Review Request 2.1.3

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Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bloodbored (part 2)
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dream
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Reviewed By

Sephira

[Victor Amielle]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Are You Sure Stones Sharpen Blades? (Victor)
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: I'm not sure how much a whetstone costs. Perhaps you, the reviewer, could determine the price?
Requested Rewards:[/googlefont]

Qit'ria

Knowledge:
Skill-Based Knowledges:
1.Intimidation: Be demeaning
2.Intimidation: Challenge all new arrivals
3.Blades (Shortsword): Dip shoulders in preparation for an attack
4.Tactics: Recognize when an action is not an attack
5.Discipline: Calming oneself when not faced with an aggressor
6.Blades (Shortsword): Maintaining your shortsword with a whetstone
7.Blades (Shortsword): Grip sword with two fingers and thumb
8.Blades (Shortsword): Don't keep a vice grip on the handle
9.Etiquette: How to properly handshake
10.Etiquette: Smile while shaking hands

Loot: +1 whethstone
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Victor

Knowledge:
Blades (Shortsword): Sharpening your sword regularly is important
Blades (Shortsword): Grip your sword with two fingers and your thumb
Blades (Shortsword): Don't keep a vice-like grip on the hilt of your sword
Discipline: Refusing to be intimidated
Etiquette: How to properly shake hands
Etiquette: Smile while shaking hands
Linguistics: Learning the local language would be a good idea
Linguistics: Definition of a homophone
Teaching: Teaching by example

Qit'ria: Savage
Qit'ria: Doesn't speak Common well

Loot: -1 whetstone
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Slight (5): Victor helps Qit'ria
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Reviewed By

Muse

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[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: II. Second Wind
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Mild Language

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Blades (Karambit): Saber Grip
Blades (Karambit): Can Be Used to Stab, Not Just Slash
Blades (Karambit): Ripping Causes More Damage
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Elbow Strike
Discipline: Experimenting with New Techiques
Deception: Appearing Sick to Fool a Target

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Book: War Of The Immortals, by Sev'ran Coal
Etzos: Underground a Haven for Homeless

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A

Reviewed By

Muse

[Lavana Tharn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Out With The Old In With The New
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City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Grim Themes ; Other then that not really my best writing, it is more of a very rough concept of the character before she took off.
Requested Rewards: ???
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Acrobatics; Evasively Stepping Back

Acrobatics; Pulling hand Away From Snapping Dog

Acrobatics; Stepping Off To The Side To Create Angle Of Attack.

Acrobatics; Using Foot Work To Create Distance To Retaliate.

Acrobatics; Relaxing your body makes you much faster then being tense.

Animal Training; Letting The Beast Know Who Is In Charge

Loot: Job Thread
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Reviewed By

Sephira

[Lavana Tharn]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Move Like A Phantom
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City/Area: Almund
Notes/Warnings: Not really much, me trying to add combat foot work into my writing by exploring and playing around with it.
Requested Rewards: ???
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)

Acrobatics; Attacking While Moving

Acrobatics; Slipping Imaginary Attacks

Acrobatics; Using the centerline to bait attacks.

Acrobatics; Using Foot Work To Stay Balanced In The Flow.

Acrobatics; Using Foot Work To Shift Stances, and open new angles of attack

Unarmed; Thai Roundhouse Kick

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Renown: No
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Reviewed By

Sephira

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Mirror, Mirror
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:[/googlefont]

Arlo

Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 knowledge)
Detection: Is that... me?
Detection: Searching for a weapon
Endurance: Cold water on a cold morning
Persuasion: Pointing out that someone else drank the potion first
Persuasion: Stating it as clearly as possible.
Stealth: Stepping carefully in the dark.


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A (dealt with in previous thread)
Renown: None in this thread
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Vega

Knowledge: (5 posts = 10 knowledge)
Discipline: Don't say that word!
Blades (Longsword): Thrust is easier in confined spaces.
Blades (Longsword): Stopping a blow before it hits.
Detection: Is that... Arlo?
Detection: Changes in body shape
Psychology: Telling someone else off for being irresponsible is easier than admitting you're scared of responsibility.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Not in this thread.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Reviewed By

Muse

[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Dr Tio Does A Medicine
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Disguise: Disguising oneself as an Order of Adunih member
Disguise: The use of handlebar moustaches
Disguise: Doctor Heimlich Schimmermimmerman
Medicine: Sweetwine poisoning
Medicine: The importance of a good assistant
Medicine: There's no need to amputate poisoned people

Loot: +1 Blue Order of Adunih Cloak
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Yanahalqah]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Target Acquired
City/Area: Foster's Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Awkward, clumsy hamfisted attempts at philosophy, I guess
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intelligence: Asking the locals
Intelligence: The rumor mill
Tactics: predicting the route of the opponent
Tactics: the subtle approach
Linguistics: recognizing accents
Philosophy: Honor and Justice

Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: prolly not. Still need to get around converting my fame
Collaboration: solo
Magic EXP: Magic is for n00bs

[Arlo Creede]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Eruptions
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Requested Rewards:[/googlefont]

Arlo

Knowledge: (9 posts = 14 knowledge)
Detection: Noticing important details in caves
Detection: Determining sounds in echoes
Discipline: Not giving in to temptation
Investigation: Piecing together clues from an abandoned camp
Navigation: Tools and equipment help
Navigation: Compass Roses
Navigation: True north and magnetic north
Navigation: Calculating time for a journey
Seafaring: Mizzenmast
Seafaring: Mizzen gaff also called a spanker
Seafaring: Heaving to requires balancing out the sails
Seafaring: Heaving to is good for stopping at sea
Seafaring: Slowing using the wind allows more fine control

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: None in this thread
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Vega

Knowledge: (10 posts = 15 knowledge)
Detection: Noticing important details in caves
Detection: Determining sounds in echoes
Navigation: Tools and equipment help
Navigation: Compass Roses
Navigation: True north and magnetic north
Navigation: Calculating time for a journey
Seafaring: Mizzenmast
Seafaring: Mizzen gaff also called a spanker
Seafaring: Heaving to requires balancing out the sails
Seafaring: Heaving to is good for stopping at sea
Seafaring: Slowing and stopping using the wind.
Seafaring: Slowing using the wind allows more fine control

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: Not in this thread.
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: no

Reviewed By

Muse

[Qit'ria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Let's Get Down to Business
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scalvoris Town, and Sweetvine Woods
Notes/Warnings: beaver murder
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Endurance: Standing in an icy river for an extended period
Stealth: Holding still for long periods of time to go unnoticed
Hunting: Recognizing beaver trails
Hunting: Beaver kill
Polearms: The butt of the weapon for clubbing
Polearms: Strike multiple areas for maximum damage
Loot: Beaver Hide x1
Beaver Bones Set x4
Beaver Blood (half water skin full)
Beaver Meat 10lbs
Injuries/Overstepping: Nah
Renown: Uh... helping out a merchant?
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)