Review Request 2.1.2

For completed review request threads only.

Moderators: Staff, Peer Reviewer, Wiki Worker, 18+ Peer Reviewer

User avatar
Lei'lira
Posts: 652
Joined: Wed Feb 03, 2016 5:41 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Farmer
Renown: 267
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 8

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Freedom for Eri
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Mild for Eri being branded. It isn't graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Skill Knowledge

Caretaking: Comforting an injured friend
Detection: Keeping a sharp eye on the crowd for pickpockets and thieves
Discipline: Knowing when not to go to the aid of a friend
Endurance: Enduring the crush of a crowd when crowds make you nervous
Investigation: Using every advantage you have while searching for clues for a missing person (like checking the bounty board)
Investigation: When you don't know something, ask someone who looks like they might know; you might just get the answer you need

Non Skill Knowledge

Eri: is free now

How to free a slave


Loot: Eri's new slave papers indicating that she is free
Injuries/Overstepping: None for Lei'lira, but Eri's brand will take a full arc to heal fully.
Fame: Maybe positive for freeing a slave, and/or doing a good deed?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Image
Last edited by Lei'lira on Mon Jan 08, 2018 8:32 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 169
User avatar
Oliver Venora
Approved Character
Posts: 131
Joined: Sun Dec 03, 2017 6:13 am
Race: Mixed Race
Profession: Baron
Renown: 100
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Templates
Wealth Tier: Tier 4

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Help Me Help Her
City/Area: Venora, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Feels. Lots of them. And weird cry-kissing.

Requested Rewards (Charlie):
Knowledge:

Animal Husbandry: Your horse recognises you
Caretaking: Touch for comfort
Discipline: Forcing yourself to tell the truth
Mount (Horse): Mounting
Mount (Horse): Digging heels into flanks
Mount (Horse): Dismounting
Intimidation: Demanding a meeting
Politics: Knowing your nobility

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: Positive for telling Oliver

Requested Rewards (Oliver):
Knowledge:

Discipline: Keeping one's composure
Etiquette: Remembering someone's preferences
Etiquette: Offering a comfortable place to talk
Etiquette: Choosing titles for those with more than one
Politics: Receiving guests at your home
Politics: Using wine as a stalling tactic
Politics; Recognizing military status
Psychology: Sharing your concerns

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No

Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
word count: 136
Image
User avatar
Tio Silver
Wiki Worker
Wiki Worker
Posts: 1274
Joined: Thu Apr 13, 2017 3:04 pm
Race: Immortal
Profession: God of Curses
Renown: 665
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 6

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Flight of the Hearty Salmon
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Business Management: Setting a strong first impression
Business Management: Stealing products to sell
Deception: Pretending to be in need of aid
Leadership: Proving yourself a strong captain
Seafaring: Sheering a schooner
Tactics: Cutting off a ship's wind currents


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Whatever seems appropriate for leading a pirate raid
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Image
Last edited by Tio Silver on Mon Jan 08, 2018 6:25 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 76
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
User avatar
Nauta F'mos Geey
Posts: 374
Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2015 2:56 am
Race: Aukari
Profession: Chefling
Renown: 219
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Point-Warp
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Rupturing: Chasing has a maximum effective range
  • Rupturing: Blinking works directionally
  • Rupturing: Chasing feels like a pull towards a destination
  • Rupturing: Portals can be followed through
  • Rupturing: Anchor to destination and then Blink
  • Chemistry: Metals can be attracted by magnets
Loot: Warp-dagger
Injuries/Overstepping: Likely light to slight medium overstepping for a time. Nauta has a total of safety skills of 1/2 his alchemy skill but this is pretty basic rupturing stuff anyway.
Fame: -
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: -
Image
Last edited by Nauta F'mos Geey on Tue Jan 09, 2018 12:48 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 93
But I don't want to cure cancer. I want to turn people into dinosaurs.
User avatar
Padraig
Approved Character
Posts: 1158
Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:22 pm
Race: Mortal Born
Renown: 939
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Templates
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 9

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Questions Written to the Void &
Answered in the Flesh

City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Provide support, not answers.
Caregiving: Reassure that you will deal with medical issues
Caregiving: Let grandfather and grandson be reunited
Discipline: Holding on to your emotions when reunited with your husband
Discipline: Not getting overwhelmed at feeling your husband's emotions
Meditation: Channel your energy into letter writing

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame:
Collaboration: Yes


Padraig

Knowledge:
Caregiving: The importance of touch
Caregiving: Deeper meaning in simple words
Discipline: Holding on to your emotions when reunited with your wife
Discipline: Not getting overwhelmed at feeling your wife's emotions
Discipline: Keeping emotions out of a story
Endurance: Regaining your land-legs
Endurance: Staying standing through exhaustion
Endurance: Ignoring cuts and bruises
Psychology: The power of returning home

Loot:None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes
word count: 151
User avatar
Zip
Approved Character
Posts: 782
Joined: Sat May 13, 2017 9:14 am
Race: Human
Profession: Professional Scowler
Renown: 0
Character Sheet
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 6

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Mine
City/Area: Etzos - outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: animal violence
Requested Rewards:
Robin
Skill Knowledge
Defiance: Sensing movement in the water
Detection: Finding the subtle nuances in a Defier's Calling
Discipline: Enduring abhorrent activities
Discipline: Tolerating digressions
Discipline: Holding back on a rebuke
Endurance: Enduring the Zi'da cold
Endurance: A heavy book landing on the lap
Tactics: Using magic in a hunt

Zipper:
Deception: Keeping bloody secrets from Finn
Detection: Looking for movement in a murky river
Discipline: Enduring disappointment
Discipline: Enduring failure
Discipline: Holding back on magic to enjoy a semi-mundane hunt
Endurance: Enduring the Zi'da chill
Intimidation: The thirst for the blood of aquatic mammals
Tactics: Using a Defier for an underwater hunt

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: We're hoping for some negatives for those poor dolphins if at all possible
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Last edited by Zip on Mon Jan 08, 2018 12:15 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 148
ImageImageImage
User avatar
Patrick
Approved Character
Posts: 1517
Joined: Mon Apr 25, 2016 10:39 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Trouble
Renown: 575
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: In the Scheme of Things
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Suggestively Mature Themes
Requested Rewards:
  • Business Management: Remembering to Track Earnings
  • Seduction: Metaphors To Add the Charm
  • The Harlot 'n' Hound: The Bar is a Privilege
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Image
Last edited by Patrick on Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:55 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 55
"Freedom is everything."


NPCs Renown Rolls Timeline Influences Pantheons Trove Property Workshop Rambles Vlogs
Image
User avatar
Patrick
Approved Character
Posts: 1517
Joined: Mon Apr 25, 2016 10:39 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Trouble
Renown: 575
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Right Back At It Again
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: For Mature audiences only, has been sitting in the AF queue for some time now...
Requested Rewards:
  • Seduction: Feats Are Attractive
  • Seduction: Taking Foreplay To Another Level
  • Endurance: The Sting of Dug In Nails
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: Scratches that've definitely healed by now.
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

Image
Last edited by Patrick on Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:56 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 68
"Freedom is everything."


NPCs Renown Rolls Timeline Influences Pantheons Trove Property Workshop Rambles Vlogs
Image
User avatar
Patrick
Approved Character
Posts: 1517
Joined: Mon Apr 25, 2016 10:39 pm
Race: Human
Profession: Trouble
Renown: 575
Character Sheet
Character Wiki
Plot Notes
Personal Journal
Templates
Letters
Point Bank Thread
Wealth Tier: Tier 5

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: In Pursuit of a God
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Definitely Mature, though not in the AF. ;)
Requested Rewards:
  • Business Management: Keeping Customer's Well Being In Mind
  • Business Management: Complimentary Drinks During Saun Is Good
  • Personal: Being an Expensive Common Whore
  • Philosophy: Never Be Afraid to Prove Something
Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Well.... I'll let you decide.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Image
Last edited by Patrick on Tue Jan 09, 2018 1:56 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 71
"Freedom is everything."


NPCs Renown Rolls Timeline Influences Pantheons Trove Property Workshop Rambles Vlogs
Image
User avatar
Nauta F'mos Geey
Posts: 374
Joined: Tue Jul 07, 2015 2:56 am
Race: Aukari
Profession: Chefling
Renown: 219
Character Sheet
Plot Notes
Wealth Tier: Tier 1

Featured

Contribution

Milestones

RP Medals

Miscellaneous

Events

Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: To be red, not dead
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: -
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
  • Endurance: Holding out on lack of breath while underwater
  • Swimming: Inadvisable when wearing heavy armour
  • Swimming: If all else fails, rope self before entering water
  • Chemistry: Damp cloth can prevent exposure to harmful gasses
  • Chemistry: Cinnabar reaction with other metals for soluble mix
  • Alchemy: 'Spread' a layer of metal instead of smithing a plate
Loot: Nauta's City Guard armour now with added Blood Metal protection, raw material for maybe 2-3 ingots worth of Blood Metal. Ring will be going to NPC.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: Giving a gift to Lizzie with the ring.
Collaboration: -
Magic EXP: (Yes/No)
Image
Last edited by Nauta F'mos Geey on Tue Jan 09, 2018 12:47 pm, edited 2 times in total. word count: 116
But I don't want to cure cancer. I want to turn people into dinosaurs.
Locked Request an XP Review Claim Wealth Thread

Return to “Archive Review Request Threads”