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Atashi
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Banana tuesday, part three, dark snake rising
City/Area: Andaris
Notes/Warnings: none
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: none
Loot: none
Injuries/Overstepping: reading, eye strain
Fame: none
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Zip
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Race: Human
Profession: Professional Scowler
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Thread Name: The Fault in Our Stones
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Oh yes, violence. One kid beating on another.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Transmutation: Identity
Transmutation: Corrosion
Transmutation: Doesn't work on flesh
Transmutation: The Hardness of Stone
Unarmed Combat: Head Stomps
Intimidation: Using Violence to buy Silence
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Noooope
Fame: Prolly not
Collaboration: Nooooope
Magic EXP: Yes pls

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Victor Amielle
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: The Origin of Magic
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: No
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Acting like a Teacher
Linguistics: Singular They
Logistics: What to do when a Teacher is missing
Logistics: Using a Timetable
Teaching: Using a practical Demonstration to get your Students' Attention
Transmutation: Overstepping


History and Theory of Magic: The Spark: Definition
History and Theory of Magic: The Spark: Hungers for Ether
History and Theory of Magic: The Spark: Grows with continued Use of Magic
History and Theory of Magic: Ether: Definition
History and Theory of Magic: The Origin of Magic
History and Theory of Magic: The Definition of Magic
History and Theory of Magic: The Shattering
History and Theory of Magic: Mutations: An Inevitable Consequence of advancing in your chosen Domain
History and Theory of Magic: Every Initiation is Different
Professor Migh Gir: Teaches History and Theory of Magic in Scalvoris
Loot: None. But Victor loses 6 gn because he promised to pay somebody twice the amount a dagger costs!
Injuries/Overstepping: No.
Fame: -2 for an act of magic and a bit of positive fame for giving the woman enough money for two daggers and keeping the students entertained while they were waiting for their teacher

Collaboration: no
Magic EXP: yes
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Due to one of his Awakenings, Victor's eyes glow with a soft silver light.

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Victor owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Tio Silver
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: A Lesson in Pickpocketing
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:

Knowledge:
Pickpocketing: Be smooth
Pickpocketing: Wait for an opportunity
Pickpocketing: Cause your own distraction
Pickpocketing: Pick your targets carefully
Teaching: Believe in your student
Teaching: Repetition is key
Teaching: Don't let your student give up
Teaching: Congratulate good work


Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No
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Navyri
Last edited by Tio Silver on Tue Oct 17, 2017 3:53 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 69
Fast Facts
Noticeable quirks your character can see when threading with Tio.

Floats

Tio floats in the air, usually just a foot off the ground.

Explodeibur

Tio wears a scary looking gauntlet on his right hand that is clearly magical. It creates explosions.

Mercury

Tio has a masked alter ego who leads The Court of Miracles.

Enchanting Voice

Tio's voice has hypnotic properties.
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Alistair
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: So It Begins
City/Area: Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Just XP is fine
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: Nope

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word count: 34
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Niv
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Got Bugs
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: nope
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Just give me dat sweet sweet XP
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic EXP: yes
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Navyri
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Meeting the Madame
City/Area: Rharne/Glass Quarter
Notes/Warnings: Mild nudity.
Requested Rewards: 10xp
Skill Based Knowledge:
Seduction: Understanding Your Own “Preferences”
Seduction: Trail Fingertips Along the Skin
Seduction: The Intoxication of Smell
Seduction: Nudity Quickly Garners Interest
Linguistics: Forgetting Words from Disuse
Intimidation: Set The Rules With Silent Threats
Non-Skill Based Knowledge
Location: Rharne
Rharne: The Glass Quarter
Glass Quarter: Luxurious
Language: Gravokian
Gravokian: The Language of the Naerikk
Gravokian: Uses “We” as a Personal Pronoun
Gravokian: Difficult to Understand
Gravokian: Requires Context
Language: Euthic Sign
Euthic Sign: Hard for Outsiders to Detect
Euthic Sign: Uses Subtle Body Language
Euthic Sign: Practiced by the Naerikk
Euthic Sign: Offers Alternative Meaning
Naerikk: Believe in Owning Others
Naerikk: Sisters Under Audrae

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: Naerikk in Rharne (-10)?
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: No

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"At last. It has been too long since I have walked the face of this world. Too long have I been locked there, awaiting my champion to release me. My champion... This is you, daughter of Audrae. You have, whether knowingly or not, released me from my self imprisonment, and are here to fulfill the destiny I have seen written in the tapestry of nature. You, daughter of Audrae's daughter, will be my foothold in this world." - Belaera to The Nightingale, after the 600 arc imprisonment
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Faith Augustin Champion
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Feed-Forward
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: None.

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Early stages of pregnancy can be exhausting
Teaching: Show your own passion for what you teach
Teaching: Get students to identify their own priorities.
Teaching: The usefulness of feedback
Teaching: Keep a happy and relaxed classroom atmosphere
Teaching: Feed-forward as a teaching tool


Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: Nope

Collaboration: Nope.
Magic EXP: No.
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Life, Death and the In-Between .
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Zip
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Foundation
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Nah
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Transmutation: Step one - Deconstruction
Transmutation: Brilliance
Transmutation: The Rigidity of Steel
Transmutation: Shaken focus results in irrevocably damaged objects
Strength: Pushing a boulder aside
Stealth: Sneaking out into the night
Loot: nope
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Fame: nu
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes

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Keegan
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: Wyeb: Such Puppets
City/Area: Rhakros
Notes/Warnings: She makes herself puke at the end, which is kind of gross but not graphic.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Poisons: Ingesting barberry causes fevers
Poisons: Ingesting jimson weed causes blurred vision & dry mouth
Poisons: Jimson weed by blood stream causes temporary blindness
Lisirra: Looks like a small girl with black hair
Empathy: Strumming calm for stressful situations
Discipline: Allowing interruptions in order to finish obligations
Loot: Nope
Injuries/Overstepping: She just ingested a bunch of poisonous stuff, so she's probably gonna be sick for a while
Fame: Nope
Collaboration: No
Magic EXP: Yes.
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