Review Request 2.1.3

[Juniper]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: The Adventurous Birthday Girl (Nir'Wei)
City/Area: Mainly Desnind
Notes/Warnings: N/A

Juniper

Requested Rewards: 8 (Collab) + 3 (3 posts past 3 posts) = 11 skill knowledges
Knowledge:
Acrobatics: Balancing on Sev'ryn Shoulders
Climbing: Clothed Humanoid arm.
Climbing: Tree trunks
Climbing: Using Branches to get further up.
Running: Even footing (Branches)
Running: Awkward footing (Branches)
Running: Full Tilt
Socialization: Keeping Positive
Sociology: The Temple of Life
Sociology: Cïkäkkẹn The Maker of Statues
Teaching: Tunawa's aren't easy to kill buddy.

Non-Skill Knowledges

Nir'wei: Such a negative nancy
Nir'wei: A Sev'ryn
Nir'wei: Friendly Folk
Nir'wei: Worry Wart
Nir'wei: Looks at both sides
Nir'wei: Kind of agrees with my parents
Nir'wei: Allowed you to ride his shoulder
Nir'wei: Landed on his head
Nir'wei: The Tour Guide
Nir'wei: Taught you about the temple

Desnind: One with the trees
Desnind: Temple Location
Desnind: The Itoju
Desnind: The Fire Pit

Self: Parent's are downers
Self: Just want to have fun
Self: Adventure to learn

Moseke: Mother of Tunawa
Moseke: Creator
Moseke: Worshiped by Sev'ryn

Ymiden: Worshiped by Sev'ryn
Ymiden: Not just a season, but a god as well

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: (Minor if any) At grader's discression
Renown: At grader's discression
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Nir'Wei

Requested Rewards: 8 (Collab) + 2 (2 past 3 posts)= 10
Knowledge:
Navigation: From the Wilds to Desnind and back
Navigation: Desnind's Streets
Fieldcraft: Mark the territory of your camp to warn predators of your presence.
Fieldcraft: Arranging stones into a makeshift fire pit.
Fieldcraft: Tents make you less aware of your surroundings.
Fieldcraft: Enclosed spaces between trees can hide your camp.
Fieldcraft: Scattering branches over the roof of your camp acts as basic camouflage.
Teaching: A bit easier when the student is eager
Teaching: A guided tour to assist in explanations
Meditation: It's easier to be calm in a safe and familiar environment.

Non-Skill

Juniper: Not a Fruit
Juniper: Fell from a tree
Juniper: Like the berry
Juniper: A small friend
Juniper: Can ride on my shoulder
Juniper: Doesn't like being held back
Juniper: Giggles... A lot
Juniper: Hard to keep up with
Juniper: Not scared of much
Juniper: A little weird but that's okay.

Moseke: Statue maker?
Moseke: Goddess
Moseke: Common Goddess to worship in Desnind
Moseke: A life like Statue in The Temple of Life

Ymiden: Common God to worship in Desnind
Ymiden: Statue in the Temple of Life

Xiur: Some worship him in Desnind
Xiur: The Temple of Life has a statue of him

Self: Feeling estranged from the family
Self: Understanding family problems
Self: Not wanting to go home (But doing so anyways)

Loot: None Requested
Injuries/Overstepping: (Minor if any) At graders discretion
Renown: At grader's discression
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

[Tio Silver]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Lesson Number One
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Graverobbing
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Necromancy: Explaining the basics to an apprentice
Necromancy: Describing the spark like a tree
Necromancy: Demonstrating how to animate a thrall
Teaching: Using comparatives in an explanation
Teaching: Encourage a study to do dirty work
Teaching: Try not to let your student's creepy behaviour concern you

Loot:

+6 Bonus points in teaching (Renown reward. Mod approved.)

Ring of the Three Seers: While worn, this ring grants its owner the ability to prophecise a major event in a person's life. By writing a person's name at the top of a blank sheet of paper and picturing their face, the ring will possess the wearer's hand and write out a prophecy about that person. These prophecies are often on the cryptic side and regularly use poetry or double meanings, making them tricky to decipher, and may occasionally include a drawing. (Use of this ability must be planned with and agreed to by the person you're roleplaying with.) (Renown Reward. Mod Approved.)

+10 Dead Bodies (eww...)

Injuries/Overstepping: None
Renown: At graders discretion.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes - Necromancy

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I. Slippin' Into Darkness
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Just an introductory piece on Kasoria and his calling, very heavy on combat, foul language, and general cynicism. Enjoy!

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Being On Time
Acting: Making a Humble Mask
Disguise: Looking Like Anything But an Assassin
Investigation: Getting Intel for a Contract
Stealth: Watching From the Shadows

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Vorund: Crime Boss of South Eztos
NPC Vorund: Thinking of Retiring(?)
Location: The Citizen's Market, Etzos
Location: Speckled Jim Pub
Etzos: The City Bells

Loot: X amount of gold as payment for "problem-solving"
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Don't Be Naive
City/Area: Etzos, Commercial Ring and Outer Perimeter
Notes/Warnings: Graphic Violence and Foul Language (more the latter than former)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Disguise: Pretending To Be a Beggar
Disguise: Hiding In Plain Sight
Intelligence: Surveillance of a Target
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Brandy Bottle as a Weapon
Cooking: Vegetable Stew
Tactics: Fight Like an Assassin, Not a Warrior

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Etzos Underground: World of Sewers, Tunnels, Caverns, and Passages
NPC Vorund: Uses Children as Messengers
NPC Vorund: Extorts Businesses across South Etzos

Loot: None (Memory)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Probably not, other than indirect underworld whispers
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Enemies Foreign and Domestic
City/Area: Foster's Landing (outlying city of Etzos)
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Mature Content

First of a two-, maybe three-parter Memory detailing a job Kasoria once had in FL. Thanks in advance!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Investigation: Asking Relevant Questions
Acting: Playing the Beggar
Disguise: Smelly Clothes Maketh a Beggar
Intelligence: Observing a Target for Weaknesses
Intelligence: Identifying a Target from a Description
Discipline: Maintaining a Ruse in Public

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Foster's Landing
Location: The Happy Trout Inn
NPC: Roy, Owner of the Happy Trout Inn

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: II. Execution Break
City/Area: Foster's Landing, south-east of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and tons of violence

Okay, all the plans and chicanery is over, time to get good an' bloody! Probably best for the same person who grabbed "Enemies Foreign and Domestic" to grade this one, or it's gonna seem a little disjointed. Thanks in advance!

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Tactics: Show Up Early (REALLY Early)
Tactics: Using a Human Distraction
Tactics: Best Way to Kill a Mage? Don't Let Them Use Their Magic
Acrobatics: Tucking and Rolling After a Fall
Blades (Gladius): Disemboweling
Unarmed Combat (Brawling/Silat): Using Forearm to Block a Sword Swing

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: III. Legacy
City/Area: Foster's Landing, south-east of Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language and Gore

Concluding part! Hope you like it, I hate writing endings.

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Intimidation: Don't Be Subtle When Savagery Suffices
Intimidation: Words of Warning
Intimidation: Leave a Survivor to Carry the Message
Rhetoric: Promising Vengeance for Vorund
Acting: Changing your Gait to Seem Harmless
Cooking: Leek and Onion Soup

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Slattery: Bargeman and Smuggler
NPC Bangun Vorund: Not to be Crossed, Ever
NPC Bangun Vorund: Relationship with Foster's Landing Bandits

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Probably a few Negative points, but mainly by proxy: Vorund's was the only name that got mentioned, after all
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A

[Zip]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Bloodbored (part 1)
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings: Dream
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable)
Renown: (how much and for what?)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Reviewed By

Sephira

[Virikai Talius]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: You're the One that I Want
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Some foul language. Gaslighting.

Requested Rewards:
Maebella (14)
Discipline: Pulling Yourself Together
Discipline: Trying to Hide Tears
Endurance: Finding Strength to Admit Feelings
Etiquette: Trying Not to Impose
Persuasion: Convincing Someone that You Care
Persuasion: The Power of Conviction
Rhetoric: Apologising for Offences
Rhetoric: Begging for Forgiveness
Rhetoric: Buttering Someone Up
Rhetoric: Explanations and Excuses
Rhetoric: Fighting to Find the Words
Seduction: Admitting Your Feelings
Seduction: Giving Compliments
Seduction: Be in Control of Yourself

Location: The Old Jubilee
Virikai: Engaged to Me
Viden: Etiquette of Courting



Virikai (14)
Intimidation: Dominating Your Partner
Intimidation: Learning Another’s Triggers
Intimidation: Learning What to Say to Control Another
Leadership: Allowing Another to Make Decisions
Leadership: Enjoying Having Power Over Another
Leadership: How to Chastise Someone
Leadership: How to Silence Someone
Leadership: Making Requests of People
Negotiation: Proposals are a Business Deal
Rhetoric: Calling Someone’s Bluff
Rhetoric: Crude Language to Make a Point
Seduction: Fine Dining
Seduction: Lavish Gestures of Wealth
Teaching: Finding Deep Reserves of Patience

Location: The Old Jubilee
Maebella: Engaged to Me
Viden: Etiquette of Courting

Loot: Fiancé(e)s?
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No

[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: I. D.I.Y.
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Some Foul Language - pretty basic Memory/Training story, second part coming soon!

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Blades (Karambit): Curved, Concealable, Assassin's Dagger
Blades (Karambit): Designed to Slice and Tear
Blades (Karambit): Crippling Blows to Joints
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Enhancing Punches with Blades
Discipline: Constructing a Makeshift Training Dummy
Discipline: Knowing When to Pause your Training

Loot: Makeshift and oft-repaired training dummy, made from planks, rope, rags, and old clothes
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: (N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic EXP: N/A