Review Request 2.1.2

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Vorval
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: (Turkey Lurkey)
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City/Area: (Etzos)
Notes/Warnings: (Foul Language, Violence)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Leadership; Making Sure A Comrade Is Armed and Geared at your expense.

Leadership; Working as a team to thwart an enemy.

Business Management; leaving business competition to die, for financial gains.

Business Management; Going the extra mile for an employer.

Blades Gladius; Liver Blow

Shield Heater; Bashing Adversary With Shield

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: (Nupe)
Fame: Unsure
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Chest Pains
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Carpentry: Plan the size of an engraving in wood
Carpentry: Mortice and tenon joint
Carpentry: The importance of accuracy to make joints flush
Carpentry: Using a chisel to engrave
Carpentry: Keep the wood itself clean, especially when engraving
Teaching: Explaining why things work

Loot: Nope - this is all paid for in her ledger under the holiday event.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope.
Collaboration: No
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Neutralitatis
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Alchemy: Noth's Powder: Needs to be combined with reagents of the highest quality
Alchemy: Definition of an Accelerator
Alchemy: Using a sealer
Alchemy: Using a triggering reagent
Alchemy: Triggers: used to activate an enhancement
Alchemy: Triggers: Must be added last
Alchemy: Requires a lot different steps
Alchemy: Many reagents come from animals and plants
Alchemy: How to handle sensitive reagents
Chemistry: Using chemicals to reduce the melting point
Persuasion: A little money helps ensure your privacy

Snäytu Kanna: the largest sentient land creature in all of Idalos
Snäytu Kanna: source of "Barkskin"
Reagent: Barkskin: a binder
Reagent: Nafinju spinal fluid: a powerful accelerator
Reagent: Swiftweb: a metabolizer
Reagent: Ivorian Rock Turtle shell: a sealer

Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: perhaps a little positive fame for making the gauntlet for Noth?
Collaboration: yes, with Noth
Magic EXP: no
word count: 155

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N/A

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N/A

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Zip
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The events leading up to the Zi'da dolphin massacre
City/Area: Etzos - Outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Some swearing, but you knew that
Requested Rewards:
Zipper

Skill knowledge

Deception: Picking the right words
Detection: Sensing misplaced optimism
Detection: Gauging the mood of the moody
Detection: Picking out landmarks from a high vantage point
Discipline: Exercising self-control with a mantra
Discipline: Soldiering through the unease of vulnerability
Discipline: Trudging through the horror of small talk
Intelligence: Ferreting out religious affiliation
Intelligence: The direct approach

Robin

Skill Knowledge

Detection:
Defiance: Flight only attainable with the wind's permission
Defiance: The anger of the earth
Detection: Sensing frustration
Discipline: Backing down from an escalating challenge
Discipline: Holding back from a magical brawl
Discipline: Admitting when you're wrong
Intimidation: A threat backed by magical force
Intimidation: Presenting a strong front to the potential threat of physical violence

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Two of a Kind
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: no
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Alchemy: Might be able to replicate the effects of Oberan's Shenanigan Sphere
Deception: Pretending that you enjoy talking to people
Detection: Spotting the only calm man in a panicked crowd
Discipline: Keeping your cool in unexpected situations
Discipline: Staying calm when somebody gets too close to you
Investigation: Investigating the cause of an unusual event
Psychology: Hate can blind you
Leadership: Taking charge of an unexpected situation
Leadership: Using your reputation to influence people

Location: Etzos Museum of Art and History
Oberan: Mortalborn
Oberan: Has the power to transform people
Oberan: Could be a valuable ally
Oberan: His philosophy on why to use the Shenanigan Sphere
Loot: no
Injuries/Overstepping: no
Fame: positive for saving Oberan
Collaboration: yes, with Oberan
Magic EXP: no

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Blessings

N/A

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Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Celeste Andaris
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: To The Victor Go The Spoils
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Celeste Andaris

Knowledge:
Leadership: Running a meeting
Leadership: Speaking to a small group
Leadership: Ensuring that everyone is clear
Leadership: Clearly stating priorities
Politics: Building alliances to weaken opponents
Politics: Looking for the reason behind arranged marriages
Politics: Don't make sweeping changes early on
Politics: Ensure that you isolate, in order to be victorious

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope.
Collaboration: Yes, but I finished it on my own cos Xander is a big meanie.
word count: 96
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Ellen'wyn
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Profession: Huntress
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Open Season
City/Area: Etzos frontier
Notes/Warnings: This is my first official job thread in ST, and it's not great so be warned. It's kind of a fade to black partway through the hunt after she misses the first few opportunities.
Requested Rewards:
Ellen'wyn
Knowledge: 6 max
Hunting: Game trails may lead to quarry
Hunting: Being downwind can ruin a hunt
Hunting: Always watch your surroundings
Hunting: Tracks are easier to find in the mud
Ranged Combat: Shooting on instinct
Field Craft: Following trails makes travelling easier

Loot: Bitter failure!
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 108
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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Taking Note
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Detection: Hearing mutters behind cups
Etiquette: It's polite to say thank you to a friend
Etiquette: The art of gift giving
Socialisation: Making a joke to ease feeling awkward
Storytelling: The first trial of freedom

Scalvoris: Cylus festivals
Scalvoris: Cold. Really, really cold.


Loot: +10gn for the chocolate box.
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Give a gift (Saoire event) Chest, 2 x blankets, 2x books, 1 x kit (12 fame at +2 each)
Collaboration: Yes


Arlo Creede

Knowledge:
Detection: Spotting when you've been spotted
Etiquette: It's polite to say thank you to a friend
Etiquette: The art of gift giving
Stealth: Muttering behind a cup
Strength: Pulling up a pregnant woman requires more muscles than it seems

Scalvoris: Cylus festivals
Scalvoris: Cold. Really, really cold.


Loot: -10gn for the chocolate box
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: (Saoire event) Spinning wheel, bench & book (6 fame at +2 each)
Collaboration: Yes
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Linika
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Glass of Holiday Cheer
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Nah...mild
Requested Rewards:
Skill-based Knowledge:
  • Alchemy: Slogah Oil to Remove Odors
  • Chemistry: Test Every Phase for Reactions to Added Reagents
  • Deception: Masked Truth Serum to Casually "Interrogate" IA Superior
  • Interrogation: A Placebo Truth Serum Can Evoke Overconfidence When Questioned
  • Poison: Detected by Smell Most Often
  • Psychology: Anniversaries of Her Mark Will be Called "Branding Day"
Non-Skill Knowledge:
  • Location: Madame Teviot's Skin & Furs
  • Yvithia & Audrae: Alike in Many Ways
Loot: Chemist's Kit (The other stuff was used up or taken)
Injuries/Overstepping: Nothing
Fame: Saoire does not judge
Collaboration: Nope, solo
Loss: 149 gold nel
Magic EXP: Nope, Alchemy is not magic.

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Valeria Burhan
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Hey girl, are you an Aukari...
City/Area: Somewhere in Mid-Town, Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Flirting/Seduction with great intent so slightly mature, I guess
Requested Rewards:
Valeria
Knowledge:
  • Skill Knowledge (Max. 10)
    • Seduction: Dressing the part
    • Seduction: The Flirtatious Giggle
    • Seduction: The Hair Twirl
    • Deception: Keeping gaze averted to hide emotions
    • Deception: Telling a half-truth
    • Seduction: The Importance of Touch
    • Seduction: Subtlety doesn't always work
    • Seduction: The Slow Lip Bite
    • Rhetoric: Dispensing harsh advice
    • Rhetoric: Having the last word
  • Non-skill Knowledge
    • Zane: Above using cheesy pick up lines
    • Zane: Filthy
    • Smof: An expensive but delicious wine
    • Zane: A useless flirt
    • Zane: A military man
    • Zane: Has pretensions of grandeur
    • Zane: Doesn't care if he sleeps with V or not
    • Zane: Appreciates honesty
    • Zane: Wounds a girl's ego
Loot: I don't think so
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope, unless you count wounded pride.
Fame: I don't think so but I'll leave it to the reviewer's discretion
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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