Review Request 2.2.4

[Dandelion]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: New Growth
City/Area: Rharne, the Stormlands
Notes/Warnings: Animal death
Skills Used: Hunting (nov), Fieldcraft (comp), Butchering (nov), Fishing (nov), Cooking (nov), Needlecraft (nov), Endurance (nov), Ranged (shortbow) (nov), Detection (nov)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Butchering: plucking a bird
Butchering: gutting a bird
Butchering: separating edible organs from inedible ones
Butchering: cutting at the leg joint
Butchering: primary cuts of a bird
Ranged (shortbow): hitting close range targets of opportunity cleanly


Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Doubt it
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

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[Darius Baer]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Unto The Breach III: Seeking Passage
City/Area: Scalvoris Town
Notes/Warnings: Features topics of grief and loss.
Skills Used: Discipline (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Leadership (Competent), Negotiation (Novice).

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Discipline: Don't let emotions dictate your decisions.
Endurance: Enduring emotional pain.
Leadership: Get it done.
Negotiation: Don't be afraid to counter-offer.
Negotiation: Sweeten the deal.
Negotiation: Don't persist if they refuse to budge.

Non-Skill:
Location: Garden Of Remembrance And Thanks

Loot: N/A
Injuries/Overstepping: N/A
Renown: If applicable, for using Faith's name with the captain.
Wealth Points: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience?: No

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[Kasoria]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Line Through a Name
City/Area: Etzos
Notes/Warnings: Foul Language, Bloodshed, Torture, Abuse, the usual funzies
Skills Used: Unarmed Combat (Master), Transmutation (Expert), Abrogation (Master), Intimidation (Master), Tactics (Master), Interrogation (Novice), Torture (Novice)

Requested Rewards:

Skill Knowledge:
Abrogation - Shackle: Dragging a Fleeing Victim Backwards
Abrogation - Shackle: Infusing and Manipulating the Air, Not Merely "Moving it"
Tactics: Hunting a Hunter While They're Hunting (they don't often see that one coming)
Torture: Breaking Bone after Bone after Bone...
Transmutation - Corrosion: Can Degrade or Destroy Enemy Weapons During Combat
Transmutation - Shapecraft: Opening a Chasm Under a Target

Non-Skill Knowledge:
NPC Carrow: Old Partner, Former Enemy, Current Traitor, Immediate Corpse

Renown: Probably not
Magic Experience?: Yes

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[Woe]

Thread Name: Sound Unheard, Sight Unseen
City/Area: Viden Academy
Notes/Warnings: Whipping. Kinda bland. No dialogue.
Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:

Woe

Hone: Rune of Sight.
Hone: Rune of Sound.
Hone: Chained Rune of Sight and Sound
Hone: Chained Rune of Endurance and Touch.
Endurance x 2

Skillplay

Whip: Grandmaster
Acrobatics: Novice
Endurance: Competent
Hone: Expert
Discipline: Expert
Meditation: Expert
Detection: Competent

Loot/Losses: bought an average bullwhip, within tier.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes if you see something worth awarding!
Wealth Points: No
Collaboration: none
Magic Experience?: Yes Hone

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[Devin]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Two Hearts
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Study thread for Devin’s Charter in Medicine. Some mild flirting and general weirdness. I’m using a consequence given to me for this thread. I got carried away a little, so the story’s quite long.
Skills Used: GM Deception (106x/86k), Master Persuasion (151x/47k), Master Medicine (151x/58k), Expert Discipline (80x/33k), Expert Acting (76x/41k), Expert Seduction (76x/48k), Competent Detection (26x/26k), Novice Psychology (10x/7k), Novice Investigation (5x/28k), Untrained Writing

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Medicine x2
Psychology x4
Seduction x1

Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion.
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience?: no

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[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: A Shot In The Dark
City/Area: Melrath wilds
Notes/Warnings: Transmutation initiation. Violence?
Balthazar Skills Used: Attunement (Master), Discipline (Expert), Mediation (Expert), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Mount (Competent)
Victor Skills Used: Master Research (100x/45k), Expert Transmutation (110x/32k), Competent Mount (Horse) (26x/16k), Competent Etiquette (26x/29k), Competent Detection (26x/19k), Competent Discipline (30x/25k), Competent Meditation (30x/15k), Competent Persuasion (26x/16k), Competent Linguistics (26x/15k), Untrained Teaching

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge:
Meditation x 3
Endurance x 2
Transmutation - The initiation transmutes the initiate
Transmutation - Ether can corrode materials
Transmutation - Ether can bolster armor
Transmutation - Ether can be turned into light
Transmutation - Ether can restore transmuted items
Transmutation - It is important to study material's qualities
Transmutation - Sensations can be qualities
Transmutation - Transmuted items decay over time
Transmutation - Items are transmuted by being immersed in a field of ether
Transmutation - Transmuted items may have flaws

Victor Knowledge: Detection x2
Meditation x2
Research (Specialism: Arcane Theory): Defiance: All Defiers are initiated by being consumed by an element
Teaching x6
Transmutation (Initiation): Initiating for the second time
Transmutation (Initiation): What happens during the initiation
Transmutation (Initiation): Affects people differently
Transmutation (Ether Missile): Part of the initiation

Non-skill:
Balthazar Black: I initiated him into Transmutation
Loot: Balthazar Black initiated into Transmutation, gets his mage papers for Melrath, and he and Victor get a pair of Echo Scrolls to stay in communication.
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: None.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes (Transmutation)

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[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Rivers of Molten Red
City/Area: Faldrass
Notes/Warnings: People trying to stop a lava river.
Balthazar Skills Used: Defiance (Master), Rupturing (Master), Discipline (Expert), Mediation (Expert), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Tactics (Competent), Leadership (Competent)
Ari'sora Skills Used: Endurance: Competent (26/250 exp, 31 knowledges), Flying: Expert (76/250 exp, 34 knowledges), Negotiation: Unskilled (0/250 exp, 0 knowledges), Strength: Novice (25/250 exp, 11 knowledges)

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge:
Leadership x 4
Flying x 3
Tactics x 4

Ari'sora Knowledge:
Endurance: x 2
Flying: x 4
Negotiation: offering something in exchange for getting someone to do what you want them to do
Strength: x 4

Loot: None
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable. (Probably something for helping with the relief effort)
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience?: Yes (Rupturing and Defiance)

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[Rorom]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Taking Passengers to Immortal's Tongue
City/Area: Scalvoris
Notes/Warnings: Scary story about pirates!
Skills Used:

Requested Rewards:

Knowledge: Rorom

Skills Used: Seafaring (Competent), Leadership (Novice), Linguistics (Novice), Storytelling (Novice), Navigation (Competent), Discipline (Novice)

Skill Knowledges:

Seafaring x 4
Leadership x 2
Storytelling: x 5



Knowledge: Yeva

Skills Used: Baking (Novice), Running (Novice), Endurance (Novice), Linguistics (Expert), Rakahi (Fluent), Storytelling (Competent), Negotiation (Novice), Socialization (Novice), Etiquette (Novice)

BAKING
A Novice Should Follow the Recipe Exactly
How to Make Simple Sugar Icing
Wait Until Sweets Are Cooled Before Icing

RUNNING
Being Tardy is a Great Motivator to Move Faster
Tie Your Shoes Before Racing Off

ENDURANCE
Pushing Through After a Poor Night's Sleep
Inexperienced Runners Will Feel Pain

LINGUISTICS
Translation in Real Time is a Challenging

STORYTELLING
Project Your Voice
Consider Your Audience's Engagement

Loot: Barrel of Pickled Fish, Cinnamon Rolls, some crumbs
Renown: 10 for Yeva for performing/storytelling to a large crew.

Loot: For Rorom: -1 wp for the pickled fish.
Injuries/Overstepping: none
Renown: Yes for Yeva performing to a large crew. Maybe something for Rorom buying a masterwork ship.
Wealth Points: nope
Collaboration: yes
Magic Experience?: no

[Dandelion]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Beneath the Trees
City/Area: Rharne, the Stormlands
Notes/Warnings:
Skills Used: Fieldcraft (comp), Detection (nov), Stealth (nov), Animal husbandry (nov)

Requested Rewards:
Knowledge:
Detection: the sense of being watched
Detection: look up and down, not just at eye level
Stealth: walking quietly
Stealth: armour counteracts skill
Animal Husbandry: sudden moves startle animals
Fieldcraft: guiding someone less skilled

Nonskill
Location: Ywyngyll Forest
Creature: Fenrix


Loot: -
Injuries/Overstepping: -
Renown: Reviewer's discretion
Wealth Points: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience?: No

[Balthazar Black]

Rewards Requested

Thread Name: Collecting Coins in the Earth
City/Area: Rharne, Earth Quarter
Notes/Warnings: Unarmed fight between two men in a tavern famous for harlots.
Balthazar Skills Used: Rupturing (Master), Attunement (Master), Unarmed Combat (Master), Discipline (Expert), Mediation (Expert), Strength (Competent), Endurance (Competent), Socialization (Competent), Tactics (Competent), Acrobatics (Competent), Mount (Competent), Intelligence (Master), Torture (Untrained)

Requested Rewards:
Balthazar Knowledge:
Intelligence - Tavern Token System in Rharne
Intelligence - Raven Hound works at the Harlot 'n' Hound
Torture - The throat is a weak spot for most people
Torture - Ithecal can feel it when you hurt their tail
Strength x 2

Loot: Harlot 'n' Hound Tavern Token (Ebony Token)
Injuries/Overstepping: If applicable.
Renown: If applicable.
Wealth Points: None.
Collaboration: Not this time.
Magic Experience?: Nope.