Review Requests 2.2.5

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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: The Issue of Choice
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Another therapy session with Balthazar's Court Appointed Therapist Elliot Ratched. They discuss Balthazar's thoughts on his current situation.
Skills Used: Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Psychology (Expert), Socialization (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: None
Loot: None.
Injuries/Overstepping: None.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Pig Boy
Claimed for review.
word count: 70

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: Sacrifices
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: PC's first thread!

Skills Used:
Detection - Novice
Ettiquette - Novice
Discipline- Novice
Appraisal - Untrained
Cosmetology - Untrained
Persuasion - Untrained
Logistics - Untrained

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection - Observing patrons in a tavern
Discipline - Ignoring frustration at the tardiness of another
Cosmetology - Dressing to one's best because appearances matter
Etiquette - Best manners to accept a well-meaning apology
Persuasion - Pointing out the fallacies of someone's argument
Logistics - Sorting out what needs to done in terms of settling in Scalvoris

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion


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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

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Thread Name: A Formal Hell...
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:

Skills Used:
Detection: Novice
Discipline: Novice
Etiquette: Novice
Cosmetology: Untrained
Psychology: Untrained

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology - The color gold suits an olive skin tone
Detection - Noting when you are being looked at
Etiquette - Dinner conversation should be light and non-controversial
Etiquette - Knowing when to leave to avoid drama
Discipline- Reining in one's temper when confronted with a rude person
Psychology - One's reasons only need to make sense to that person

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion


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word count: 95
"A girl should be two things: who and what she wants."


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Elisabeth Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Trial to Remember - Volume Two
City/Area: Haven/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Balthazar
Skills Used
Discipline (Expert)
Meditation (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)
Intelligence (GM)
Leadership (GM)
Socialization (Competent)
Persausion (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Elisabeth
Skills Used
Discipline (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)
Detection (Master)
Persausion (Expert)
Caregiving (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes


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Elisabeth Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Elisabeth and Azrael
City/Area: Saoire's Timey-Whimey place
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Azrael
Skills Used
Socialization (Novice)
Acting (Novice)
Detection (Novice)
Persuasion (Competent)
Discipline (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Elisabeth
Skills Used
Discipline (Expert)
Psychology (Expert)
Detection (Master)
Persausion (Expert)
Caregiving (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
None

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion
Collaboration: Yes


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Woe
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Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Do the Hokey Pokey
City/Area: Viden fitness center
Notes/Warnings: A fencing match.
Requested Rewards:
Woe
Knowledge:

Blades: x 3
Deception: Make them think you're going to do one thing, then do another.
Stealth: A feint attack can spring from an unexpected motion.
Tactics: Tire them out rather than overpower.

Loot/Losses:
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion.
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Skillplay
Novice: Nothing Used.
Competent: Deception, Stealth, Blades, Detection, Endurance, Strength.
Expert: Tactics, Acrobatics.
Master: Nothing Used.
GM: Nothing Used.
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: No

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word count: 99
Words Like Violence, Break the Silence
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Mutations/Scars/Markings

Merged Shadow
Poison Blood
Strong Shadow
Horned Shadow
Winged Shadow
Shadowscar
Ignorance Domain
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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Vecchi Peccati
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:

Skills Used:
Detection - Novice
Ettiquette - Novice
Discipline- Novice
Appraisal - Untrained
Cosmetology - Untrained
Logistics - Untrained
Writing - Untrained
Psychology - Untrained

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Writing - Penning a letter to a friend
Logistics - Packing appropriate clothing for a trip
Psychology - Items leave emotional memory imprints
Psychology - Know thyself
Appraisal - Denser paper denotes superior quality
Appraisal - Judging the quality of material


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion


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word count: 77
"A girl should be two things: who and what she wants."


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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Supplicants
City/Area: Scalvoris/Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: This thread is about the consequence given to me by Pig Boy in this review.
Skills Used: GM Chemistry (100x/117k), Master Medicine (151x/71k), Master Detection (151x/67k), Competent Writing (30x/33k), Competent Etiquette (26x/56k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine: Chamomile tea helps against inflammation
Medicine: Valerian tea helps against insomnia
Medicine: Elderberry syrup helps against congestion
Medicine: Rubrum Berries boost the immune system
Medicine: Arnica soothes aching muscles
Detection: Noticing a skin irritation

Loot: Various small gifts & a basket full of Faldrass Potatoes.
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: 5-10, for helping the settlers and providing them with herbal remedies.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: -
Magic Experience?: -
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word count: 116

Mutations

N/A

Blessings

N/A

Worn Items

Ring of Reversal
Ring of Immunity
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Natalia Gregorios
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Assurances
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings:

Skills Used:
Detection - Novice
Ettiquette - Novice
Discipline- Novice
Appraisal - Untrained
Cosmetology - Untrained
Logistics - Untrained
Combat - Blade (One-handed) - Untrained
Combat - Unarmed - Untrained

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat - Blade (One-handed) - Hammer Grip
Combat - Blade (One-handed) - Fencing Grip (variation of Hammer Grip)
Combat - Blade (One-handed) - Adjusting grip mid-thrust can make you lose hold of weapon
Combat - Blade (One-handed) - Don't hold by the blade
Combat - Unarmed - A free hand can be used for parrying, jamming, grabbing, or striking
Discipline - Inconsistent practice will lead to inconsistent results


Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion
Renown:
Reviewer's Discretion

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Balthazar Black
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Re: Review Requests 2.2.5

Rewards Requested
Thread Name: Meeting A Cloud
City/Area: Scalvoris, Faldrass, Haven
Notes/Warnings: Second thread with Balthazar meeting his legendary mount. I'm not claiming fully knowledges for this thread as it is mostly Balthazar making an unsuccessful trek through the Ashwoods and getting lucky so he does not learn much.
Skills Used: Leadership (GM), Discipline (Expert), Meditation (Expert), Psychology (Expert), Detection (Expert), Investigation (Expert), Persuasion (Competent), Animal Husbandry (Novice), Animal Training (Untrained), Hunting (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge: Animal Training (Wing Walker) - Using a gentle voice to calm a frightened animal
Hunting (Tracking) - Wind Walkers leave some fur on things they collide with

Loot: If applicable.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No
 ! Message from: Doran
Claimed.
word count: 125

Visible Mutations/ Marks

Mutations
Defiance: Skin always glows faintly and he is warm to the touch. His is also the center of a field of static electricity so people get shocked touching him on occasion.
Rupturing: Orange etheric cracks spider-web up his arms to his elbows. His eyes and the glowing cracks going down his cheeks glow dark blue.
Transmutation: He has a series of emerald, glowing cracks on his right pectoral.
Marks
Bellinos: His fingernails are always black. The color fades into his fingers.
Celarion: A dim glowing ring surrounds his left forearm.
Palenon: A silver lightning shaped mark about the size of a hand stretching up towards his torso.

Scars

  • Oops, Oops, Ouch: Balthazar Black has twenty scars across his back from a lashing as well as scars on his hands and arms from jagged rocks on Faldrass. There are two scars on the sides of his abdomen from being stabbed and a slash across his back which blends in with the whip scars.
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