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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Unto The Breach V: Delivering The Goods
City/Area: Ishallr
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Skills Used: Endurance (Competent), Field Craft (Novice), Logistics (Competent), Seafaring (Competent), Strength (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Skill Knowledge:
Endurance: Enduring the difficulty of ascents can often lead to the comparative ease of descents.
Field Craft: Different footwear is suitable for different terrain.
Field Craft: Crampons can help with traversing the snow.
Field Craft: Walking in snow will leave tracks.
Field Craft: Sleds are useful for moving heavy items over snow.
Logistics: Sleds can be useful for carrying a lot of equipment at once.

Non-Skill Knowledge:
Location: Ishallr: Eclipse Portals

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable, for being recognised by the guards and delivering goods to Storm's Edge (via Rharne).
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Working Till We Fall (Smithing Journeys - Part Two)
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Still a Smithing solo so, not the most interesting for everyone, but enjoy
Skills Used: Smithing (Competent), Endurance (Competent)

Requested Rewards:
Smithing x5
Endurance x1

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: What Roots
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: None
Skills Used: Strength (Comp), Defiance (Master), Unarmed (Master)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Strength x 3
Unarmed x3

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: No, Prae just practiced some low level defiance.

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Let's play 'What's Weird About Prae'

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  • A fiery rune shines under his right eye
  • A firey glow in the back of his mouth

Arms

  • A ring of blue runes floats over each of Prae's wrists
  • A silver shield marks the back of his right hand
  • A ring of light around his left forearm

Misc

  • His tail is about eight feet long, usually knotted around his waist
  • His body temperature is uncomfortably high

Surroundings

  • Wind gusts with every step he takes
  • The area around him is slightly more static-y than normal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: The First Storm
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Study thread for Doran's Charter in Chemistry. Lots of science! Taelis is a Personal NPC.
Skills Used: GM Alchemy (250x/176k), GM Chemistry (100x/96k), Master Research (151x/92k), Master Discipline (151x/60k), Expert Detection (76x/43k), Competent Etiquette (26x/37k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Chemistry x3
Research x3

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Ring of Reversal
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Dining Out
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: A bit of romance and flirting. It's a date that was never finished as the other PC disappeared.
Skills Used: Master Cosmetology (151x/38k), Master Persuasion (151x/57k), Expert Discipline (80x/33k), Expert Acting (76x/41k), Expert Seduction (76x/48k), Competent Detection (26x/28k), Novice Etiquette (3x/26k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology x1
Persuasion x4
Seduction x4

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no
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  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

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Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: A Political Interview
City/Area: Viden
Notes/Warnings: Starter quest and meant to become my wealth thread as well
Skills Used: etiquette (novice), intelligence (unskilled), investigation (novice), negotiation (novice), politics (novice), sociology (unskilled)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Etiquette: Proper interview etiquette
Intelligence: Hearing what is said between words
Investigation: High society rumours
Negotiation: Employment deal
Politics: Knowledge is power
Sociology: Social class of Viden

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: -
Wealth Points: +1 Wealth Thread for Cold Cycle 720
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Jayne
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: This is my Vhalar job thread. Devin cuts a boil open and drains it. There’s pus. I tried not to be extremely detailed though.
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/86k), Master Cosmetology (151x/38k), Master Medicine (151x/58k), Master Persuasion (151x/57k), Expert Discipline (80x/33k), Expert Acting (76x/41k), Competent Surgery (40x/26k), Competetent Detection (26x/28k)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Cosmetology x3
Medicine x1
Surgery x2

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Maybe 5 or so, for treating a patient and offering her a cheap makeover?
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no
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Appearance

  • Due to an encounter with a magical tree Devin has bright violet eyes.
  • Devin has fancy black claw-like nails. The Grafter Rakvald made them from the spines that grow on the dubaebo's back and attached them to Devin's hands.

Items

Devin owns a Ring of Reversal. He's always wearing it, unless stated otherwise.

Potions

N/A
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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Be Still my Beating Heart
City/Area: Almund/Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Grafting, cutting off some skin from an Immortal. I'm submitting this, as TIo is retiring.
Skills used: Graft (Master), Detection (Novice), Business Management (Competent), Logistics (Novice), Surgery (Expert), Medicine (Novice)
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Rakvald

Code: Select all

Medicine x 2
Graft: Energizing x 2
Graft: Adhering x 2
Logistics x 5

Loot: -1 poker table (thrown in a dumpster fire)
Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewer's Discretion.
Renown: Reviewer's Discretion.


Wealth Points: Business Transaction: Small Business with a Wealth Tier of 10: 12 x .75 = 9 wp
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes Graft

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

Rewards Requested

For Pig Boy to review


Thread Name: The Tournament of Plants and Potions, Challenge Three

City/Area: Melrath, Fensalir in Ashan 720

Notes/Warnings: This is the third and final part of The Plants and Potions calendar event. The event information is included in the beginning of the first post. So are the IC scoring rules.
Scoring Rules
"The goal was to cure Jarl Namdalen, who wasn’t feeling well.

The first part, Examination, would be a team task and give a team score. Each team (one alchemist and one herbalist) would get a personal interview with Namdalen so they could examine him. They had decided to go for teams as Namdalen felt too tired for four examinations and wanted only two.

After this, the participants had tree trials to make the potions and medicines of their own choice. No cheating of course and so on. The examination would be a collaboration but after that it was each to their own. The alchemists Biarne and Tristan would compete against each other. The herbalists Buxom and Ashling would compete in the herbalist part of the contest. The team score and the individual score would be added for each participant. The outcome would be one winner of the potions tournament and one winner of the plants tournament. All the contestants agreed to this."


This is what we agreed to suggest OOC:

Teamwork in examination and diagnosis (Team Tristan & Ashling VS Team Biarne & Buxom) , 0/4 to 4/4, 0=None, 4=Excellent

Effect of potions (Tristan vs Biarne) 0/4 to 4/4, 0=No effect on any symptomes, 4=Amazing effect on all symptoms

Effect of herbal medicines (Ashling vs Buxom) 0/4 to 4/4, 0=No effect on any symptomes, 4=Amazing effect on all symptoms

Outcome: One winner of the potion contest , One winner of the herbal medicine contest

Requested Rewards:

Tristan


Request
Skills Used: GM Etiquette (250x/68k), Master Alchemy (155x/71k), Master Persuasion (151x/72k), Expert Leadership (78x/21k), Expert Detection (76x/25k), Expert Gardening (76x/24k), Competent Medicine (75x/16k), Competent Discipline (26x/20k), Competent Endurance (26x/14k), Novice Strength (25x/7k)

Knowledge:
Alchemy x3
Leadership x1
Medicine x6
Strength x1

Loot: N/A

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewers discretion

Renown: For the third part of the tournament, working with the Jarls

Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes

Magic Experience?: N/A
Ashling


Request
Skills Used: Expert Detection (76x/48k), Novice Discipline (10x/9k), Competent Endurance (26x/22k), Expert Field Craft (76x/24k), Competent Intelligence (26x/29k), Novice Interrogation (0x/3k), Expert Medicine (76x/46k), Novice Poison (0x/3k), Novice Resistance (0x/0k), Competent Psychology (26x/29k)

Knowledge:
SKILL
Discipline: Continuing an examination without allowing a patein
Discipline: Maintaining your ordinations witout being swayed by the patients refusal
Resistance: Resisting a light overdose of a toxic beer spice (Labrador Tea)
Poison: Identifying the symptomes of Labrador Tea poisoning

Medicine: Crafting Bogmyrtle infusion to counter Labrador Tea poisoning
Medicine: Diagnosis based on enlarged liver
Medicine: A full body exmination
Medicine: Diagnosis of complex symptomes can be hard due to underlying factors

Medicine: When you can't be sure of the root cause, begin by easing the symptoms
Intelligence: Looking for more facts to test your ideas
Interrogation: Trying to make them speak by pointing out your friendship
Interrogation: Trying to make them speak by saying it's about life and death

NON SKILL
PC, Tristan Venora: Was not born a heir but made a duke due to his accomplishements
PC, Tristan Venora: Liked shenaigans when he was in his teens

Herb: Labrador Tea (Skvattram) is a beer spice which and be toxis in bigger doses
Herb: Bogmyrte is a beer spice that can neutralize the effect of Labrador Tea

Loot: N/A

Injuries/Overstepping: Reviewers discretion

Renown: For the third part of the tournament, working with the Jarls

Wealth Points: N/A

Collaboration: Yes

Magic Experience?: N/A

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Re: Review Request 2.2.4

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Thread Name: Fighting Forges Friendship
City/Area: Rharne
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Collaboration: Yes

Varlum:

Skills Used: Shields (Unskilled), Strength (Expert), Endurance (Competent), Defiance (Expert)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Shields x7
Endurance x4

Loot: Friendship!
Injuries/Overstepping: Nope
Renown: N/A
Wealth Points: N/A
Magic Experience?: Yes (for the beginning of the thread, training with defiance)


Elisabeth:

Skills Used:
Combat-Blade (26/100 – Competent)
Combat- Shield (5/250 – Novice)
Discipline – (7/250 – Novice)
Tactics – (0/250 – Novice)


Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Combat – Shield – Tower shields limit the visual range
Combat – Shield – Shields need to fit the person using them to be effective
Combat – Blade – Gladius won’t do much against a tower shield
Combat – Blade – Use the opponent’s momentum against them
Combat – Blade – Visualize where your strike will land
Combat – Blade – Know the limits of your weapon
Discipline – a person is a better training partner than a dummy
Discipline – patience is a virtue
Discipline – keeping a schedule of training, even in different places, is good.
Tactics – Power isn’t everything
Tactics – Smaller, faster opponents can outmaneuver a larger one.



Renown: 5 points (She’s out being seen, training with Varlum (locally renown), and making connections.


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