Review Request 2.1.2

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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: Breath Control
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Arlo

Knowledge:
Musical Instrument: GIttern: Plucking vs strumming
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Use tuning knobs to create a clear sound
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Needs to be in tune in order to produce a good sound
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Basic Chords
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Using music to accompany stories
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Change the strength of movement to change the noise
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Reading musical notation and linking to chords
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Use another instrument for tuning
Musical Instrument: Gittern: Whole notes, half notes.
Storytelling: Accompanying a story with music.

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: ? Don't think so ?
Collaboration: Yes


Faith

Knowledge:
Caregiving: Quiet sympathy upon news of a death
Caregiving: Being honest can help someone in grief
Caregiving: Not embellishing vital information
Singing: Breath control is vital
Singing: Pregnancy can make breath control more difficult.
Singing: Scales
Singing: Holding a note to help tune an instrument.

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: ? Probably Not ?
Collaboration: Yes

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Caius Gawyne
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: I only sleep to dream
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Innuendo. Cont'd in AF.

Requested Rewards:
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignoring feelings of desire
Discipline: Sticking to your convictions
Endurance: Two more bits.
Persuasion: Admitting your real desires
Persuasion: The power of apology
Rhetoric: Explaining what you really want
Seduction: If you want more of me, you can have it.
Seduction: Conversation against skin.

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge:
Discipline: Ignoring feelings of desire
Discipline: Keeping your hands to yourself
Leadership: Taking action to regain control
Politics: Brave words and bold moves, for the good of all involved
Sociology: Admitting painful truths
Seduction: Kisses are effective attention-getting tools

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.
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Caius Gawyne
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Review Request 2.1.2

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Thread Name: And I'm coming undone
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Feels.

Requested Rewards:
Caius Gawyne
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Taking away the problem
Drawing: Sketching letters by hand
Drawing: Laying out a large art piece
Deception: Breaking a promise for the greater good
Deception: Not telling the whole truth is still lying
Discipline: Remaining firm in the face of conflict
Discipline: Sticking to the plan even when it hurts
Endurance: Further blows to an injured face
Rhetoric: Admitting your fears

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.
Darcyanna Venora
Skill Knowledge:
Running: How to run in heels and a dress
Detection: Spotting injuries on another
Detection: Reading between the lines
Leadership: Right to the point
Strength: A slap is as good as punch
Politics: Making a good exit is as important as making a good entry

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yep.
Magic EXP: Nope.

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Noth
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Dressmaker
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Brief mention of violence, nothing messy, just dialogue. This is the first in a series of three threads about hunting down a serial killer.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: Look for Patterns
Investigation: Read Records for Clues
Stealth: Listening for Footsteps


Loot: -5 Gold Nels for assorted transactions
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Noth on Thu Dec 21, 2017 4:48 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 70
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Rose Greenwood
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Let Them Live or Let them Die
City/Area: Desnind (Tax Option 1)
Notes/Warnings: Just a solo job thread
Requested Rewards:

Medicine: A spoonful of honey makes the medicine go down
Medicine: Pain can bring madness
Medicine: Sometimes it is better to help them die peacefully
Medicine: Dressing a wound
Caregiving: Holding their hand so they know they are not alone
Caregiving: Telling jokes lightens the mood



Loot: (Tax Option 1 in Desnind : Rose would love any herbs, medicines, honey or the like. Anything else you can think up would be awesome too)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewers Discretion
Collaboration: Nope- Solo Job Thread
Magic EXP: No
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Noth
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Let's Not Prattle
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: This is the second in a series of three threads about hunting down a serial killer.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Investigation: Use Public Resources
Investigation: Always Ask Questions
Investigation: Questioning Leads
Detection: Noticing Subtle Facial Features

Loot:
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: -1 for being caught asking to see a dead person by the local government/suspicious behavior
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 75
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: To unpathed waters, undreamed shores
City/Area: Beach outside of Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: A thread that was supposed to go somewhere but didn't. Turned a dying thread into FTB drunk sex on the beach. Go Pash, go.
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Pash Raj'oriq
Knowledge:
Endurance: Keeping fingers warm playing music in the cold
Logistics: Planning a beachside bonfire
Lute: Breaking in a new instrument
Lute: Making melodies while intoxicated
Resistance: Whiskey against the cold
Resistance: Pacing oneself to stay buzzed
Singing: Folklore songs as a form of worship
Socialization: Pleasing a crowd with alcohol
Socialization: Keeping a crowd warm with a bonfire

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please. Reviewer's discretion for a public performance and also for Event Participation!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.
Kali'rial
Knowledge: (A list of knowledge)
Endurance: Staying out in cold weather
Endurance: Walking through sand when drunk
Linguistics: Xanthean slips in when drunk
Resistance: Handling your liquor
Resistance: Trying to speak clearly when drunk
Singing: How to keep time
Singing: Following a tune
Sociology: Serving others alcohol to celebrate

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Positive, please. Reviewer's discretion for Event Participation!
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No.

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Last edited by Pash Raj'oriq on Sat Dec 23, 2017 1:57 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 206
Rakahi | Rakahi Pidgin | Common | Xanthean

Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Technicalities
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Job Thread. Soz.
Requested Rewards:

Faith

Knowledge:
Baking: Put sugar with cold water in sugarwork
Baking: Careful ratio for sugar syrups
Baking: Water ruins sugarwork
Baking: Chocolate varieties each taste different, because of the bean.
Baking: Chocolate work is best done in the cold.
Business Management: Push your employees, but not too much.
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: No
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Noth
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Summon Bigger Monster
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Violent and a bit messy, not the worst thing ever.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Intimidation: Pre-Battle Conversation
Intimidation: Writing in Blood
Intimidation: Warning Others
Unarmed: Melting Organs with NG
Unarmed: Blocking A Needle


Loot: A sizable quantity of golden nels (Reviewer Discretion)
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Kind of a tough one... up to you.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 73
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As a note: Noth is a Grandmaster in Intimidation. That means that he's at least as scary as the Count from Sesame Street. Beware.

"The tyrant confuses those he can't convince, corrupts those he can't confuse, and crushes those he can't corrupt." - Anonymous
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Guillermos
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Review Request 2.1.2

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Thunderclap Link to thread
City/Area: Rharne - Earth Quarter - Thunder Den
Notes/Warnings: Unarmed Combat / Training
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Persuasion: Dealing with rejection
Psychology: Doomthinking
Socialization: Inadvertently sounding demeaning
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Pain is a good teacher
Unarmed Combat (Brawling): Strike within reach
Endurance: Ignoring fatigue
Loot: (If applicable)
Injuries/Overstepping: Fatigue & minor/superficial physical pain.
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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word count: 73
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