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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: On Neutral Ground
City/Area: Scalvoristown
Notes/Warnings: Some minor language.
Requested Rewards:
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Knowledge:

Caregiving: x 2
Intelligence: x 2
Investigation: x 2

Loot/Losses: A doomed letter.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Caregiving.
Competent: Strength, Leadership.
Expert: Endurance, Investigation, Detection.
Master: Intelligence, Meditation.
GM: Psychology, Socialization, Discipline
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

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            Zemos
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            Review Request!



            Thread Name: Festive Contagion
            City/Area: Scalvoris, Scaltoth
            Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, the other player never quite got off the ground.
            Skills Used:

            Novice: Logistics, Leadership, Navigation.
            Competent: Stealth, Necromancy, Meditation, Discipline.
            Expert: Medicine.
            Master: Fieldcraft

            Requested Rewards:
            Knowledge:

            Fieldcraft: x 2
            Necromancy: Swarm: Poisoning a hive of insects, in order to raise them as a collective thrall.
            Medicine: Poisoning a wasp hive with deadly insecticide.
            Navigation: Bringing along a great map can help one find their way.

            Loot: 1 Swarm thrall of wasps.
            Injuries/Overstepping: none
            Renown: None
            Wealth Points: none
            Collaboration: Yeah kinda
            Magic Experience?: Yes Necromancy


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                      Elisabeth Black
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                      Thread Name: To Be or Not to Be...(Part Two)
                      City/Area: Scalvoris Town
                      Notes/Warnings: Part Two of Elisabeth's follow up with Jacien after his job offer during the Forging. Part One is linked in the thread. The original write up for Jacien is here. It was revealed in the Forging that he is actually the Deputy of the Spirit branch of the Elements.

                      Skills Used:
                      Socialization - GM
                      Detection - Master
                      Discipline - Master
                      Psychology - Expert
                      Etiquette - Competent
                      Investigation - Expert
                      Intelligence - Expert

                      Requested Rewards:
                      Knowledge:
                      Intelligence - x2
                      Investigation - x2
                      Psychology - x2

                      Loot: A trial period as a member of the Spirit branch of the Elements
                      Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
                      Renown: Reviewer's Discretion - unsure. Elisabeth's meeting isn't public, and she's to keep her association private, but the appropriate people are going to be told it, possibly raising her profile in certain circles.
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                                Russel Kandor SadPlamt
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                                Thread Name: [Imperial Arcane Academy] Bend and Sway
                                City/Area: Volcanic Mountain Region, the Eternal Empire
                                Notes/Warnings: None
                                Skills Used: Athletics (Novice), Endurance (Novice), Discipline (Novice), Detection (Novice)

                                Requested Rewards:
                                Knowledge: Athletics x5, Endurance x1
                                Loot: None
                                Injuries/Overstepping: None
                                Renown: None
                                Wealth Points: None
                                Collaboration: No
                                Magic Experience?: No

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                                          Balthazar Black
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                                          Thread Name: Not to Be
                                          City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund, Nellies
                                          Notes/Warnings: Thread features Balth's personal NPC Robin and follows up on the consequence from this thread. It's mostly just the two of them talking about what to do next so I'm not claiming knowledge for it.
                                          Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Detection (GM), Discipline (Master), Meditation (Master), Socialization (Master), Stealth (Expert)

                                          Requested Rewards:
                                          Knowledge: None
                                          Loot: None.
                                          Injuries/Overstepping: None.
                                          Renown: None.
                                          Wealth Points: None.
                                          Collaboration: No
                                          Magic Experience?: None.
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                                          Submitted for mod attention. March 20th, 2022.
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                                                    Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
                                                    Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
                                                    Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
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                                                    Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
                                                    Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
                                                    Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.
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                                                    Devin
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                                                    Thread Name: Curious Questions
                                                    City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
                                                    Notes/Warnings: -
                                                    Skills Used:
                                                    Devin: GM Socialization, GM Athletics, Master Detection, Expert Logistics, Expert Discipline, Competent Animal Husbandry, Competent Animal Training, Competent Etiquette, Competent Teaching, Novice Caregiving
                                                    Alyssia: Animal Husbandry(Novice), Discipline(Novice), Etiquette(Novice), and Socialization(Novice)

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                                                    Knowledge:
                                                    Devin
                                                    Animal Husbandry: Chocolate is bad for goats
                                                    Animal Husbandry: Stroking pets so that they don’t feel ignored
                                                    Athletics: Using your bed as a trampoline
                                                    Athletics: Stretching your arms a lot so that you can stroke two pets at the same time
                                                    Caregiving: Calming someone that seems nervous down
                                                    Detecting: Noticing when exactly someone’s smile disappears
                                                    Logistics: Planning what needs to be done in the Barony
                                                    Socialization: Convincing someone that they do have skills by mentioning examples
                                                    Socialization: Convincing someone not to become a mage by pointing out the dangers
                                                    Socialization: Assuring someone that their opinion matters
                                                    Socialization: Convincing someone that you are not racist by explaining why racism doesn’t make sense to you
                                                    Alyssia
                                                    Discipline – sharing a secret even when afraid
                                                    Etiquette - knock at the door before entering
                                                    Socialization - going to someone you trust with a secret
                                                    Animal Husbandry – give a pet love
                                                    Socialization – asking if another person is afraid of your race
                                                    Socialization – finding out something amazing about family
                                                    Devin – not fazed by the Aukari
                                                    Devin – a mortalborn
                                                    Aukari – not bothered by the cold like other races
                                                    Ishallr – a part of Scalvoris island
                                                    Becoming – a magic discipline
                                                    Becomers – transform into animals
                                                    Magic can mutate the user
                                                    Loot: -
                                                    Injuries/Overstepping: -
                                                    Renown: -
                                                    Wealth Points: -
                                                    Collaboration: yes
                                                    Magic Experience?: no
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                                                              • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
                                                              • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.
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                                                              Devin
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                                                              Thread Name: A Test of Trust
                                                              City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
                                                              Notes/Warnings: Devin's mother is a Personal NPC.
                                                              Skills Used: GM Socialization, GM Deception, Master Detection, Expert Discipline, Expert Logistics, Expert Leadership, Competent Stealth

                                                              Requested Rewards:
                                                              Knowledge:
                                                              Detection: Hearing that someone is walking in your direction
                                                              Leadership: Knowing if you can rely on the people around you is important
                                                              Logistics: Setting up a game to test people’s trustworthiness
                                                              Stealth: It’s easier to sneak in socks
                                                              Stealth: Holding your breath can help you remain hidden
                                                              Stealth: When hiding behind a curtain, make sure that your feet aren’t visible!

                                                              Loot: -
                                                              Injuries/Overstepping: -
                                                              Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
                                                              Wealth Points: -
                                                              Collaboration: no
                                                              Magic Experience?: no
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                                                                        • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
                                                                        • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.
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                                                                        Thread Name: Beauty For Ashes
                                                                        City/Area: Viden
                                                                        Notes/Warnings: Darius discovers that Yeva is no longer dead! What the...?!
                                                                        Skills Used: Caregiving (Competent), Detection (Expert), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Novice), Psychology (Novice), Writing (Untrained)
                                                                        Requested Rewards:
                                                                        Knowledge:
                                                                        Caregiving: Holding a loved one close.
                                                                        Detection: Recognising a familiar voice.
                                                                        Discipline: Trying to be strong for someone else.
                                                                        Discipline: I'm not crying, you're crying!
                                                                        Meditation: Reflecting on the events of the trial.
                                                                        Meditation: Reflecting on your emotions.
                                                                        Psychology: Seeking solace in the company of another.
                                                                        Psychology: Sharing grief can make it seem more manageable.
                                                                        Writing: Recording memories to ensure they aren't forgotten.
                                                                        Writing: Writing can be helpful for processing emotions.

                                                                        Loot: N/A
                                                                        Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
                                                                        Renown: If applicable.
                                                                        Wealth Points: N/A
                                                                        Collaboration: No
                                                                        Magic Experience?: No
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                                                                                  Balthazar Black
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                                                                                  Thread Name: The Plan
                                                                                  City/Area: Scalvoris, Almund
                                                                                  Notes/Warnings: Thread features Balth's personal NPC Robin and follows the two of them making a rough plan for a business/mercenary company. All they really figure out is where they want to base it and where they are going to start looking for employees. Oh! It also refers to the threats that were sent out, specifically the one Balthazar received. I'm not claiming full knowledge for it.
                                                                                  Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Detection (GM), Discipline (Master), Meditation (Master), Socialization (Master), Stealth (Expert), Business Management (Untrained)

                                                                                  Requested Rewards:
                                                                                  Knowledge: Business Management - Consider the local demand for your service
                                                                                  Loot: None.
                                                                                  Injuries/Overstepping: None.
                                                                                  Renown: None.
                                                                                  Wealth Points: None.
                                                                                  Collaboration: No
                                                                                  Magic Experience?: None.

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                                                                                  Submitted for mod attention. March 22nd, 2022.
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                                                                                            Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
                                                                                            Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
                                                                                            Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
                                                                                            Marks
                                                                                            Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
                                                                                            Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
                                                                                            Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.
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                                                                                            Devin
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                                                                                            Thread Name: Dragonlings And Other Things
                                                                                            City/Area: Faldrass/Scalvoris
                                                                                            Notes/Warnings: Abandoned, but as good as finished. Korim is a Smooglenuff Manor NPC. I've requested fewer knowledges on purpose. Kisaik will request knowledges and such later on.
                                                                                            Skills Used: GM Socialization (250x/145k), GM Medicine (250x/132k), Master Detection (151x/72k), Expert Endurance (76x/43k), Expert Discipline (80x/65k), Expert Leadership (76x/36k), Competent Storytelling (26x/20k), Competent Etiquette (26x/65k)

                                                                                            Requested Rewards:
                                                                                            Knowledge:
                                                                                            Endurance: A chaos bolt-induced headache
                                                                                            Etiquette: Ask for permission before you write about someone
                                                                                            Medicine: Warmth can alleviate a headache
                                                                                            Medicine: Morning savior mixed with basil and mint helps with a headache
                                                                                            Socialization: Offering one secret for another
                                                                                            Storytelling: How I solved the beer crisis
                                                                                            Storytelling: Kisaik’s encounter in the Heart of the World

                                                                                            Loot: -
                                                                                            Injuries/Overstepping: -
                                                                                            Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
                                                                                            Wealth Points: -
                                                                                            Collaboration: yes
                                                                                            Magic Experience?: no
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                                                                                                      • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
                                                                                                      • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.
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