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He decided that practicing in his room wouldn't be a good idea. Not when experimenting with a spell that could send him headfirst through the ceiling. So, of course, the gardens came to mind. He'd come to enjoy them, over the last season. They'd become regular and familiar to him, two breaks every trial, drilling the delegates alongside the rest of The Band. But there was till something to be said for secrecy. Not showing your entire hand, even when you weren't at the table. The armored soldiers that watched them with studied boredom, they knew he was a swordsman. Probably had heard he was a mage. But they hadn't seen all of it.

They still haven't. But that's not the real issue is it?

"Youse gonna get t'hoppin' or what?"

He rolled his eyes and turned to the arsehole picking his teeth on the bench. Raand was clearly enjoying himself already.

"Yer not helpin'."

"Am I supposed t'be?"

Kasoria knew better than to engage the wanker any further. Instead he closed his eyes and focused only on himself. The air on his skin. The heat of the suns, now finally returned, warming him. He breathed in, focused on the breath... the heartbeat underneath it... and in that stillness, he summoned-

"Come."

The Spark came willingly now, like a bidden dog. He was fast finding that was an accurate comparison. It was eager, in the way his Transmutation was, but less... intellectual. His Transmutation Spark wanted to know, to document, catalog, learn all it could then pass all of it on to him. Much as the word could be applied to an intangible bag of ether housing itself inside him, Sovereign just... wanted to fly. To be free. To taste the air and work its wonders among that element.

Well, it's your lucky day, wee man.

He remembered what he'd read in he book, sitting unmolested next to Raand on the bench. Propel was the next spell, the next chapter, the next skill to master. Kasoria had paused for a while. Allowed himself to become yet more familiar with Expel, Impart... but there was more. Always more. Satisfied his foundation was well-established, and his Spark was as ready as he was, he wanted to continue.

More power.

Kasoria's eyes opened. Her words came back to him, unwanted and, of course, undeniable. As always when memory of that trial stirred, the combination of loss smothered by anger was clear on his face. Even Raand looked away briefly, knowing that expression of old and not wanting to press what had birthed it. These trials, he knew of only one subject. But the Raggedy Man he'd known quickly shoved the feeling aside. He spoke again, in low voice he could barely hear... and then-

Raand's eyebrows shot up, as he saw the air around his boss flare into emerald fire, gold sparks hissing through it.

"That's gotta fuckin' hurt."

Kasoria heard him, but did not listen. Two very different things, he'd learned. You could hear the whole world bustle around you, but not listen to a note of it. You just had to know how to shut out the noise. Stop up your ears without cotton or pitch, just... let it flow around you. Through you. Never inside. He inhaled. Exhaled. In and out. Pull and push. What Maxine had hurled at him, what Raand snickered, every sound beyond his own skin... it went away, and he felt his Spark flow under his skin... and directed it down.

Just like he book said.

He bent his knees, hands clenched at his side. As if he was about to jump straight in the air. As he did, he directed his ether downward, but held it there, almost... yes, like nocking an arrow and drawing the string. Letting the power rest there until he was ready. Then he straightened up and jumped and-

"Propel!"

A trill later, his feet touched the ground again. That was... not the height of a grown man, as the book had estimated. That was how high, how far a beginner at Propel should be able to go. Taller than him, at any rate. Far enough that he would feel the difference. But there was nothing, and Raand's snigger told him he looked as ridiculous as he felt-

Ignore it. Don't let it register. Try again.

He bent down again. Directed his ether. It was easier that time; first time was always the worst. That time, he put all that focus into his feet. Let the ether pool in them, making his soles tingle in his boots. The little man clenched his hands into fists. Found his Spark flittering within his blood, wanting to move and fly as much as he did. He didn't chide it, threaten it, admonish it. It was... a child, in many ways. This was one more test for it, one more chance to grow.

Ready?

It could not speak, but he got his answer, and-

"Propel!"

A few trills later, Kasoria landed back on his feet, and Raand was no longer laughing. He smiled.
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"Do yeh need to speak?"

"Y'mean, like, the spell?"

"Aye. Whenever yeh do somethin' wiv' magic, yeh speak before. But not always. I seen yeh cast without."

Kasoria stretched his legs, feeling the tingles of unborn stiffness and lurking overstepping. Thrice he'd managed the same jump, and he was happy with the progress. Education was, after all, not just about a single feat. It was the ability to repeat that feat, explain it, dissect it, then pass it along. Applying that to himself was no different. When he'd stepped away from the center of the courtyard, Raand had taken that as his cue to start talking.

That's a friend, I suppose. Gives you a ration of shit but knows when to shut up when it counts.

"The better yeh are at a magic, the less yeh need to shout spells or wave yer arms about." Wanting tos how and not just tell, he plucked his coin purse off his belt, tossed it up... and stopped it in mid-arc with a quick Shackle. Aside from moving his arm for the throw, he hadn't moved. "See? That's Abrogation, though. Had that bugger the longest, so it's all in me 'ead now."

"But wiv' Sovereign, y'gotta start over."

Kasoria sighed, released his ether, and snatched the purse from the air. "More's the bloody pity."

He looked around the courtyard, trying to think what came next. It didn't take long for an idea to come. His gaze craned up and focused on the upper levels of the palace, open to the courtyard and running alongside it, like a balcony. He made their height... ten feet. Maybe twelve. He wasn't good enough to fling himself up and over that railing, but high enough to grab on...

Find out.

He smiled again. His words, his thought, but the motivation... could easily have been the quick pulse of eager life from his Spark. He faced the nearest arch and readied himself. This would take a run up. Summoning his ether and forcing it down into his legs, he started to move. Then jog. Then run. He knew how badly he could fuck this up, splattering himself against the black stone like a wanker, but he didn't accept it as a possible future. He forced the notion away, trusting in his ether, his Spark, and when he was ten feet from the edge of the courtyard-

"Propel!"

-forced the ether out of him from his feet, sickening lurch of upward motion making his eyes widen in surprise. It was like he'd been fired from a catapult, harder and further than he could by his own power. But he had only a trill to appreciate the notion before the balcony was mere feet away and-

"Gotcha!"

-he grabbed onto the railing with both hands, gripping tight, feet braced against the black bricks under the railing so he wasn't just dangling. Kasoria was far stronger than most men his age, but he wasn't about to push his luck. Not knowing how overstepping could creep up on a mage and ruin his body at the most inopportune moment. He looked down and grinned to himself. Eight foot drop, maybe, and far further than he'd be able to jump normally. He frowned, remembering even as he hung there. Something about falling... ah, yes.

"Er, Kas? You sure you wanna-"

He didn't listen. Didn't hear. His Spark was thrilled to have made their first flight, and came eagerly to his mental command. He forced it into his feet again and let go, dropping hard and fast and-

"Propel."

-when he was a foot or two from landing, shoved more ether out from under him... and landed light as a cat. He barely even needed to bend his knees. What should have been a heavy landing, even one needing him to tuck and roll, was as if he'd walked off a staircase. He chuckled softly when he saw Raand nod, lips pursed in grudging admiration.

"Aye, well... wee man like youse needs alla' help he can get."

"Yeah yeah yeah, fuck you, too."

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Ahh, thanks for doing the knowledge tags. That makes it 10x easier to do these reviews.

This was a good read for what you call a grind. I like hearing about the accomodations that the Etzori delegation are offered in Korlasir. Those black bricked buildings and gardens... sounds very peaceful and a good environment to learn magic in.

I was amused that Kasoria's friend mentioned the security leader's tendency to speak aloud when learning a magic.

When Kasoria started flinging himself about, I was almost concerned that he'd forget to soften the landing. That is the hardest part about flying, afterall. The landing. Thankfully Kasoria didn't survive this long without considering the details, and puts a pulse of propel at the end of his descent, to soften the landing. Avoiding that Icarian Flight clause.

Nice trick!

Good writing as always. Looking forward to the next couple of grindiness.

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  • Research: Using Metaphors and Analogies You Can Understand in your Studying
  • Sovereign: Propel - pushing ether from your limbs to jump higher or throw farther
  • Sovereign: Propel: Needs to be Cast in the Same Instant as the Mage Moves
  • Sovereign: Propel: Mage Has to Adjust Quickly to Enhanced Distance They Can Cover
  • Sovereign: Propel: Can Also be Used to Drastically Slow a Fall
  • Strength: Gripping Railings to Hold Oneself in the air
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