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[Oakleigh] Meeting Duke Tristan

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Aeodan considered the Duke's words, rolling them over in his mind. It was entirely possible that a small sect of Jourkadri had split off, thought he doubted how plausible it would have been. Their culture seemed to alien to Aeodan for it to have survived, especially in the expansionist times that followed their climax. Instead, Aeodan thought it was more likely that the Jourkadri were wiped from Idalos, leaving behind only their remnants that they'd seen so far. Still, the scholar did not want to slash the Duke's dreams.

"It's possible, Your Grace. Perhaps, once the expedition has concluded, we could allocate some time and funds in order to survey the less-populated regions looking for signs of a living sect. Sure, it could be done."

Aeodan ignored the rigidity of Anari's body when he said it. She knew he was mostly placating the Duke, but she seemed wholly against the idea anyway. Still, though, she bit her tongue. Instead, she just allowed them to continue. When Tristan offered to show them to their rooms, Anari nodded curtly.

"That would be most appreciated, Your Grace." Her voice showed no appreciation at all. In fact, she seemed more annoyed than anything.

"Yes, Your Grace. It's been a long trip, I am sure my companions would enjoy resting after such time in the carriages. Myself, I would like to survey the grounds, if that is okay? I am not quite ready to turn in. Perhaps I could take Ayla with me?"

He smiled at the little girl, wiggling a finger at her. Lionel smiled at the motion, and Aeodan's bright eyes looked back at the Duke.

"Of course, if this is not satisfactory, I'd be happy to just retire to my room. I am sure Yvithia would very much like to hear more about my plans in the Settlements." He chuckled, running a hand through his wild hair.

"But I am not quite ready to sleep. Please, let us retire." Aeodan winked at Ayla, poking her belly as he stood. Anari stood rigidly, followed by Lionel, who bowed slightly at Tristan.
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[Oakleigh] Meeting Duke Tristan

“I’d like that“, Tristan replied as Aeodan suggested that they could look for a living sect after the expedition had concluded. He noticed that Anari didn’t seem to be very happy. In fact the woman had been a little grumpy pretty much throughout their meeting, and he couldn’t help but wonder what her problem was. Did she hate nobles – or babies? Maybe she had been forced to take part in this expedition and just wanted to go home to Viden again!

“Sure”, he said to Aeodan. Since he didn’t know what he could do to change Anari’s mind and make her feel better about the whole expedition, he decided to focus on the young scientist. “Feel free to take a look around. As for taking Ayla with you …” He paused briefly and looked at his daughter who looked back at him. He didn’t like losing sight of her, but then he remembered how wonderfully Aeodan had played with her. Maybe, if he allowed him to spend more time with Ayla, he would agree to become her babysitter after all!

“I think she’d like that. Be careful though. There are people that don’t like my family very much”, he warned him. He would order Lianne to secretly keep an eye on Aeodan. It was highly unlikely that the man was in league with Aelig – he was much too nice for that – but maybe one of Aelig’s servants would show up. It had been a while since the Immortal had last tried to ruin his life.

“Be nice to Aeodan”, he warned little Ayla mostly in jest and hugged her tightly before he handed her to Aeodan. “I’ll be waiting for you in my private quarters”, he said to the scientist, expecting him to return the baby when he was done surveying the grounds.

“As for you …” He turned to Aeodan’s companions. “I’ll show you to your rooms now.” In most noble households servants did such things, but Tristan had never been like most nobles. If he enjoyed something and had time to do it, why leave it to somebody else?

Instead of alerting a servant that his guests were ready to retire now, he moved towards the door and told Anari and Lionel, “Follow me, please!”
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[Oakleigh] Meeting Duke Tristan

Aeodan

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I loved this thread - and I am just so impressed with how you write Aeodan. You manage the NPCs with real ease, Lionel was just.. heart rending. I also love how you write your deference to Tristan whilst still remaining very much the scholar and the expert is just spot on. Lovely interaction with Ayla, too, of course, and the descriptions you gave of what Aeodan had found, the discussion about the museum and how Aeodan handled the new information at the beginning - all excellent. It's a pleasure to read your threads, it really is.

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XP:15

Fame: +5 (people will talk - etc)

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Nope

Knowledge

Etiquette: Knowing what to call nobility
Etiquette: Being polite in the presence of nobility
Persuasion: Using logic to persuade someone to do what you want
Rhetoric: Using dramatic pauses and phrases to enhance your point

Ayla Venora: Tristan's daughter
Tristan Venora: Duke of Oakleigh
Tristan Venora: Has a daughter
Tristan Venora: Excited about the Jourkadri



Tristan

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It's always a pleasure to read Tristan and this thread certainly didn't disappoint! He was wonderfully written and his thought process continues to grow. When he saw Lionel, I sighed and felt sad because the world shouldn't be this complicated for Tristan, somehow. Yet, he remains so very firmly himself and he is such a well written, well considered character. I really look forward to seeing more of the two of you writing together soon!

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XP: 15

Fame: +20 (that's a lot of gift!)

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Nope

Knowledge


Acting: Looking all important and official
Etiquette: Being polite even if a person doesn't interest you
Politics: Investing in cultural projects to make your subjects like you better
Persuasion: Trying to persuade somebody to work for you
Psychology: Feeling humbled all the time isn't good for your mental health

Aeodan: Scientist
Aeodan: Is conducting an expedition in Oakleigh
Aeodan: Is studying the Jourkadri
Aeodan: Likes Ayla
Aeodan: Would make a good babysitter
Anari Keant: Overseer of the project
Lionel: Works for Aeodan now
Jourkadri: Why they cut themselves
Jourkadri: Probably extinct
Jourkadri: Used to live in Oakleigh
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