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The cities and villages of Melrath are as varied and diverse as they come. The capital of Raelia is the the jewel of this western kingdom, playing host to a merchants, artisans, Aesir priests, as well as a cut throat political landscape dominated by the nobles of Raelia. To the south in the depths of the Myrkvior Forest lies Melrath's second largest, and oldest city, Fensalir. Here people have learned to live alongside spirits and the natural world by maintaining their loyalty to traditions laid down the first Melrathi. To the east lies the small fishing village of Noatun, and to the western mountains rests the Mer city of Verimeer, the brewing town of Alivilda and the alpine village Vormund.
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Thunder, Part 1

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Vhalar 10, Arc 720

The leaves in his little garden were beginning to change color, Tristan noticed when he took a look out of the window of his kitchen where he was just working. Green was slowly making way to different shades of red, yellow and orange. He took a moment to enjoy the view in front of him, a light smile on his face. He loved fall. He had already loved fall before he had been marked by Vhalar, the Immortal of Fall. There was something intensely beautiful about the way that the landscape changed color, and besides, watching Ayla when she was jumping into heaps of leaves or playing with her kite was so much fun!

His plants were waiting for him though. Tristan had lined up flowerpots with a few different herbs on the windowsill where they always got enough light. He did not cook a lot, and when he did, it was usually a questionable affair, but he had become quite a competent herbalist, in no small part due to being engaged to one, and he occasionally used mint or basil for his alchemical potions as well. He poured a bit of water from a small, green watering can into the pots, checked the soil to see if it was just the right kind of moist and added a bit more water, and then he rearranged the pots slightly and took a step back.

He was just about to head into the living room where one of his bodyguards, Lianne was playing with his daughter Ayla, when there was a loud knock on the door. The young duke (at least he thought he still was one; he was in exile because of a terrible plague, but he had never given his duchy back, and the king hadn’t fired him either) stopped dead in his tracks for a moment, and then he … well, he was about to walk over to the door in order to open it, but Hannah, another bodyguard of his, a young woman with short auburn hair, got there first.

“Someone just dropped off a letter, some sort of official looking man in a uniform”, she explained when he reached her (she had just closed the door again). “I wonder who this is from. A prospective client? The government? Or … a love letter from Ashling?” she asked in a somewhat amused tone of voice before she handed the letter that was contained in a cream-colored envelope to him. Hannah occasionally teased him (and everybody else in the house), but the truth was, she was quite happy that he had found someone again. She quite approved of his taste in women, and she hoped that she would find a girlfriend that was just as lovely (and fierce!) as Ashling one trial.

“No, not from Ashling”, Tristan replied as he carefully opened the envelope and started to read, furrowing his brow as he did so. “It’s from one of Mrs. Gunderson’s friends. Remember the woman with the short-legged dog that I told you about? Apparently, my sculpture impressed her after all, and she recommended me. Her friend, Mr. Karlsson wants me to make a sculpture of his noble steed, Thunder. The animal is supposedly quite volatile”, he remarked and furrowed his brow some more.

He did not let that information discourage him though. His own horse, Maxos (named after Peake Maxos Andaris who had been one of the most dangerous men in Rynmere) had a lot of personality as well, and he loved him dearly. He would accept the job, he would do well, and what more, he would have a lot of fun. He loved making animal sculptures!


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Re: Thunder, Part 1

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The following trial, Tristan packed all the tools that he thought he might need for the job, including various chisels and hammers as well as a bit of protective gear (he was not terribly fond of piece of stone landing in his eyes because he was not wearing goggles, for example) and went on his way. Before long, he approached a luxurious house made of dark stone in the Alfar Hold. It was located right across the street from a beautiful park that reminded him of the parks in Sabaissant, the city where he had grown up. He looked at it for a moment, feeling a little nostalgic, before he walked up to the door and knocked on it.

The young duke was dressed elegantly, in a royal blue robe that was decorated with silver threads.

He had only been waiting for a few trills, when he already heard heavy footsteps on the other side of the door. Before long, it was being opened, and a tall, muscular man in his thirties with a dark brown hair, a beard and dark eyes that was dressed in a forest green outfit opened it and looked at him questioningly. “Yes? What can I do for you? Are you the sculptor that Mr. Karlsson is expecting?” he asked the young duke in a booming tone of voice.

“Tristan Venora”, said young duke confirmed and inclined his head politely before he extended his hand for the other man to shake. He was not intimidated by the man who was likely a guard or a servant of sorts and who towered over him at all. On the contrary, he reminded him of Peake Andaris, who he had not only named his horse after, but who had also been the inspiration for one of his sculptures (anatomically correct, of course, which was something that he was rather proud of), and he smiled at him as a consequence as he momentarily wondered if …

Maybe this Melrathi man with an embla on his face was actually the real Peake who had gone into hiding after the mage killings and the plague and decided to start a new life as someone’s servant, opening doors and taking care of outlander visitors? Peake had never seemed like he would enjoy serving someone and obeying orders very much, but stranger things had happened in the past. This man didn’t look as if he were missing a leg though.

No, he decided, the appearance was probably just coincidence (which disappointed him a little bit, to be honest; Peake had not been a particularly nice man sometimes, but he had been an endless source of inspiration when it came to his writing as well as his art).

“Come with me then. Mr. Karlsson was quite impressed by the way you handled Mrs. Gunderson’s request, and he is eager for you to start working. He is waiting for you in the salon. I will tell the stable hand to get Thunder ready while you talk to him”, the Peake-lookalike informed him and gestured for Tristan to follow him inside.

Which he did, eying his new surroundings with interest. As a duke and former friend of the king of Rynmere (who he hoped was still alive somewhere in spite of his questionable and occasionally downright cruel political decisions), he had visited a lot of houses of a lot of wealthy people over the course of the arcs. There were certain differences between the houses of the rich and famous in Rynmere and here though, the art that depicted scenes of spiritual worship or the hunt, for example. The wood carvings on the walls attracted his attention especially though and caused his eyes to widen for a moment.

They were quite masterfully made. Being an artist himself, he appreciated such things especially!

“This wooden shield here was a gift from Jarl Eric Imair, an acquaintance of Mr. Karlsson’s”, the Peake-lookalike explained in a polite tone of voice upon noticing how Tristan looked at the décor and stopped in front of a particularly eye-catching decoration for a moment. “Jarl Imair is a masterful woodworker, one of the best in Raelia, in fact.”

“Mr. Karlsson is waiting though, and it’s best not to make him wait too long”,
he added in a tone of voice that was not unfriendly, and Tristan nodded and continued to follow him.
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Re: Thunder, Part 1

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The man that sat in the salon, in an armchair with dark red upholstery, in front of a stone fireplace was young, no older than Tristan himself. He had green eyes, brown hair and a short, well-groomed beard, and he was dressed in emerald green and gold. For a moment, the young duke wondered if he was facing Mr. Karlsson’s son rather than Mr. Karlsson himself, but the Peake-lookalike had been pretty clear. This was his new client!

The young man was not alone; a dark-brown dog, some sort of hunting dog, judging by the looks of it, was lying on a shaggy rug next to him and watched him out of deep brown eyes. Next to her (Tristan was pretty sure that the dog was female) half a dozen puppies played. Tristan smiled softly at them, because he quite loved puppies (and kittens, of course) before he bowed to their owner.

In his home, the kingdom Rynmere, Tristan was the equivalent of a jarl, secondary in power only to a member of the royal family, and he had met kings, queens and Immortals; he preferred to treat people like equals rather than like some sort of underlings though, and be friendly, and polite. Everything else was simply not acceptable in his opinion!

“My dog, Elsie”, Mr. Karlsson introduced his four-legged companion and stroke her head affectionately. “Do you have pets as well, Mister Venora?” he asked before he gestured for the young noble to take a seat on an armchair opposite of him that resembled his own.

“A NightPup from Scalvoris, and a cat. I also have a horse”, Tristan replied with a smile as he sat down and put his bag on the floor next to him. “NightPups have rabbit-like ears and bushy tails, and they are quite loyal companions”, he explained upon noticing Mr. Karlsson’s look. The man seemed quite interested in hearing more!

“My daughter Ayla named him Fluffy”, he said and grinned, and Mr. Karlsson laughed.

A moment later, the expression on the Melrathi’s face abruptly grew more serious again though. He stroke Elsie again before he leaned back in his chair and began to get down to business,

“As I have told you in my letter, I wish to have a sculpture of my horse, Thunder, made”, he told Tristan who listened attentively in a form tone of voice. "My friend Mrs. Gunderson – we share a love of dogs – spoke quite highly of you. Thunder is a very proud stallion that values his freedom, and for that reason I do not wish to cage him while you make a sculpture of him. I assume that that won’t pose a problem?”

“I have been told that you have a way with animals and even talk to cats”,
he added and looked at Tristan expectantly and rather curiously (you didn’t meet a man that could talk to cats every trial, after all).

“I invented a potion that enables you to talk to cats and understand them, yes”, Tristan replied, unable to hide his pride entirely (he just loved that particular invention of his so much). “And I’m positive that I’ll be able to deal with Thunder. My own horse, Maxos, is quite temperamental as well. If you want to, I’ll take a look at Thunder right now”, he offered, the tone of his voice utterly polite and calm once more.

“Do you already have the stone?” he then inquired. In order to make a sculpture, he needed a stone, of course!

“Everything’s ready”, Mr. Karlsson told him. “If you complete the job – and complete it well – I will put in a good word with an influential acquaintance of mine, Jarl Eric Imair”, he added at which Tristan’s blue eyes widened a hint in surprise.

He had been hoping to get in contact with the noble families of Melrath!

“Follow me, please”, Mr. Karlsson spoke and rose from his chair. Tristan stood a moment later and picked up his bag, not noticing that it was a little heavier than it had been before.

Together, they walked outside, into the garden and then to a small paddock where the Peake look-alike and the biggest horse that Tristan had ever seen, in his entire life, were already waiting for them. Thunder was midnight black, he had eyes that seemed to be made of fire, and he snorted loudly when he saw Tristan.

The young duke resisted the urge to make a step back.

This was his model? He made Maxos seem like a cute little pony!


What happened to Tristan's bag, and will he do a good job?

And where's the stable hand that "Peake" mentioned?

Find out in Thunder, Part 2!


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Comments: This was a nice, relaxing crafting thread. I liked how you opened it, with Tristan's reflection on how he liked autumn, and loved to watch his daughter Ayla play in leaves.

It was funny that he thought the client looked like Peake Andaris. I thought that call back to old characters and the confusion it caused in Tristan was very amusing.

I hope he does a good job on sculpting Thunder! I wonder if the horse really is as cantankerous as rumored...

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