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Quio
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: One Way.
City/Area: Uleuda, and an unknown location out in the waking world at sea.
Notes/Warnings: Severe injury, apparent death (lol don't worry), general angst, general violence, dehumanization, and (fiery) vomiting. Okay that's a lot.
Requested Rewards:
Yanahalqah
SKILL KNOWLEDGE--
Discipline: Waiting a long, long time
Leadership: Giving orders

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
Ulehi: Lunole; my children
Quiome: Probably dead
Quiome: Last known location: At sea
Quiome: Captured in Ne'haer
Quiome's captors: Live in Ne'haer?
Quiome's captors: Have a ship at their disposal
Self: Goal: Vengeance for Quio

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Not sure, probably none.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Quio
SKILL KNOWLEDGE--
Blades: Daggers: Hiding to suprise your opponent
Blades: Daggers: Backstab
Intimidation: Using whatever you got to intimidate the hell out of your enemies
Intimidation: Making yourself inhuman
Medicine: The asterism can get too hot
Stealth: Pressing flat beside a door
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: Teeth to the neck
Unarmed Combat: Brawling: One on one is better odds

OTHER KNOWLEDGE--
The men from Ne'haer: Know all of your forms

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: The first injury mentioned, the wound in Quio's neck/shoulder, is already listed on his CS.

Other than that, Quio ingests lantern oil, which causes a whole barrage of uncomfortable symptoms basically due to intense internal heat. I believe his asterism and esophagus would be relatively fire/heat-resistant, so he probably does not have to worry about a lot of damage there, but I'd imagine his mouth/upper throat may have some minor burns. The burns will likely hurt for a week or two.

He's also likely malnourished and dealing with pretty severe fatigue, exhaustion, and weakness due to injury, prolonged pain and stress, and pretty significant blood loss so just jot that down.

Good news is he escaped???

Fame: None probably. Maybe negative for being a hellbeast tho who knows.
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Thread Name: The Concealed, Revealed
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

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Skill Knowledge:
Business Management: Giving news to employees
Business Management: Discussing large issues in groups
Business Management: Speaking individually to your employees to ensure they are comfortable.
Business Management: Considering roles and responsibilities
Business Management: Preparing for your own absence
Leadership: Managing individuals reactions.


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: No.

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Arlo Creede
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Tolerating Uncertainty.
City/Area: Scalvoris, Scaltoth jungles
Notes/Warnings: Cannibalist baddies. Violence.
Vega
Requested Rewards: (6 posts = 11 max)

Hunting: Tracking above ground, looking for disturbed branches
Hunting: Flunnies
Bow: Aiming at moving airborn targets
Psychology: Boys are weird.
Sword: Draw and strike
Sword: Slice whilst moving foward
Sword: Maintain balance
Sword: Changing movement mid-strike
Sword: Relaxed stance
Sword: Lunging
Sword: Shifting weight as movement changes

Loot: +1 quiver of arrows, +1 dagger
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Killed a bandit, gave a gift
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Arlo
Requested Rewards: (6 posts = 11 max)

Acrobatics: Jump and tackle to the ground.
Acrobatics: Using your weight to swing an object
Acting: Injured
Acting: Improvisation
Acting: Use it to stall
Crossbow: Fast draw
Crossbow: Aiming quickly
Crossbow: Use the environment to gain advantages.
Crossbow: Spin and aim
Crossbow: Avoid friendly fire
Psychology: Girls are weird.


Loot: +1 dagger, +1 spear
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Killed a bandit
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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Thread Name: Foot Fungus is no Fun.
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
Faith
SKILL KNOWLEDGE--
Investigation: Working together provides options
Investigation: Consider geographical clues
Investigation: Ask questions about who is not involved
Investigation: Consider alternative possibilities.
Research: Considering all angles
Research: Use a variety of disciplines
Research: Collaboration leads to success.
Research: Start with what you know

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Padraig
SKILL KNOWLEDGE--
Investigation: Working together provides options
Investigation: Consider geographical clues
Investigation: Ask questions about who is not involved
Investigation: Consider alternative possibilities.
Research: Considering all angles
Research: Use a variety of disciplines
Research: Collaboration leads to success.
Research: Start with what you know

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.

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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Investing in the future
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Business Management: Considering how to invest
Business Management: Making changes to your environment to match your circumstance
Business Management: Using business as a social and community tool
Business Management: Expanding business
Business Management: Managing teams of staff
Leadership: Repeating and reinforcing the ethos you adhere to.


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: I think so? Faith is giving over just over 5K (which would be her salary) in order to set up this orphanage and expand the work Cally's does.

Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: No.
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Pash Raj'oriq
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Now Don’t Freak Out, But …
City/Area: Scalvoris Town Harbor
Notes/Warnings: Nah.

Requested Rewards:
Kali’rial
Skill:
Running: Pushing through the undergrowth to keep pace
Velduris: Pack Bond - Talking to your pack telepathically
Velduris: Pack Bond - Familiar can move to spirit form at will
Velduris: Sense Of Prey - Sensing small prey animals in hiding
Rhetoric: Questioning religious motivation and jealousy
Socialisation: Excitement makes you babble
Rakahi Pidgin: Qy'akot (family)

Non-Skill:
Pash: Accepted as part of your pack by Sarkis
Pash: Accepted Sarkis
Pash: Is able to make anything dirty if given half a chance

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Pash Vy’ryn
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Ignoring physical changes because love is bigger than that
Carpentry: Small saw for a small job
Carpentry: Sketching your plans before building
Carpentry: Glue is messy
Psychology: A good relationship is built on acceptance
Rhetoric: Every blessing story is different
Seafaring: Creating a canopy for shade aboard a sloop
Seduction: Fangs are a'right

Other Knowledge:
Immortal: Karem, Immortal of The Hunt, Survival, and Wolves

Kali’rial: Favored by Karem
Kali’rial: Made you a dog wolf person
Sarkis: Kali’rial’s spirit wolf companion
Sarkis: Has made you part of the pack

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

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Because of his Competency in Empathy magic, Pash exudes an aura of calm emotion that is always "on." While it's not strong enough to overcome extreme emotions and it also loses strength the more people he's around, it's still up to you how that affects your character in whatever situation we're in. PM with questions!
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: A Smile for a Penny
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Caregiving: Gentle tone of voice
Caregiving: Names have real significance
Caregiving: Communication can be non-verbal
Caregiving: Gentle touch
Caregiving: Don't overwhelm.
Caregiving: Comfort food
Surgery: Diagnosing a dislocation
Surgery: Treating a dislocation
Surgery: Check for infection in previous treatments

Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Good deeds. Giving Mero a home, Feeding Mero, Treating Mero's injuries. (+2 each for +6?)

Collaboration: Yep
Magic EXP: No.
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Celeste Andaris
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Thread Name: When Old Meets New.
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
Xander
Politics: Identify a good match
Politics: Relationships are important.
Politics: Political marriages can make or break a family
Politics: Fundraisers are good for being seen
Etiquette: Correct use of titles
Etiquette: Jealousy is an inappropriate thing to show
Etiquette: Give praise where it is due
Interrogation: Asking subtle questions
Interrogation: Being careful about what your questions reveal.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Celeste
Detection: Changes in behaviour
Politics: Small talk
Politics: Political alliances
Etiquette: Offer to help
Etiquette: Correct use of titles
Etiquette: Not revealing secrets

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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Celeste Andaris
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Thread Name: An Andaris At Heart.
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
Xander
Politics: Attending events in order to see who attends, and who does not.
Politics: Wedding gifts give a message.

Loot: +1 book
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Celeste
Politics: Attending events in order to see who attends, and who does not.
Politics: Wedding gifts give a message.

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: +2 (giving a gift)
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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Celeste Andaris
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Thread Name: Past, Present, Future.
City/Area: Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
Xander
Politics: Observe and learn the rules
Politics: Navigating the marital minefield.
Etiquette: Avoid stereotypes
Psychology: Women are changeable.

Loot: No
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
Celeste
Politics: Navigating the marital minefield.
Storytelling: Reminiscing
Psychology: Men do things very differently

Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping:
Fame: None
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic EXP: No.
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