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Rorom
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Review Request 2.1.1

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Bayward FIshing
City/Area: The waters between Ne'Haer and Bayward.
Notes/Warnings: Violence, three boarders were killed, maybe a bit of squickiness with the kill Rorom makes.
Requested Rewards: 10 points for completion?
Knowledge:

1. Fishing: Winged Nets, a new fishing contraption.
2. Fishing: Larger ships have better storage capacity for the catch.
3. Detection: Spotting pirate boarders and near/distant ships.
4. Spear (Trident): Deadly, even in untrained hands.
5. Seafaring: Tightening the rigging to avoid entanglements.
6. Location: Bayward: The waters near the city are rife with pirates.

Loot: This was a bounty thread for 50 gold, but I'm not sure if it's rewardable past the season it was taken.
Injuries/Overstepping: Concussion/head trauma (Since treated in another thread)
Fame: Nah.
Devotion: Nope.
Collaboration: Nuh uh.
Magic EXP: No.
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Thread Name: In The Cemetery With A Lead Pipe.
City/Area: Andaris, Rynmere
Notes/Warnings: None
Requested Rewards:
Faith Knowledge: None
Nir'wei Knowledge:
Business Management: The importance of keeping notes.
Business Management: Records aid efficiency.
Business Management: The best locations get the best customers, apparently.
Business Management: The importance of providing an atmosphere.
Leadership: Instructing a slave on where to start.
Leadership: Taking command where nobody else will.
Leadership: Taking advice from others.
Leadership: Working as part of a team.
Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Half Past Mid-Bell
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Oliver
Requested Rewards: (4 Post = 9 Knowledge)
Etiquette: Dressing nice for interview
Etiquette: Showing up to an interview on time
Intelliegence: Old Women often know local news
Negotiation: Stating Your Case
Negotiation: Offering a pay cut to seal deal

Location: The Lady Libertine
Theo: A brothel owner
Theo: My new handler manager
Zana: A courtesan

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Fame: N/A
Devotion: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Theo
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Keeping focused on the job at hand
Discipline: Not allowing a seductress to distract you
Discipline: Knowing what your temptations are
Intelligence: Discretion is a fundamental requirement
Intelligence: Considering all aspects of a negotiation
Negotiation: Terms of a negotiation must be stated clearly
Negotiation: Dealing with the unexpected
Negotiation: Working with unexpected twists.

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion
Devotion: No
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Zana
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Acting: Appearing to be entirely focused
Acting: Faking interest in another
Acting: Playing the role assigned to you
Acting: Considering how you move.
Deception: Seeming to be dismissive
Deception: Appear to be focused on one person whilst watching another
Persuasion: Being clear about what you sell
Persuasion: Saying it how it is.

Loot: NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Reviewer's Discretion
Devotion: Delroth: Make someone else feel jealous / inferior (+5)
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Review Request 2.1.1

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Thread Name: A Picnic With The Dead
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings:
Faith
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Sociology: The importance of rituals around death
Sociology: Notions of community
Sociology: Cultural relevance of death rituals
Sociology: Community grief has many layers


Loot:Deducted money for journal from ledger
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: Give a gift +2
Devotion: Famula: +10 (as per the Scalvoris Lore for taking part in this festival
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Domestic Bliss
City/Area: Emea
Notes/Warnings:
Vega
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None (dream thread)

Loot:NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
Doran


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None (dream thread)

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: None
Devotion: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Old Familiar Sting
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: This is unfinished because Gar'rek was retired. I've only requested like two knowledges, and am happy to have points docked at the end, tbh.

Requested Rewards:
Poisons: Scorbon Scorpions
Location: Gardener's Grace

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Devotion: -
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Who Let The Dogs Out
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Only has two posts because Kovic left, so whatever you feel is acceptable. I only requested a few knowledges so whatevs~
Requested Rewards:

Detection: Noticing Minute Changes
Etzos: You Hate It

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: -
Devotion: -
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: Same Feet, Different Path
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Err, it's about blood. Fairly significant nerdage.
Faith
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Research: Logical means of planning a research study
Research: Recording findings
Research: Test and retest hypotheses
Writing: Clear identification of test subjects.
Writing: Lab notes require clarity and brevity
Writing: Using structure to ensure clarity

Loot:NA
Injuries/Overstepping: None
Fame: I'm not sure. Maybe, as it's all very pioneering?
Devotion: +2 Vri (Pray to Vri, Pray to Famula), +4 Famula (Prayer + bloodletting in her name), +1 Moseke (pray)
Collaboration: Nope
Magic EXP: No
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Thread Name: (Name with link included) A Just Act | /viewtopic.php?f=88&t=8254
City/Area: (Where is this taken place in?) Ne'haer
Notes/Warnings: (Any Notes or warnings? Violence?) N/A
Requested Rewards:
  • Knowledge: Magic: It's Evil
  • Place: Crest Break Tavern
  • Lysoria: Filled with Evil Magic
  • People: Lord Vurris Lokhert
  • People: Lord Vurris Lokhert (Is a savage)
  • Misc: Orcage Wine is good stuff
Loot: (If applicable) -15GN
Injuries/Overstepping: (If applicable) N/A
Fame: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) N/A
Devotion: (Positive or negative and why, if applicable) N/A
Collaboration: (Yes/No) No
Magic EXP: (Yes/No) No
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Thread Name: Underneath The Stars
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Feels
Requested Rewards:
Finn O'Connor
Knowledge:
Endurance: Seeking Shelter To Outlast The Cold
Animal Husbandry: Trying To Lure A Goose With Sounds
Persuasion: My Friend Ollie Is Fatter And Tastier To Eat
Persuasion: Eat The Goose Instead Of Me
Tactics: Sometimes It Better Not To Flee
Deception: Lying About Not Being Hungry To Avoid Food Poisoning
Storytelling: A Funny Story About Paplo Ynush
Philosophy: Mortals Are Freer Than Immortals
Stealth: Leaving Noth's Cave Unnoticed

Noth: Monster Living In A Cave Outside Of Etzos
Noth: Cursed By The Immortals
Noth: Nicest Monster In Idalos
Vern: Noth's Guardian Goose

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: Surviving being near Noth? I don't know, I don't think there's fame to be had.
Devotion: -
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No

Noth
Knowledge:
Detection: Listening for footfalls
Detection: Vern is an Alarm
Intimidation: Sneaking up on people heightens fear
Intimidation: Restricting Escape Routes
Psychology: Orphans feel unloved
Psychology: All men are monsters
Leadership: Finding Common Ground
Leadership: Changing others opinions on life

Finn: Orphan from Etzos
Finn: Misses his family
Finn: Trusts You Inexplicably

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Fame: Surviving a very dangerous child? (just kidding)
Devotion: -
Collaboration: Yes
Magic EXP: No
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