres (Part 2)
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Shortsword): Warming up is important
Blades (Shortsword): Basic stance
Blades (Shortsword): The Strike of Wrath
Blades (Shortsword): Simply defending yourself is not enough
Blades (Shortsword): Every defense should be followed by an attack
Strength: Strenghtening one's arms for sword handling
Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Yes. Victor helped a woman in need.
Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: no

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Snoot Schnizzling and Biscuit Buttering
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Discipline: Forcing yourself to get out of bed.
Discipline: Fighting fear by facing it head on
Rhetoric: Using analogy to give a message
Strength: Using balanced weights to build up strength
Strength: Curls for arm strength


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Arlo

Knowledge:
Discipline: Not moving, even when you want to
Discipline: Distract yourself from painful situations.
Endurance: Staying still with a dead arm
Endurance: The sudden flurry of pins and needles in a dead arm.
Strength: Using balanced weights to build up strength
Strength: Curls for arm strength
Strength: Carrying a person in a confined space

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown:
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

[Rynata]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Not So Friendly Neighbors
City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Detection: Feeling someone's gaze
Stealth: Eavesdropping
Stealth: Maintaining appropraite distance when following
Stealth: Do not follow into one way streets
Acrobatics: Dodging a collision
Intelligence: Tying available information together

Non Skill Knowledge
Whitler: Shady salesman
Location: Almund, The Scalvoris Sapphire Inn

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Don't think so
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: You Ask About My Conscience, I Offer You My Soul
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Leadership: Maintaining a vision
Leadership: Always coming back to the bottom line.
Logistics: Seeing the potential pitfalls in opportunities
Logistics: Considering all aspects of need
Mathematics: Cost to taste, working out a ratio
Mathematics: Calculating all possible answers.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope!
Magic EXP: no

[Sephira]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: On the Edge
City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings:Just a fun sparring match

Sephira

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades(Saber):Gauging the weight of a weapon
Blades(Saber): Lighter attacks should be used when sparring
Blades(Saber): Combining Skysteps with a strike
Blades(Saber): Combining a Blink portal with an attack
Blades(Saber): Striking the legs to make an opponent lose balance
Blades(Saber): Using acrobatics to put momentum behind a strike
Tactics: Taking advantage of an opponent unfamiliar with magic
Discipline: Brushing off jokes to remain focused
Acrobatics: Spinning to gain inertia
Acrobatics: Recovering from a fall
Rupturing: Building up speed before using a portal

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A few bruises
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Lavana

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Experimenting against a one handed sword.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; engaging in sword play with a sparring partner.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Overhead Strike
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Using a parry as a set up for a counter attack.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Aim to swing low to the back of the legs when they charge in.
Blades Two Handed Claymore; Ripost
Endurance; Maintaining a two handed weapon flurry
Tactics; Platemail armor is a more suitable defense against one handed swords then leather.
Tactics; understanding portal magic and how it operates in a sword fight
Tactics; A mage that loses focus, cannot maintain there magic.
Discipline; Maintaining the integrity of a sparring session.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: A few bruises
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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[Zafir]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Down the pickaxe came
City/Area: Yurrova/Ne’haer
Notes/Warnings: Just a work thread with a bit of local politics.
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Mining: Working in a three-team mining crew
Mining: Exhausting working conditions
Mining: Identifying a cache of Ametrine crystal
Mining: A punishment for prisoners
Mining: Can get repetitive
Politics: What is best for Ne’haer is not what is best for Yurrova

Non-skill knowledge:
Yurrova: Tensions rising
Yurrova: Of interest to Ironridge and Ne’haer
Yurrova: Rumors say more troops are coming

Loot: (If applicable)
(x1) Ametrine Crystal

Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I. The Departed
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language

Well, this was going to be longer, but I realized I could get more out of this post alone, since it's almost two thousand words. There'll be three or maybe four other parts coming, so if you like what you read here, claim it and enjoy the whole thing!

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Learn By Observing
Discipline: Not Reacting to Violence
Investigation: Deducing a Familial Resemblance
Psychology: Recognizing Someone Lost in Memory
Psychology: Choked Up with Grief
Socialization: Leaving a Man to Grieve

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Drug: Euphoria, Herb
NPC Ilos: Needs to Remember His Place
NPC Ilos: Doesn't Respect Kasoria
NPC Vorund: Not Afraid to Discipline His Underlings
NPC Vorund: Values Coin and Actions, Not Words
NPC Vorund: Euphoria Trafficker with Connections to Growers
Etzos Underworld: Thriving Drug Trade

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Faith Augustin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Everybody laughed but you
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope. Business Investment Thread. Probably dull....
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Leadership: Assign tasks and work together
Leadership: Don't be afraid to get your hands dirty
Logistics: Considering self sufficiency
Logistics: Give people jobs suited to their skills

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Well, this is the thread where she invests 7.8K (it's in the job thread for Scalvoris here) in creating a soup kitchen for Scalv. So, you know, maybe. But she's at max, so...
Collaboration: Nope!
Magic EXP: no

Tristan

[Vega]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Silence is Golden on the Silver Seas
City/Area: Hollow Sea between Scalv and Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nope.
Requested Rewards:

Vega

Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Caress it like a lover.
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Resting your chin in the right place
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: Curve your wrist so it doesn't touch the neck
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: When holding the bow, angle out your wrist
Musical Instrument: Fiddle: When holding the bow, put your thumb on the frog
Persuasion: I'm not the best person to ask for relationship advice. Really!

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: Nope
Collaboration: Nope!
Magic EXP: no