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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: A Well-Deserved Reprieve
City/Area: Scholar’s Nook, Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Nah. Conversational thread. Nerdy for a Pash thread.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
• Musical Instrument: Lute: Major and Minor Scales
• Musical Instrument: Lute: Written notation
• Cartography: Star maps are maps, too
• Navigation: Biqaj-centric constellations
• Navigation: Seasonal changes in the sky
• Navigation: Planets and stars as different reference points
• Navigation: Miscellaneous, regular heavenly bodies
• Physics: Stare at the stars, not the sun(s)

Non-Skill Knowledge:
• Location: Scalvoris Town: The Scholar’s Nook
• Scalvoris Drink: Scalvblack tea
• Scalvoris Island: Unique location for astrophysical studies
• Padraig: Has an impressively varied skillset
• Padraig: Self-educated, mostly
• Padraig: From Venora, Rynmere
• Padraig: Was that teacher crush (for Faith, anyway)


Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Reviewer’s discretion!
Collaboration: Yeppers, with Padraig.
Magic EXP: No

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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Andráska Venora
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: When Old Meets New
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: Andras shows some PTSD, but I think that's it.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Politics: Promoting Fundraisers
Politics: Ensure A Future For Those in The System
Politics: Adjust to the Political Climate
Politics: Choose The Right Spouse in Political Marraiges
Politics: Hold Your Tongue to Promote Good Alliances
Politics: Good Intentions Can Cause Suspicion
Leadership: Make Tough Decisions When No One Else Will
Discipline: Self Inflict Pain To Keep Dark Thoughts At Bay
Intimidation: Keep Some Details Hidden

Non-Skill
Celeste Andaris: In Love With A Man That Hates(?) You
Celeste Andaris: Mother
Celeste Andaris: Easily Jealous

Xander Krome: Politically Foolish
Xander Krome: Doesn't Like You
Xander Krome: Bad Judge of Character
Xander Krome: Rude
Xander Krome: Overly Protective
Xander Krome: Threatened You?

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: No
Fame: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Ronan
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Ready, fight! Wait, no, not yet. Now! Fight!
City/Area: Scalvoris, the Four in Hand
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Strength: Lifting an adult up under the arms
Strength: Carrying another man
Strength: Holding a man upside down
Detection: Sensing followers
Persuasion: Trying to convince others to follow your plan
Persuasion: Not everyone will do what you want them to do right away

Scalvoris: Lacks an arena
Four in Hand: Located on the outskirts of Scalvoris
Four in Hand: Bar, restaurant and casino in one
Four in Hand: Potential for a fighting ring
Four in Hand: Owner and Mixie: Future colleagues?
Four in Hand: Owner: Blue skin, blonde hair
Four in Hand: Owner: A tough woman
Four in Hand: Mixie: Happy to be there

Loot: -1 SN for the beer
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: +1 General good deed/Keeping the peace
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Qit'ria
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Thread Name: Stringing Her Along..
City/Area: Sweetwine Woods
Notes/Warnings: Nah, just tedious
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Resistance: Dogbane Causes Mouth Blisters
Field Craft: Dogbane seems to prefer disturbed soil
Field craft: Grey Dogbane is too old to use
Field Craft: Flatten Dogbane cores to separate out the wood
Field Craft: Rolling Dogbane fibers between finger and thumb makes more workable
Field Craft: Braiding Dogbane fibers into usable cord
Loot: Dogbane Cord (6 feet)
Injuries/Overstepping: Minor Mouth Blisters (should heal on own in a day or two)
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic EXP: (No)
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Accepting the Inevitable
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Injuries, amputation etc

Requested Rewards:
Faith
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Staying focused when exhausted
Surgery: Stitching wounds too big for the raft
Surgery: Efficiency does not equal speed
Surgery: Tools needed for a blood infusion
Surgery: Checking and testing blood types
Surgery: Reconstructing limbs

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: No
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
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Zip
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Playground squabble
City/Area: Etzos -outlying cities
Notes/Warnings: Yet another man-on-woman domestic violence case
Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Zipper
Intimidation: Expressing your dominance by stepping on a downed opponent
Intimidation: Letting danger seep into your tone
Unarmed Combat: Assuming a proper fighting stance
Unarmed Combat: Punching in the clinch
Unarmed Combat: Using your whole body to punch
Unarmed Combat: Forward elbow thrust
Unarmed Combat: Fighting someone bigger, stronger, and more durable than yourself
Unarmed Combat: Slipping a punch
Unarmed Combat: Pacing the war of attrition

Robin:
Skill Knowledge
Acrobatics: Ducking
Acrobatics: Falling with Purpose
Acrobatics: Stone’s Weight
Acrobatics: Stumbling Can be an Advantage
Acrobatics: Weight is a Hinderance
Endurance: Taking a Punch
Endurance: Fighting in a drawn-out brawl
Unarmed Combat: Throwing a Punch
Unarmed Combat: Slamming a smaller opponent against the wall

Non-Skill knowledge
Zipper: Shackled to an insane institutional construct called Etzos

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: Just a few bruises and sores
Fame: No
Collaboration: Ya
Magic EXP: Nope
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Ronan
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Earth, Wind and Fire. And... Ronan!
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Scalvoris: Elements Hall: Location
Elements Hall: Friendly Receptionist
Elements: Scalvoris Military
Elements: Four different units
Elements: Require 20 trials of training per Element
Elements: The Land Assistant
Elements: Sent you to guard the Order of Adunih

Loot: Being accepted in the Elements?
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: +1 if joining the police/military is considered a general good deed
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Ronan
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Rewards Requested

This is a curse approved Story by Jade
Thread Name: Starter Curse request: Vaelus (This links to the Prophet Support section, so I assume prophet status is needed to read it.)
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: I think it's a little bloody/descriptive on the fighting
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Persuasion: Using your massive size to back up threats.
Strength: Unbalanced = Easier to lift
Strength: An enemy shield is a good weapon
Unarmed: Keep punching, for good measure
Unarmed: Elbows make good weapons too
Unarmed: Low to High, the uppercut

Ronan: Berserking makes it hard to hear
Ronan: Cursed of Vaelus
Ronan: Oathbreaker and Bondbreaker
Ronan: Your blood doesn't clot
Ronan: Killed his Blood Brother
The master: Dead
The master: Changed by money?
The master: Not who you thought he was
The master: Soft from luxury
Quan: Fellow fighter
Quan: Bought out?
Quan: Where is he?
Quan: Worth about 2000 GN
Quan: Broken Bond, Broken Oath, Broken Friend
Quan: Blood Brother
Vhalar: Overpowered you as if you were a child
Vhalar: Unbeatable?
Vhalar: Cursed you

Loot: The money he brought at the beginning was lost in the fire.
Injuries/Overstepping: Stab wound in the back, cut on the forearm, bruised throat, head and back but they all happened several arcs ago. I'm not sure if the following should be here or perhaps under loot but Ronan broke both the Lesser Oath and Blood Bond that he had with Quan, who was a blessed of Vhalar. According to lore, breaking the Lesser Oath results in a series of unexpected setbacks and accidents (Ronan got imprisoned for several arcs, lost his Gladiator title and suffered for many seasons from the beating Vhalar gave him) and breaking the Blood Bond means his blood won't cloth until someone can forgive him for it.
Fame: Probably negative, if any.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
word count: 314
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Tio Silver
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Teach a Fish to Fish
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Includes a tense hostage situation!
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Teaching: Making use of a hostage situation
Teaching: The Demon Teacher
Teaching: How to motivate an artist
Teaching: 12 hours, 12 tests
Teaching: Identifying how to reach a student
Deception: Sure... he wanted to study of his own free will...


Loot: +50gn payment (and maybe an extra reward. I'll PM Pegasus about it.)
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Maybe a slight increase for teaching a difficult student? Whatever seems appropriate.
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Ronan
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: [Four in Hand] Money for nothing, punches for free.
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: It's a pit fight, so lots of punching and bleeding.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Unarmed: Straight kick to create distance
Unarmed: Knee kick to unbalance
Unarmed: Forehead punch to topple unbalanced opponents
Endurance: Turning with the punches to lessen damage
Deception: Faking an opening in your own guard
Medicine: Jar of Sealing Jelly to stop your bleeding

Luck: Things don't always go according to plan
Nature: Muddy, snowy, bloody earth is slippery.
Ronan: Old man pit fighter
Ronan: Won your first Scalvoris arena fight
Amar (NPC): Young and Strong
Amar (NPC): Lost his first fight to you
Amar (NPC): Almost victorious?
Amar (NPC): You gave him your winnings in secret
Anida (NPC): Owner of the Four in Hand
Anida (NPC): Not a lot of foresight
Anida (NPC): Can put together a fighting ring
Mixie (NPC): Took care of you after the fight
Mixie (NPC): Attracted to you?
Four in Hand: Back Alley fighting ring added.

Loot: His cut of the fight, which I assume is handled by the wages he earns from his job wages.
Injuries/Overstepping: Bloody nose, split lip, bruises knuckles and hand, bruised ribs and side, swollen left side of his face and numerous other lighter bruises on his torso and back.
Fame: Victory in Single Combat +4, Public performance, play or musical +5, General good deed +1 (not sure about this one, applies to the money he gave to Amar at the end)
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Last edited by Ronan on Tue Dec 05, 2017 7:52 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 262
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