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70th of Ymiden 722

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Master Smith IV: The Judgening.

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Part of a Series:
Master Smith I
Master Smith II
Master Smith III

Rorom poured the molten pewter metal into the mold once it was set upright, it's channel dug so that it would flow easily into the specially shaped chamber that he'd be using to form the pieces for his solo earring. The metal bubbled and sizzled against the moisture of the sand mold as it was funneled into the chamber. For a moment, as Rorom listened to the way the elements played upon that opening, he worried that it would get stoppered up, congested before reaching its final destination. He whispered despite himself, coaxing the heat and flame to maintain against hte introduction to a colder exterior, so that it would remain liquid. Fortunately, coaxing and cajoling the tempestuous and unpredictable elements wasn't necessary, and it appeared to fill the chambers, sinking into the hole that was on the side of the mold, for the introduction of metal.

He waited only a bit or so, before opening up the mold, splitting it and revealing the rough product of the casting. Inside, a rough cylinder of beads interconnected by wiry connections was revealed. The protuberance of the beads were shaped like tear-drops or water drops, as Rorom had intended they be designed. He used the tongs to remove this cylinder from the mold, and carefully began using cutting shears to sever the bits connected by thin wire-like strings of metal. Thus he was left with four very rough pieces of metal, all ready to be heated and shaved and ground down to the shape he required.

He took one of these as his first try, taking it in hand and examining it before applying steel wool to the rough slag that covered it. Bit after bit, he wore away at the rough exterior to reveal a shiny metal beneath, which was pewter. Of course, this being pewter and not quite a noble metal, it'd be tarnished as a matter of practice. This was simply what one did with pewter jewelry, to give it's texture some contrast. Otherwise it would look bland. But for now, it was a bright gray throughout, devoid of definition.

He took it at turns, heating it, and then etching designs into the back of the water-droplet-shaped setting. He etched designs that resembled waves and some fish on the back of hte water droplet. Molding it, shaping it in such a way that it almost appeared a reasonably attractive piece of jewelry. It appeared he wouldn't even need the other samples that had been left over, as this one was shaping up to be a great setting for the carved whalebone that he had worked on the night before.

The front of the solo setting was concave, ready to accept the setting. Rorom pondered his options, whether to use a resin based glue to secure the whalebone to the setting, or to use prongs or pins to secure it in place. In the end, he decided he'd peen it, using a drill to carve a hole in the center of the 'nel-shape' that had been etched onto the whalebone. He made a hole into the whalebone, carefully, with a hand drill. He had to be careful about this, not applying too much pressure too fast lest he fracture the bone. He just focused on removing a little material at a time, after time, until it was entirely thorough, ready to accept a soldered pin to secure it in place.

He was still intending to use some resin-based glue to keep it in place, some of which he'd set aside. He slathered a little bit onto the back of the whalebone jewel, not too much, lest he create a separate plane that completely disconnected the metal from the whalebone. Then he pushed it against the jewel. He let it dry, as he grabbed a soldering iron from the furnace to heat it up. Looking into the flames, he couldn't help but be hypnotized by the elements, yet he maintained his discipline in the face of it and didn't coax it to heat faster this time.

After a few bits of that, the glue had surely dried, and so he took his soldering iron and melted a bit of shaved off pewter from nearby the workbench where his jewel was resting. There, he gently pushed the droplet into the small hole he'd drilled through the whalebone. The excess, he made sure to curl a bit into a sort of wiry design that resembled waves, extending to either side of the nel-etching on the whalebone. This would give it a little bit of visual interest, as well as securing it further into place, binding it to the singular jewel.

The main piece of his solo earring having been finished, he turned his attention now toward the chain and earring hook that would need to be formed from the jewel.




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The chain went a bit faster than the main jewel, but that was to be expected. Over the past few days, Rorom had learned a good deal about wire-work, particularly the aspects of it that bled into the creation and formation of small chains, for the purposes of tying jewels to. In time, he supposed, he'd be able to create whole amulets of precious metals such as silver, gold, bronze, and other metals. This process of crafting a jewel from the beginning stages of having no expertise or experience in metalwork, Rorom found, was incredibly rewarding. He knew it was something he'd want to incorporate into his long voyages, to keep him occupied and also to be useful around the ship in more than just a command capacity. Having a competent smith on board would surely be a boon.

Regardless the chain was finished, and finally set and riveted to keep it attached to the main jewel. The chain was thin, and not very long for all that, but would surely hold well enough to keep the earring on a person's ear. It was weighed in the end, to be sure that its mass was on par with other earrings, and hopefully therefore not deform an ear over time.

Once it was done, he set it aside, and waited. Meanwhile, he made himself useful at tasks with the other apprentices, to help shore up the chances of Tomis so that he would get the recognition he deserved for training them.



The time came for the judging to happen. All of the smiths who'd signed on to this opportunity presented their work. One after the other. Many seemed to favor making weapons and those sorts of things, mostly non-ornamental. Some made components for various machines and such like chains, others made tools. When they got to Tomis' group, the first that was looked at was the tin lantern that the other apprentice had made. A tin lantern that held a candle in the center, and with holes in its shell that made for a pretty effect when light shone through it. Then, the next was a fairly pedestrian thing, but well made in Rorom's opinion; it was a hinge for a door, or a chest perhaps. At least that was what it looked like. Copper Smythe seemed impressed enough with this, and nodded his head. Then they came to Rorom, and his jewel of pewter and whalebone, carefully etched and fashioned into an ornamental piece.

Copper's head tilted slightly, curiously as he looked at the metal droplet, and the whalebone jewel within it. He only took a few momens to consider Rorom's work, before moving onto the next set of apprentices. He did give a cordial nod at Rorom's work, however, which gave the biqaj some hope.

At the end of the whole process, Copper gave his judgment, and the winner was announced. Rorom waited with baited breath to see who it'd be.

Yet, regardless of the outcome, he was glad to have picked up a new skill, and increased old skills that he'd been neglecting in recent arcs for the sake of his business. He would surely continue with the metalwork and creation of functional jewelry with bits of the sea's treasure, and also the treasures of the earth mixed in. Whatever happened, Rorom was satisfied.


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Name: Rorom

Points awarded: 10
Magic xp: N/A

Knowledge:
Smithing: x1
Jewelry Crafting: x2
Discipline: x3

Renown: 10
Loot: A tear-drop solo earring of whalebone and pewter

Skill Review: Appropriate to level.

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It's always a treat to review Rorom - I don't get to do it often!

I enjoyed the series very much. This entry was unique because it almost solely focused the creation of the earring. Crafting solos are funny creatures and it takes good writing to make them come alive because they can very much get bogged down in details. You did fantastically with this aspect, letting the reader feel Rorom's focus on his work.

It's obvious you did some research - good on you - for this series. I don't know much about smithing or jewelry crafting, but everything Rorom did made sense from the scope of my own lens and I learned a few things a long the way!

One point - Deciding which teacher won the competition isn't really in the purview of the reviewers. It would fall more into the city moderator's realm. Luckily, this minor point doesn't impact the review but a Viden mod will need to pop in with a mod note and let you know the results. I just might know one....:D

Great writing! I enjoyed this piece very much. Enjoy your rewards!

Rorom

  • Renown: 10
  • XP: 10
  • Knowledges:
    • Smithing: x1
    • Jewelry Crafting: x2
    • Discipline: x3
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Hey - thanks for the nudge here, I didn't realise that this hadn't been done.

Congratulations, Tomis wins the competition. This gives Rorom the following:

1. Free lessons from Tomis should he wish it.
2. Free use of Tomis' workshop / space, should he wish it.
3. The chance to make purchases from Tomis as though he were Tier 10, from the rest of the smiths involved in the competition, as though he were Tier 8.
4. 10 WP as a prize (awarded via UCP)
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